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OPENING NARRATION
Nothing just happens, everything comes from a chain of events. These chains are either represent a life or an object. These chains are interconnecting with other chains and each link having an important role. To take or change one of these links could have either a good or a bad effect on the rest of the chain and those interlocked with it. This tapestry of chains is the past and present of the universe or rather universes and it sets the coarse for the future. Most people would like to change alot of things, some of great disaster, some of there own regrets, and some of their own gain. Let's find out what happens when we alter it... [???]
PROLOGUE
Things since me and Riku returned home eight months ago are very much the same, same beach, same town, and the same old parent's. My parent don't really care much for the keyblade, they say it's affecting my grades. Riku's parent's... you know what I'm not evening going there. Somethings did change when we were gone though. Kairi tried out for cheerleading and made it. Wakka's captain of our biltz ball team. Pop's got some more workers for his shrimping boat industry.
King Mickey perposed a Worlds Council, which is still in the development stages. Some people a getting an army fearing another heartless or nobody invasion, because star are starting to disappear again.Oh yeah and me and Kairi are dating. [Sora]
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what do you think of my fan-fic intro so far good or bad be honest. and i added a cultural reference can you find it?
Nothing just happens, everything comes from a chain of events. These chains are either represent a life or an object. These chains are interconnecting with other chains and each link having an important role. To take or change one of these links could have either a good or a bad effect on the rest of the chain and those interlocked with it. This tapestry of chains is the past and present of the universe or rather universes and it sets the coarse for the future. Most people would like to change alot of things, some of great disaster, some of there own regrets, and some of their own gain. Let's find out what happens when we alter it... [???]
PROLOGUE
Things since me and Riku returned home eight months ago are very much the same, same beach, same town, and the same old parent's. My parent don't really care much for the keyblade, they say it's affecting my grades. Riku's parent's... you know what I'm not evening going there. Somethings did change when we were gone though. Kairi tried out for cheerleading and made it. Wakka's captain of our biltz ball team. Pop's got some more workers for his shrimping boat industry.
King Mickey perposed a Worlds Council, which is still in the development stages. Some people a getting an army fearing another heartless or nobody invasion, because star are starting to disappear again.Oh yeah and me and Kairi are dating. [Sora]
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what do you think of my fan-fic intro so far good or bad be honest. and i added a cultural reference can you find it?
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