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Re: The Stars shined light

love is in the air with sora and sutaa
alright roxas is in the story whoo hoo
i hope kairi is okay
i like your story alot i can't wait for what happens next maybe roxas kisses auxtas
 

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Well....here goes my fav chapter! Hope you like it!

Chapter 7: Flames and Waves

My life feel like it's moving closer to the future, to the path that i'll be going down for a long time, with my friends by my side. I'm finally feeling truly happy. I wish that I never have to leave, that I can stay in this moment forever. That time stops but everyone can move and talk and live happily. That's how I want to feel forever, on Destiny Islands and my home Golden Rocks. I'll never forget this.

"So now what?" I asked while everyone was in the gummi ship. Seriously, what can we do now? We've gone almost everywhere, and fought every heartless that we've seen, gotten some encounters with Auxtas but... were not finished.

"Umm... well lets see... how 'bout finding Kingdom Hearts? Maybe Kairi and Ro are there!" I think I know where it is... maybe.

"Isn't it in Twilight Town?" Everyone stared at me like I was crazy.

"What are you talking about? Kingdom Hearts probably isn't there, and how would you know?" Good question.

"Well just a thought. I wonder what happened to it." I crossed my arms and closed my eyes. Riku looked at me like I was some freak, and Sora was spaced out probably thinking of food or something. He could be so stupid sometimes.


In Twilight Town, Axel and Roxas were talking. They were looking down like something had happened, even though something did.

"So, what do you want me to do? Try to destroy Sutaa? Why? I thought that you and her-" Axel started.

"No, it's not real. She just doesn't know. Namine helped. I was just there before her world was destroyed. But now that I've talked to her and that I see her fighting so hard to find me it's just... I can't kill her. I don't want to. I'll tell her the truth, but then you need to do this." Roxas sighed and felt really guilty that he led her on. Those moments were great on the beach but if he wanted to survive as a nobody, she had to go.

"Fine. Let's go, I have a plan. If this works, Auxtas will dissapear."

"Finally."


"Great, still no Kairi or Ro or Kingdom Hearts. Why can't we find them?! Ugh it's tiring trying to find them." Well it was. As much as I wanted to find them I also just wanted to take a break. Everyone was tired. Goofy was partially drooling, Donald's eyelids were half closed, Sora was just out, and Riku was the only awake enough to still listen to me. Each world got harder as we seeled the keyholes.

"Yeah I agree. We need a break, right Sora?" A loud snore escaped his mouth. Time to go back. We helped everyone back to our rooms and finally feel asleep.


Roxas had reached Hollow Bastion. Axel was standing in a cleared off area waiting for Sutaa to come.

"Roxas you better go. If she does win, then you have to be ready to fight. Go back to Twilight Town, I'll open a path. See ya later." Then he nodded to Roxas and Roxas left without a word.

Everyone was waking up and getting up, I felt so much better. Ok, time to... go to umm... here?

"Sora I want to look around before we leave. Do you want to come?" Sora followed me to a large clearing. A man with a black coat.

"That's the guy that destroyed my world, that took Ro away from me!" He took off his hood and spiky red hair fell out.

"Axel?! Wait what are you doing?" I looked at Sora like he was crazy, how does he know this jerk?

"It seem that I destroyed both of your worlds, so now I'm here to destroy one of you. Right Sutaa?" My keyblade appeared and I glared at him. He was the one.

"Really well too bad for you that you'll lose." I looked at Sora and he grabbed me. "No, this is my battle. Go far away and tell everyone that I'm just taking a moment. Please. Bye Sora." I kissed him and turned to fight the person that I hated so much. Sora took one last look and ran off.

I ran at him and took a swing, but I couldn't hit him. It was like I couldn't hit him, even though he could totally hit me. Why couldn't I hit him?

He had flames, I need water. Waves. Ocean shores, and lakes. Streams that became rivers and seas. I needed water. Suddenly, I turned into something else. I was all water, even my kayblade looked like it was made of water. I smiled and ran at him. A perfect hit.


Sora ran over to everyone but instead of saying that she was fine he said the exact oppisite. "S-Sutaa is fighting Axel! We have to hurry and help her!!" So all of them ran to the area she was in.

