I want to write about dumb thing's that i thouhgt should have been in kingdom hearts, so it's my fantasy of kh ok.......
Fanfiction ► kingdom hearts after math
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CHAPTER1 [In station of the calling..sora is falling.]but quickly regain's thought and open's his eye's .finally step's to the floor..releaseing a huge light reveling a portrait of riku and himself.there faceing each other.sora think's about this for a good min.and from the corner of his eye he see's a dusk appear.with great speed and skill sora flip's over the dusk and slash's it with great force.the dusk is defeated but thousend's and thousend's of dusk confront him.with no fear in his eye's he exchange's a tuff look leting them know he's ready for'um. after a good long and ferce battle there's still about a hundred left,sora is completely exuasted..but he's still not givin up!but realizing this the end and cannot go on he look's for some sort of solution,and he's got one!use the power of light!duh!so that is what he did he quickly jump's in the air building up light,...growing bigger and bigger.....until the time is right .sora wait'suntil the remaining duskclode in and BOOM!laser of light flare every ware!.and as quick as they came they went...come back later for the next chapter..pm me if you got's any comment's and be real!peace...o and i'm axel'roxxa 123 by the way
It's all slurred together and it doesnt make much sense, oh, and dont double post.
fine i'm not writing any more*waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah*i hate you all
Ahem. Maybe if you read a few popular fanfics, you'd get an idea of how it should be done. No offence, of course. 
stil i'm not writing any more!*again..waaaaaaaaaaaaaha...sniffle*
Well I can't say any negative things to you but if you put much of imagination and details on your mind you could come with a story. When I write a story, a lot of things in my mind pop up and I don't where to start. When this happens and I start writing my story, none of my paragraphs make sense and all of them are sometimes "out of order". English class is damn helpful, it's no wonder it required for me in high school for four years. xD If you really wanted to write a fan fiction. Start a setting, create a plot, be detailed about your story as much as you can to give a reader the full imagination from your story.
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