Well this should be good. We see the man who turns into a monster.
Thanks I know lol this is going to be fun to write
Ooh cool new story!!!! *coughudateyourotherstoriescough* but I can't wait to reaad more.
I forgotten my other stories sparks. lol
wow, so short yet it said so much, well to me. I LOVE IT! Write more John! ♥
I know it wasn't suppose to be long. Lol maybe i should havemade it longer
It's nice to see another story from you. The Prologue is too short for a multi-chapter story in my opinion, but it's still good.
Thanks reverie i haven't forgotten my other story just stuck at it. So i made this. Sorry the prologue wasn't suppose to be long lol
I did spot a few grammar mistakes, but it was pretty good nonetheless. I really like how you incorporated KH in this story.
Sorry ventus i'll try not to make to much grammar mistakes. thanks for reading
Here I go people
Chapter 1: The Starting Point
The sun was still asleep in the world of the Land of Departure. A huge castle-like building stood on top of grassy mountains. It seemed the building had chains coming out of it and wrapping around four grassy mountains that circle around it. It was like the building was being held up by the mountians. Whoever had made the building truly did a amazing job.
One of the many rooms of the building had a young man around the age sixteen sitting on a bed. It seem the room belong to him. It had a desk that had papers scattered all over it, a window that had a great view of the grassy mountains, a shelf full of books most likely about the keyblade wars and other related keyblade stories. There was also a a small picture of the young man, with a another person sitting on his desk. There was also a clock on his wall, the bed he was sitting on, and a star shape lamp.
The young man looked towards the clock on the wall. It had now just turned 4:00 a.m. He let out a sigh and got off the bed and headed out the door. Once he was out of his room. He was now in a huge white and gold corridor. He looked to left seeing no one in sight and then to the right which was like the left. He shook his head and walked down the corridor to the right. As he walked down the corridor he look kinda of tired as if not wanting to go to his destination. He slapped his face abit to wake himself up and continued on.
"Hey, Xehanort wait up," said a voice calling out his name.
Xehanort was the young man name. He had long silver spiky hair, a black sleeveless shirt, black wrist bands, black baggy pants, and black boots. If there was a all wearing black clothing contest then Xehanort would win hands down. Xehanort turned towards the voice that called his name. He saw a young man around his age coming towards him. He had a black hair tied into a short, high topknot, with one small bang falling to the right side of his face. He wore a purple sleeveless shirt, he wore white bandage wristbands, a brown belt, red baggy shorts, and wore gold and black armor boots.
"Eraqus late as always I see," said Xehanort.
"It isn't my fault I forgot today we were starting training early," replied Eraqus.
Xehanort just sighed and continued to walk down the corridor this time with Eraqus by his side. The didn't take the two long to made it outside of the building into the front yard. There they saw a man wearing a white hooded cloak. Both Xehanort and Eraqus bowed to the white hooded man. The man bowed back to the boys.
"Sorry were late master someone forgot we were starting early," said Xehanort looking towards Eraqus.
"Like I said before, I forgot. Can't you just give me a break!" said Eraqus alittle annoyed by Xehanort's comment.
The two boys glared at each other. The man cleared his throat making the boys draw their attention back to him. "It matters not. Today we have to train hard boys," said the man.
"You are correct master. Slacking off is not a option if me and Eraqus want to become keyblade masters," said Xehanort in serious tone.
"I see someone is determined to become master," said the man looking at Xehanort and then turning his gaze to Eraqus. Eraqus scratch his head and soon noticed that there master was looking at him. "Anyway, will we be training? Unless you want to waste more time," said the man with a sarcastic tone.
Xehanort summoned his keyblade to his side. It had a double-edged appearance with a spiky black guard resembling demonic wings, a horned lion-like head just above the handle, two barbed shafts and teeth resembling a battle axe split into a three almost claw-like protrusions. It also contained two demonic blue eyes; one above the handle and the other one on the head. The keychain of the keyblade was a black charm with a demonic blue eye.
Eraqus looked at Xehanort who had just summoned his keyblade. He soon summon his own to his side. It had a dark gray shaft that tapers outwards at the ends and has a boxy guard, made up of a small light gray boxes and copper rods. The teeth were in the shape of an "E", the first letter in his name. The keychain of the keyblade was a badge shaped like a heart of sorts.
"Alright my apprentices. Let us begin."
Xehanort or known as Master Xehanort in the future. Right now he is a keyblade apprentice and wants to become a keyblade master. His skill with a keyblade is simply amazing. He a force to be reckon with when he is using his keyblade. Unlike his future self he has not yet summit to the dark side. He very serious about becoming a keyblade master unlike his friend Eraqus who seems to not take the training as serious as he does. Xehanort seems to lock himself in his room after training is done. Reading about the keybladers back in the day. Wondering what were the keyblade masters like in that time. Just because he is serious some times he isn't like that the alot. Xehanort does has a sense of humor and a friendly side as well.
Eraqus or known as Master Eraqus in the future. He is a friend of Xehanort and just like him he is a apprentice keyblader. Unlike his friend Eraqus is laid back and is no rush to gain his keyblade master status. He tends to be late when it comes to training unlike Xehanort who is on time. Eraqus's keyblade skills is nothing to laugh at. He can hold his own during a fight. Even though he is not that good as Xehanort he still able to tie against his friend. He seems to take alot of naps while not training.