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SL!!! Didn't anyone teach you to keep your big mouth shut!? *Sigh* I didn't want anyone to know cause it probably won't turn out any good. Halfway through updating the chapter I got writers block, I finished on a wing and prayer. But since you blabbed about it.
The story is called Give Me Your Soul. Chapter 1 is up and I'll do chapter 2 either tomorrow or Sunday for anyone here who wants to read it.
GAH!! S-sorry man, my bad. But I just checked 'em out and Avera posted on both the stories you tried. So which one did you like better Avera, Give Me Your Soul or Desting: The Fickle Mistress? What's sad is that nobody posted on Fickle Mistress so he just gave that up.
*Ahem* - *crosses arms and taps foot - Mother Goose mode full power!* Dude, we won't think any less of you for creative writing, I mean how can you expect to get better if you hide your work? I know we praise alot with little critiscm <- (spell fail) but positive reinforcement can do alot in pushing you to achieve, so when that one giant critic comes along and knocks your work six ways from Sunday, you have support to try again.
In the end it is your road, and you have to do what you want, but you do have a support system here~
And I know all about wanting to do stuff on your own. In the end it's all opinion, and I will give you good critism once I get more time in December~
Come on buddy, here we're all passionate about writing - so let's improve together~:wink:
*Mother Goose mode power down*
And I do like "Give my your Soul" over "Desting", but" Desting" has something I haven't seen or read before, so it's still intriging <-(again spell fail) It's up to you Coldman, I'll back off if you really want me to though
See~? Now Cef has gone to read them. ^_^
One more thing: Halloween chappie update - I'm sick! DAMN COLD!!! So I mainly slept through a day of working, drat, but there is a monster in there inspired by "The Thing" (1980's version) Youtube search it, I can't post it here because it is EXTREMELY GRAPHIC. And you have been warned.......
Okay Thanks SA and Cef. I just don't know what to make of my writings. I get inspired and when I consumes a lot of my thoughts I decide to write it out so I can get it out of my head for a little, but not a lot of people seemed to like 'Destiny".
Then again, the titles really suck. When it comes to thinking up titles, I'm the worst to do it.
K.h.a. (as it is) sounds cool. My titles just suck. Plus the title pretty much says what it is. It's straightforward, I like that in a title. So I'll be posting up a new chapter in both my stories tomorrow. Hope ya'll look forward to them.
That's tough with all that writing, 'member to take your time buddy~
In the spirit of Halloween gaining so much frikin' steam all of a sudden, I'll share some ghost stories of mine to slowly get y'all in the mood for the Halloween chappie.
Shonen: What no teaser? Why don't you tell them about -
Hollow Castle: *CHOMP* NOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM
Happened to my brother: Berry Patch Apartments
He was eating dinner and watching t.v. when our dog Mecho suddenly stood up. My brother thought nothing of it, until Mecho started moving like he was hunting something in the air. Curious, my brother followed Mecho's actions as our dog looked straight up, keeping close watching on nothing. My brother felt a slight push on his back - Mecho then looked dead on at our back door, and the bottom lock twisted itself up.
My brother was alone (save for Mecho >w<), and the bottom lock can only be moved from the inside.
To top it off, my grandfather's rocking chair started rocking by itself, and my brother felt a strong, strong hand on his shoulder.
Happened to my mother: Berry Patch Apartments
Something clean slapped her across her face I hope that ghost burns in hell.
Happened to me: Our new home ;-;
I was cooking noodles, very innocently cooking noodles, when the hair on my arms and neck start to stand up, it was getting really cold, but the air conditioner was on, so I thought nothing of it.
Then I feel a presence, and before I could react, a dry voice, right in my frikin' ear said "EEEEEEEEYYYYYAAAAAAAAA".....like it was trying to say "Eva" my name.
Ghosts have also sat on my brother's bed, and my mom's bed, they've messed with my hair, and made me smell perfumes after I know for sure we don't own such a fragrance (smelling perfume > creepy voice in my ear)
My little brother won't even speak to me on what they did to him, but note that none of these presences felt "evil" they just felt mischevous (although I'm not too sure about mine, hell, if it really was trying to say my name then I'm ****ing terrified ;-; )
I've been on a few ghost tours and supposedly saw a real live angel in a mirror, it looked like cloth, so I was a bit skeptic, but I've never seen cloth move like that.....At least it was pretty.
And further down the line, I'll share a very special story my older brother told me because I think it needs to get heard more.