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Fanfiction ► Keyblade Wars: Epilogue



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Whether the points were valid or not, as I said myself that most of them were, she continued to make mistakes of her own, some of which were no different than those that he made in the fic.

Oh, and how did everyone love that ironic little contradictory statement in her final post? I'm the one wasting my time in an arguement on a Sunday night? Was she not taking part in it, as well? Is she somehow better because she decided she'd run from it, calling it "doing something with her life"? Call me pathetic because I was involved in an arguement about something supposedly meaningless only if you're not involved in the same arguement.
 

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Blindfolded-Unknown at the risk of them closing this down cause of all the spam no offense to all who were talking id advice u to start writting and new chapter not rushing u just encouraging a early fic
 

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Blindfolded-Unknown said:
I will be posting all the parts here instead... Here's part 2 enjoy :)

Keyblade Wars
Chapter 2: Key

The three knights waited in a circle watching as the Leader approached he was now only a few feet from them they all tensing slightly, before relaxing they all bowing there heads to honor him he glancing to each one of them his face being hidden by a brown hood leaving only his mouth visable.

"The Keyblades... Nioez, Roldul, Alrene" "Leader" said as he took a step toward Nioez the knight that was standing on the gummi ship just minutes before he had shown up and a voice echoed through Nioez's head much like it did when he drew the "Kingdom Key" from the ground. The voice rang out "Sora" Nioez turned his head up to the Leader but, he already had his eyes adverted to the other two.

Roldul kneeled on the ground at "Leaders" feet as if to say "Im not worthy" and layed his hands on the sand keeping his eyes narrowed at the ground, he was glad that "Leader" could not s ee his face through the helmet or else he would see his scared expression. Roldul looked up at "Leader" to see a purple glowing eye staring at him from the darkness in the hood as a voice similar to the one Nioez had just heard rang out in his head. "Riku" The voice said and Roldul felt his knees weaken at the cold voice of "Leader" in his head.

Alrene took a step back from "Leader" noticing the expressions on Nioez's and Roldul's face when he looked at them and she turned her back quickly looking to the ground hoping that he would not turn her back around. After a few moments of dead silence Alrene worked up the courage to turn around to see if he was still there. She turned her head just enough over her shoulder to see behind her and spotted the purple glowing eye and a peircing sharp scream went through her head forcing her to her knees her helmet felt as if it was vibrating. This voice was not like Nioez's and Roldul's it was a scream... no... a moan. Someone moaning out the name "Kairi" the same name she had heard when she drew the new keyblade from the ground.

Alrene opened her eyes after the moan stopped and was greeted by a dark shadow casting over the feild. She quickly scrambled to her feet and looked up at the yellow sky looking around for the sun to see where it was blocked out and spotted something very strange. In the sky replacing the sun was a red heart glowing brightly casting a red tint over the entire valley. She must have not noticed from the black tint in her visor on her helmet. Shocked she quickly ran over to Nioez and Roldul before, noticing. "Leader" was gone! Dissapeared without a trace! But, there was no time to worry at this point in time.

Alrene shook Nioez and Roldul they squinting there eyes open before noticing the shadow on the ground around them and they all looked at the sky. Alrene had her eyes locked on the red heart shaped sun but, Nioez and Roldul had there eyes adverted at something else. Alrene turned her head and almost fell back onto the ground noticing a giant white cross in the sky it halfway across the heart shaped sun.

"What is that!" Roldul yelled breaking the dreaded silence, not even the wind was around them, no sand blowing over there suits of armor just silence. They all backed up slightly slightly the cross almost fully over the sun and Nioez fell to his knees he hitting his knee of something hard it making a loud clang and metal smashing together.

Nioez forced himself away from the cross and leaned very close to the sand so, he could see what was there over his black tint and the almost completely dark valley. He first noticed two bare footprints in the sand. They must have been "Leaders" all of them were wearing there armor with Iron boots.

Nioez felt the darkness come over them only a sliver of red light left in the entire valley. Nioez looked around quickly near the footprints then spotted something, it was a keyblade like the ones placed in the ground with a chain. It looked so much like the "Kingdom Key" only it had a golden blade in perfect condition instead of a rusted old silver one. Nioez reached for it before hearing a scream echo throughout the valley quickly looking up but, saw nothing but darkness.

Nioez backed up trying to yell out Roldul's and Alrene's name but, his voice was silenced along with the whole valley. Nioez fell onto his hand and knees looking to the ground shaking slightly, the sand that usually felt soft and warm felt like cold iron and peircing glass shards. Nioez looked up to the sky, when a familiar voice echoed through his head. "Don't be afriad... Guide the key"

To be continued...

hes had two chapters but anyway tats realy not enough just to stop cause of wat people say keep going u will find a bunch of groupys if u can just keep going
 

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i like its got good detail i feel a plot starting to connect u know sinse ur just starting and its got that misterious look on it its good man i believe if u can keep going u can make it into something great :D
 

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slinky said:
i like its got good detail i feel a plot starting to connect u know sinse ur just starting and its got that misterious look on it its good man i believe if u can keep going u can make it into something great :D

Thanks! I got a lot more good feedback then I do bad. And yeah the plots just starting and it will evolve into something great "I hope"
 
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4ever, I had dropped it, but others decided to continue, and so I responded. Pointless as it may seem to you, the arguement took its course and finished when the other left. Now, I'm done, though I don't expect you to be when you tell me how pointless the whole thing was, in a few moments.
 

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Oeru said:
(Note that this is KeybladeWielderOeru and I've simply chosen a shorter name.)

4ever, I had dropped it, but others decided to continue, and so I responded. Pointless as it may seem to you, the arguement took its course and finished when the other left. Now, I'm done, though I don't expect you to be when you tell me how pointless the whole thing was, in a few moments.

Lets not cause more Drama after we already have gotten out of some Oeru.
 
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