The battle was almost over. And I was winning. He stopped and panted heavily. I was finished, so I returned to my normal self, no more water. Then he spoke.

"Sutaa, I have to tell you something." Sora had appeared with everyone behind me. My hand shot up to block them off.

"Every memory of Ro is fake. You were never raised on Golden Rock, and every time you went to see the gysers and get ice cream was fake. You've been fighting for something that dosn't exist. The only real memory that you have is when I destroyed your world. You have a different past that was deleted by Namine. If you really want to find Ro, then go through this door. He's there." A tear slid down my cheek and I sat down on the ground.

"I-I don't believe you! Why should I?! My memories are real! I know my past!" He shook his head and started to fade away.

"If only you really knew..." Was his last words that he spoke. Then he was gone. Sora helped me up and looked at me with his dark blue eyes. He looked a bit like Ro.

"Let's go in. I have a feeling that Kairi, Ro, Kingdom Hearts and an explaination are in that world." Were my memories truly fake?


Roxas was sitting on the clock towers ledge and thought of Sutaa. Maybe there was another way.

"I'm ready."



Tada!! The next chapter is the final one!
 

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Yeah Sutaa story is sad, but her knowing that is REALLY important.
 

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Cool! More chapters yay xD
 

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Here it goes... the last chapter of this story. I have a bunch of little short stories and a commercial, and then the sequal!

Chapter 8: Twilight's Beginning

My own existance- where was I from? My memories, fake? What if what Axel said was true? Why am I still here? Will I dissapear? Kingdom Hearts seemed so distant and far away but I needed to know who I am. I need to get there. Ro, can't be not my friend. H-he spent every waking moment with me until that day when my home was destroyed and he flew up into the freaky giant orb. If I don't have a past... Then what am I?


"We need to step in! If we don't we might never find Kingdom Hearts and Ro! I need to find out who I am!" I hollered as Sora held me back. I needed to go in, and he wasn't letting us!

"Sutaa, are you sure?" I nodded and broke free to run into the portal. Everyone ran in with me. Darkness was all around us... and I saw something up ahead that made me feel better, a person. He opened up another portal and we ran into it. Then we were in another world.

"Sora, where are we?" I asked staring up at the sky where a giant heart shaped moon was floating. In the distance a tower was visible and bell rang. Sora looked puzzled. Did he know where we were?

"Sutaa, didn't you say it was in Twilight Town?"

"Ya...."

"This is Twilight Town! And there's Kingdom Hearts, up there!" He pointed to the moon. "How did you know that?"

"The statement just popped into my head! I don't know where it came from!" The town was swarming with heartless and nobodies. Jeez... if Ro was here-

"Kairi!!!! You're here!" Sora exclaimed erasing my thoughts. I looked up to see a girl with reddish hair and a contented look on her face. Not a happy face.

"Yeah sure. Have you forgotten our fight? I see that you really did fall in love with her. Like you said." Riku raised his eyebrows, and Sora bit his lip. "You were able to kiss her but never kissed me! I mean we were only gonna do the paoupu fruit! Ugh," She scoffed and Sora started explaining the kiss to Riku. He was starting to stutter and try to explain it to Kairi. Then I spoke.

"He wanted to go back to Destiny Islands to make up with you. But then he realized that it was gone and he was really really really sad. Then he gave me a friendship charm and I kissed him for a thank you. It was nothing romantic, we're sorry that you saw it differently." Sora wasn't meant to be with me. He was always with Kairi, and I was just helping him save her. He was helping me save Ro. He pulled me aside.

"Why did you say that? Don't you love me? I broke up with Kairi and I love you!" I shook my head and he held my hands.

"No, I do love you but you were always meant with Kairi. No matter what. There was no prophacy that stated that you would fall in love with me. Sora please I just want to be friends." He saw my eyes, green and sad and then said quitely,

"Ok," then we walked closer to the station, the six of us. We fought many nobodies to get there, and when we did something stopped us in our tracks. There was a giant swarm of nobodies, hard ones too. This must be where Ro is!

"Sora, you take the thousand on your left, Donald and Kairi take the thousand on your right, Riku take the center right, and Goofy take the center left. I'll take the center. If we die I have one question to ask you guys... what's your last names?" But they ran in before answering. Darn it. I let out a battle cry and ran in with them. I was immeadeatly grabbed by a gloved hand, and it pulled me back.

