there used to be a fanfic here, but it sucked so i deleted it...sorry guys :'(
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Fanfiction ► Kingdom hearts: the beginnings
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its my first story, so dont blame me if it sucks ^_^
This REALLY needs paragraphs.
anything other than just that? you know, POSITIVE things are accepted too ¬_¬
Well, here's the thing:
Making paragraphs (and having an empty line between them), makes it much easier for the readers. When we see one massive wall of text, it is very discouraging. It looks like a pain to read, and the lack of paragraphs all together makes it look like everything is blurring together.
So it isn't about negative/positive comments. It's about presenting the story in a way that encourages people to read it in the first place.
Making paragraphs (and having an empty line between them), makes it much easier for the readers. When we see one massive wall of text, it is very discouraging. It looks like a pain to read, and the lack of paragraphs all together makes it look like everything is blurring together.
So it isn't about negative/positive comments. It's about presenting the story in a way that encourages people to read it in the first place.
Okay first thing, space out your work. No one will read it.
yeah...told you guys it would suck..... :'(
Hey hey, none of that. You just think to work on it abit. That's all.
well, ive deleted it, cos it sucks :'(
Hey man, come back later. No one gets it right the first time.
Yeah. Please come back. I do't even know what this is. And the title seems interesting.
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