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Noezel7

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i'm really sorry people:( my muse is against me.
*noezel spies out of the corner of her eye at her muse*
noezel:WHEN WILL YOU COOPERATE?
larka(aka the muse): as soon as you give me a pay raise my dear.
noezel:I NEVER PAY YOU!!
larka: then i think i'm over due.
noezel:-_-
 

Taokitty

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Me: Hope you catch your muse soon!
Gem:*tail flickers like a cat, lunges forward and-*
Nanala: MY BOZOKA!!!!T_T
Gem:*falls on her face*
Thea:....-_- And Gem might have caught Noezel's muse too... if Nanala didn't scream...
Nanala:*Is running away from Gem*
Gem: HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME EMBARRES MYSELF AFTER I HAD A DRAMATIC MOMENT!!!!
Me: O_O Well, we'll still be here when you update =^_^=
 

Noezel7

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a muse is something that inspires you to do something creative. although mine is on strike

Larka:NO MORE CHAPPIES UNLESS I GET BENFITS. AND THAT INCLUDES HEALTH CARE!
Noezel:Why do you need health care??No one can see you but me!!
Larka:I have my reasons....
Noezel:I'm mailing for a new muse....
Larka:T_T
 

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Lolnesss.
Your fans can be your muse!
See, we inspire you to work REALLY hard and QUICKLY finish the next chap or we'll blow your brains out!
No wait, that's not inspiration....that's blackmail.
Oh well! :D
 

Noezel7

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Well my muse, Larka decided to grace me with her presence, even if it was against her will.
*glances over at the muse tied up in the corner of the room*
Larka:You are so going to pay for this.
Noezel:I did! I had to pay for that rope
Larka:T_T

Anyway...here's the next chappy!!!

Chapter 11: Heart
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I looked down at Kairi, joy dancing in my eyes. I hugged her close, with all my might; afraid that she might disappear. I feel her pull away so she can look up at me. I see happiness in her to but there’s something more, she looked determined but about what I don’t know.


“Is it really you Kairi, or are you just a dream too?” She looked away from me, telling me that my question had hurt her feelings. I tried to pull her into another hug as an apology but she just pulled away even more.


“Sora, you have to listen to me.” I wasn’t sure why she was so intent on talking now. If she let me go now, I could give the keyblade to Yuri and we could have all the time in the world to talk. I stayed put despite what would be best.


“Do you trust me?” The question took me off guard. Why would she ask such a question. I had saved her from Ansem and made sure she was on the island when it was forming at Kingdom Hearts. It wasn’t like Kairi to question me, unless she had heard of what I had done; my dreams and Riku.


“Kairi....I would never question you but we will have plenty of time just give me a second.” I go to give Yuri the keyblade but Kairi grabs my hand, as if she wanted to stop me.


“Please Sora, if you trust me, then you can’t give your keyblade to him.” I turned my head in her direction, confusion visible on my face. Maybe she didn’t understand the situation, I mean I wouldn’t trust her giving something precious away.


“Let me explain. Yuri here is the unknown voice that gave me the keyblade. The heartless are coming after you and they know my every move. So if I don’t....”


“It’s all a lie!!” She shouted My whole body was now turned towards her. What did she mean it was all a lie. Nothing she was talking about was making sense. In a way she didn’t seem like Kairi. Kairi would never question my trust in her and Kairi would never go against what I thought was right. She had always agreed with me, knowing that I usually thought everything out and would pick the best option.


“Get away from her Sora!! She is a new trick that the heartless have developed. If you don’t give me the keyblade she will take it and kill you with your own weapon!” Yuri called out to me. I started to back away from her, Yuri had always led me down the right path.


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(Kair’s POV)


Sora started to back away from me, distrust growing in his eyes. My heart was starting to break, he no longer trusted me enough to heed my warnings. Maybe I had come on to strong. There was no point in regreting the past, I had to make Sora believe that I really was the real Kairi.


“Please Sora, believe me! Yuri isn’t the one who gave you the keyblade, a little girl named Shiranai is!” I peeked out of the corner of my eye at Yuri. I saw him tense a little but it was hardly noticeable. Yuri quickly recovered from my knowledge of the truth and retorted with his answer.


“And do you have any proof of your accusation?” Yuri questioned, a smirk forming on his face. Sora had a similar question in his eyes, which bore right through my soul. I stood there, stunned. I had never thought of having any kind of proof; I just assumed that Sora would trust me. I lowered my head and directed my eyes down to the ground.