"Hey let me go I need to fight! Ro is in there!" I whipped around to look at the stupid person who grabbed me.

"Auxtas! Let me go! Don't I already hate you?" I saw her smile and dig into my arm. I felt tired and sad and upset and angry, then happy, cheerful, ecstatic, then confused. I put my hand on my forehead, my headache was killing me. Then I had a nightmare.

Ro and I were sitting on the shores of home when he dissapeared and a giant wave crashed down on me. I was dragged into darkness and I felt like someone had stabbed me over and over again. Then I looked and saw Sora and everyone else dying. They were fading away in the battle. I screamed in pain, and in horror. I couldn't move, I was fadign away, I was losing. I cried and suddenly was back to reality. But that was so real. I felt awful.

Auxtas smiled and let go. I was laying on the ground and I heard Sora saying my name. She threw my keyblade at me and pulled me up.

"Now let me tell you something that maybe Axel didn't elaborate on-" I spit out blood. "He told you about your memories of Ro and you still went to go save the guy that isn't really your friend. You never thought that maybe I was here. And that I could snap you like a twig. Like this, see?" I grabbed my keyblade and waited for a chance to fight.

"But here's the thing- I need to kill you to destroy Kingdom Hearts." I snarled.

"Why would you need me to do that?!"

"Because, you were made out of Kingdom Hearts. That's why you control so much untapped power, and have such a strong heart. Its because you were made of one. A long time ago, the hearts in kingdom hearts became greatly worried. The keyblade weilders they sent to protect, it let the darkness get into it. So they thought of making a guardian to protect it forever. They put half of the power into making a being. When she got older she would get a keyblade and destroy the darkness in each world, and reunite with Kingdom Hearts. Namine erased those memories by order of us and gave you new memories of Ro and Golden Rock. You aren't really a person. You are Kingdom Hearts."

What the heck was she talking about?

"Holy shitake mushrooms. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!! I'M ONLY ME!! NOT KIGDOM HEARTS!I'M REAL AND YOU'RE NOT! YOU DON'T EVEN EXIST! I NEVER TURNED INTO A HEARTLESS! YOU AREN'T REALLY THERE YOU ARE FAKE!!! FAKE FAKE FAKE FAKE FAKE FAKE FAKE! JUST DISSAPEAR AND LET ME FIND RO BEFORE YOU KILL HIM! AHHH!" I sighed and saw her start to fade away. Was that all that it took? A stupid saying. Please just dissapear.

"Maybe you shouldn't be talking to me about Ro." And she dissapeared. I ran over to the middle of the clearing, and I smiled. He was here, with Sora?

"Ro!" I shouted over to him.

"Sutaa!" I heard him say.

"Ro?" That was Sora.

"Sora?" I asked.

"Roxas!" He turned to Ro.

"Roxas?" I turned to look at him.

"Sutaa!" Sora said to me. "What are you talking about! This is my nobody, Roxas!"

"No this is Ro my best friend! Ro tell him that!" Ro/Roxas looked nervous.

"No Sutaa everything that was told to you was real. I'm Roxas. Sora's nobody. Please believe me. I don't want to hurt you any more." I cried and he ran to hug me. Why was this happening to me? I needed to know that my life was real. That I was real.

I ran into the crowd of nobodies to fight.


"Sora I need you to do something." Roxas asked. Then Roxas whispered in his ear and told him something. Soras mouth dropped.

"Ok I'm ready for the truth now!" I screamed to the sky. "Tell me!" I whipped my head around to Roxas and mouthed the words no. Then I think I said it out loud.

"NO!!!" I looked as Sora plunged his keyblade into Roxas and Roxas fell onto the ground. My feet ran to him and I got down on my knees. He smiled and I started to sob.

"Why *sob* are you *sob* fading away? *sobbing harder*" He was fading. I can't let that happen. Please no. I needed to talk to him.

"Sutaa, never let the darkness win. Never fade away, so that the stars will shine light instead of darkness. I'm sorry."

No, he couldn't have gone, not like this! Not by betrayal. Not by Sora! I lifted up his head and watched as every part of him went away. Forever. Sora was still there. I was so mad at him, and I hated him so much.

