Fanfiction ► Kingdom Hearts: Diablos Ornamentums

[TwilightRiku_13]

Hooray!!! A new update!!! That was a really good chapter. The Chimney Sweeps, they're from the movie "Mary Poppins", if I'm not mistaken (one of my favorite movies, by the way). So, Sora is hiding himself from everyone? Wonder why? And who is the Troubadour? He seems like a very interesting character; can't wait to hear more about him. Anyway, great job as always, Merlin, and I look forward to your next update.

 

[Xuan]

Eh, Sora in hiding? Too bad, too bad. Where's Kairi? XD

 

[Orion]

There was an update, and I wasn't made aware of it?

What total utter blasphemy is this?

Sets things up nicely and simply, with the mystery and hook to continue reading a first chapter always needs.

 

[Lanydx]

Well well what a nice find.

 

[mileycyrus13]

nice chapter as always, Merlin....
just who is the boy and his sister....?

 

[Lanydx]

Mybie Sora and Kiari had kids?

 

[mileycyrus13]

good guess...
the girl that said 'lazy bum' might be S & K's daughter or maybe kairi herself.
might be a flash back as well...
you never know

wait... I't can't be a flash back...

And also, the boys father might be sora.
"he winced whenever he moved his right hand". The hand which I think Aloz cut deeply in the Final Battle in Destati.

Anyway, I seem too be ranting on too much, don't you think? :$

 

[Orion]

!

Maybe just a bit...

I think we're all just waiting for an update, some questions answered, and more probably raised.

 

[mileycyrus13]

Yes, let's wait.
Merlin, Please Raise the next chapter.

 

[Merlin326]

For all of those waiting for the next update, it is very nearly done. however, while some of your questions might be answered with this update, others will remain for a little while.

also, sorry for the inconsistant updates this fanfic around, i've been quite busy this school year. and i've been having a difficult time trying to figure out how to begin this story. i have a lot of great ideas already in mind (too many, once again), but they dont come into play until later in the story. bear with me.

with all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[mileycyrus13]

we get it.
Don't worry, take as much time as you need.
we'll just find something else to do in our spare time.

 

[Orion]

Don't forget more questions raised...

 

[mileycyrus13]

...and more theories too.
Dammit!

 

[Orion]

WHERE HAVE YOU GONE, MERLIN!!!!

 

[mileycyrus13]

WHERE HAVE YOU GONE, MERLIN!!!!

Knock knock........
Merlin.....................
Where are you.........?
*Hopeless sigh*
He's missing........

 

[Lanydx]

He's busy

 

[Xuan]

OREA! *fly punches*

 

[Orion]

DYNAMIC ENTRRRYYYYYY

*dynamic entries*

See what happens when you leave, Merlin?

 

[Lanydx]

Rasengen!

 

[mileycyrus13]

MERLIN!!!!!!!
WE SHALL ABANDON THIS FAN FIC IF YOU DON'T ANSWER!!!
(or will we.... Probably not)