“No..” I whispered, defeat tinging my voice. I knew now that I had lost Sora, we were all going to die because I wasn’t smart enough to convince Sora I was the real Kairi. Tears were starting to come into my eyes but I held them back with every muscle in my body. What was I thinking when I agreed to do this. I have never been able to help anyone. I heard Sora start to turn away from me and that shattered my heart even more. I didn’t care that Sora didn’t believe me, I only wanted him back in my arms. I ran towards him, reaching out for him. He quickly turned around, hate in his eyes.


“You will never be Kairi!” I tried to stop in my tracks but I didn’t have time. I struck out with his hand and pushed me down onto my back. I lied there for a moment, hoping that I was just dreaming myself but I knew it wasn’t true. I rolled over onto my hands and knees. Emotions had run dry. I couldn’t stand seeing Sora this way any longer. All I wanted was to get out of his dreams and cry myself to sleep.
Once again I could hear him turn away from me, hate for me probably fresh in his mind. I turned to him and saw him summon his keyblade. Then I saw something strange. Yuri was still looking at Sora but he had his hands behind his back. A glint of light came from behind him. I had to think what that could possibly be. Then it hit me. I had to save Sora, whether he believed me or not! I ran towards him but he didn’t turn to me. I then saw him reach out his keyblade to Yuri. I had to stop this madness. Yuri was reaching for the keyblade and bringing his other arm from behind his back. I launched myself infront of Sora and felt immense pain shoot out from my stomach. I landed on the ground hard on my back. Yuri looked down at me with rage in his eyes.

“Didn’t think I had the guts did you?” I thought to myself, glad that I had foiled Yuri’s plans. I then looked down at my wound. I saw a curved dagger coming out of my belly. The dagger was actually beautiful, even if it was the cause of my pain. The blood was already starting to pool around my body and it was still coming out. I could feel energy leaving my body, I didn’t have much time left. I finally looked at Sora, my beloved. I would never get to tell him how much I cared. I tried to mouth words but I had no stength left. Sora dropped to his knees and held my hand, giving me strength for one final moment with him.


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(Sora POV)


My actions were going to be the death of the only two people that brought me strength. I had killed Riku with my own hands and my distrust in Kairi was her demise. No tears came though, I had none left. I was on my knees beside her, trying to find the right words. The blood coming from her body just wouldn’t stop. I looked into her eyes expecting sadness or even hate for me in them but found the exact opposite. Those beautiful blue eyes held the deepest love for me, bringing tears I thought would never come. She brought her hand to my face, using the last bits of strength in her body. Her touch sent a shiver through my body, knowing fully well that this would be the last time I would feel it.


“Sora....never give in....to what others want you to believe” She gasped for air, trying to finish her final her words. “Look to your heart.....because I will always be there to help you find the light.” I nodded my head, acknowledging that I had heard her. I leaned down and held her close to me, hoping she could still feel my embrace. I didn’t care that her blood was now dripping onto me, she was all that mattered now.


“Kairi, you will always be in my heart and......I love you.” I felt her head turn up towards me and I could see in her eyes that she felt the same. I then decided to give her one final thing. I leaned down and pressed my lips against hers. She felt so cold but I knew she could feel me. I released her and knew that she was now dead. All life had left her body and she was no longer Kairi, just a body that held her spirit.


I slowly stood, no longer looking at the body. I summoned my keyblade, this time it wouldn’t leave my side. Hate and anger were only words, nothing could describe the heat that was radiating from my body.


“Sora I’m very proud of..........”


“You don’t deserve to stain my keyblade with blood, but I will do so for the spirit of the ones I loved and lost.”

And let the hate posts begin!!!!
 
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Souretsu Gear

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WHOOOO! The death of Kairi! I knew death was out for her! Soras gone you-killed-kairi-and-now-I'm-going-to-kick-your-@$$ mode! Go Sora kill Yuri and destroy him with your anger! Mwuhahahahaha! That was the greatest chapter! so much drama I can't sustain my emotions can't wait till next chapter! Post the next chapter soon Noezel!
 

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Exactly ;)
Keep it up! I wanna see a Fight Scene!

Oh, and BTW; Sora and Kairi just seem OOC. (Out of Character) It's melodrama. Stay away from stuff like Sora saying:
“And do you have any proof of your accusation?"
I just can't see Sora saying this. I could see him going:
"How can I tell you're not lying?!"
 
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