The speech was pretty good Grandsword, I can also understand how the people of The Land of Departure could be tired of the war, what with being neutral and what not. But I just wanna say be careful, man. Your whole post, while it met the necessary requirements, was almost all exposition accept for the beginning and end. Just make sure to keep that in check.Also, I don't know what he means by Keyblade rebellion, as both factions of Wielders are established forms of (dis)order, as in, they aren't rebelling against anything, they're just stuck in war. Other than those qualms it works pretty nicely. Just bare in mind the amount of speech you have compared to actions, maybe have him pause for dramatic effect, or the crowd begins to speak among themselves and Nihilus orders them to be quiet. Also, there hasn't been any indication of what Nihilus has done to be able to hold such a level or authority.As a post itself, I liked it besides those little things xD