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Fanfiction ► Key Blade Wars: The Aftermath (Re Dub)



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Wow.... just wow. I don't have the words to describe how great chapter one was. It was... amazing. Great description, great story, great... well, everything. Keep up the great work.
 

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up tonight eh? hmm...the times almost nine here in england so over at your ends, K&S it must be what, 4-5?
i stay up late till 2 at night anyways so hopefully i dont miss it.
 

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ahhh w/e K&S you're grammar is fine and that first chapter was perfect soo i'm going to be waiting here 'til the next one!!
 

Nelo Angelo

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yeah listen to Snow. honestly she knows her stuff. if you read her fics, you'll see she is really, really good.
her constructive criticisms helped me improve my fic so take her comments on board K&S.
 

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Whoa guys let's not start a fight here! Haha I'm jk but yeah I know she's good nelo, I've been on KHI longer than her so I remember when both of our fan fics were starting so we probably both have similar experience in writing and everything. But yeah thanks for the advice snowdog.. I've never been very big on grammar besides the basics like spelling and such, but i tend to use run-on's and commas in the wrong places. I'm more about just telling a good story not so much about punction and all that but anyways I'll try to work on it but you guys will just have to bare with me until then haha :)
 

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Eh that's okies we can wait.

I'm at school 'til 6pm cos of marching band practice...WOOO!!!

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