"Sora, I-I'm s-so mad at y-you. Why would you do this to me? To Ro your nobody! To my friend! I can't believe you! I needed you to comfort me and what do you do, kill him! AHH! Angryness!!!" I looked around everyone was back from fighting. We had won. They saw everything. I looked off the edge of the station. Darkness. But then I opened a path to Kingdom Hearts. A large door appeared. If I was supposed to become it, then I have to... I saw a large cliff inside.

Sora was calling me, but I wasn't listening. I grabbed my keyblade, and pulled it up to lock the door. I felt awful and upset. I walked in, and fell off the cliff into darkness.


Sora ran off after her, and Kairi stopped him. He didn't want her to go. A flash of light happened and Sora was sitting on a beach in an unknown world.

I was falling and ready to become Kingdom Hearts. But I fell on a sandy ground where waves rolled in and the sun gleamed off the mountains. Roxas was sitting beside me.

"Sutaa... I have to tell you something. I told Sora to kill me. I was told to destroy you and if I didn't then I would dissapear. I couldn't be whole. But I needed you to live, to save everyone. I love you, but I'm a nobody, I will always be with you just remember that. Always." Then I looked at him and he became Sora. I'm home. I hugged him and looked into the sunset. I know where I should be. Who I am. I am the Stars, that were shining light.

End of Volume 1!

Now I have a bunch of other things so I'm gonna work on that!
 
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O_O Wow, I was not expecting that twist there, er, several twists in fact, but I liked this ending a whole lot ^_^ Sometimes the transitions were a bit quick, but it was still very enjoyable, yes, very, very nice.

At least they ended up together ;-;
 

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Yep, Sora and Sutaa are on Golden Rock and Kairi and Riku are on Destiny Islands, Donald and Goofy are in Disney Castle.
 

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O_O Hold up.....I think I read wrong then.....*re-reads*


Where does it say that? I thought Sutaa and Ro ended up together, somewhere....
 

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No Sutaa saw Roxas turn into Sora and then realized that she was home.
 

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That was really good!!!
 

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Thank yous!! I'm happy that so many people like my fanfic heres whats gonna start the little stories!

The Stars that shine light: Epilogue: Part 1: Wait... so now what?

The lakes waves rolled into the sandy shores of Golden Rock. I sat down and wondered where Sora was, he was probably exploring around the forests and gysers. I bet he misses his home, but how can we get there?

"Hey Sutaa! Whatcha doing?" He asked me as he sat down on the beach. I smiled.

"Thinking... about stuff." He dosen't want me to worry about him, so I can let him know that I am.

"Riku, Kairi, and me right? It's ok if you are, because I do miss them." He stared out at the lake, his eyes filled with content.

"So, now what do we do? I would like to see Destiny Islands when it's not being destroyed, and I would love to stay here and be in my beautiful world." He turned his head and looked at me.

"Well then we could use a Gummi ship to get around... and then we could switch worlds every holiday. I could bring Kairi and Riku too." I shook my head and sighed.

"If you didn't notice we don't have a gummi ship." Then he randomly ran off inside the the house and came out with pen, paper, and a glass bottle. A letter in a bottle?

"Dear Donald and Goofy,

Sutaa and I are stuck on Golden Rock and we want a gummi ship so that we can go to Desatiny Islands. We need one very quickly. Thank you.
-Sora and Sutaa"

I saw him write onto the paper and stuff it into the bottle. He smiled at me and ran off. I started to run after him until he was at a river.

"What are you doing?! Don't run off like that, there are bears here!" He laughed and smiled.

"All rivers lead to the ocean, and this has worked twice now so it's not bad to try." My shoulders shrugged and he placed the bottle into the river and it flew away downstream. We looked at it and crossed our fingers. I hope this works.
 

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Aw what a cute Epilouge :D

As for the fic of a whole:

It has progressed into something nice and I can't wait to see if you write more (since you hinted at parts that this is only part 1).
I do wish you had put a bit more description so that I could envision things in my head better but I guess I let my imagination do most of the work.
Plus, its not too hard to fix it.
But as I said before. Its a cute, and nice fic and I really did enjoy reading it :D
 
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