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Is Any of This for Real.....Or Not?
(Written in first person as Sora)
Finally we were returning to Traverse Town. After everything that had happened in Kingdom Hearts, losing Riku, saying goodbye to Kairi, and even coming close to death. I was ready to take a break, even if it was only for a short while.
“We’re approaching Traverse Town so pay attention Sora!” Donald quaked at me. He really never gave me to much credit. I was supposed to be helping him land the ship but I was so far in thought that I nearly forgot about it.
“Ok, ok. Don’t get your feathers in a bunch.” He just sighed at my sarcasm, like he always did. Of course there was Goofy, sitting in the back of the ship taking a nap, and I admit if I was him I would be doing the exact same thing. We had been through so much together, I felt that I owed so much to those two and I’m sure they felt the same about me.
Landing the ship was no problem, I had helped Donald do it a million times before. As we entered the atmosphere, the Gummi ship began to shake and the exterior began to glow with heat. I let up on the gas and let the world’s gravity do the work for me. Quickly we were within range for landing so Donald put on the brakes and I brought out the landing gear. We touched down with the ground and the ship shook hard, but I was used to all of it.
As we exited the back of the ship, Donald smacked Goofy on the head to get him to wake up. Goofy just sat up slowly, and yawned.
“Good mornin’, guys.” Donald looked annoyed, as usual but I just had to laugh to myself, they had acted like nothing had ever happened and that put me in a good mood. Yet I still worried about Riku, and missed Kairi. I shook my head, trying to focus at what was going on instead of getting worked up.
We walked into the town square, gazing up at the never ending night. Nothing had changed since the last time we were there, which made me even a little happier, knowing that something in my life was never going to change. Leading the three of us, I started to walk towards the item shop, hoping to replace some of the items we had used during our last battle. Yet as we neared the store I felt something change.
“Guys, did you feel that?” I looked out the corner of my eye at my two friends. They had their weapons out and were nodding their heads up and down in a yes. I summoned my keyblade, just in case. Something didn’t make sense, why would I get this feeling? What else could possibly give me this feeling of coldness and dread except.... No that can’t be! Once Kingdom Hearts was sealed, so were the heartless, or so I thought. All of a sudden thousands of shadow heartless came up from the ground. Usually these heartless would be a piece of cake to get rid of but this time there were thousands of them. The three of us charged straight at them at full force but it wasn’t enough. The shadows started grabbing our arms and legs, pulling us down to the ground. I tried to shake them off, but it was no use. My strength was slowly leaving me. I looked around for Donald and Goofy but I saw nothing of them. I was about to give up but I heard a someone shout.
“Don’t worry Sora! I’m going to use a Thundaga attack on them but it might hurt you too.” It was Donald. I felt relief but I heard hesitation in his voice, I knew he didn’t want to hurt me.
“ Donald, just do it, I’ll be all right!” No sooner I heard him shout the magic word and felt the lightning attack strike me. I had never felt so much agony in my life. The heartless were pulling at my body and the lightning was striking me at the same time. I then feel the heartless disappearing and my body getting lighter. The attack stopped and a stood up. I looked over at Donald and smiled. He and Goofy looked at me with a look of worry in their eyes. I just smiled at them, then I fell to the ground and passed out.
Is Any of This for Real.....Or Not?
(Written in first person as Sora)
Finally we were returning to Traverse Town. After everything that had happened in Kingdom Hearts, losing Riku, saying goodbye to Kairi, and even coming close to death. I was ready to take a break, even if it was only for a short while.
“We’re approaching Traverse Town so pay attention Sora!” Donald quaked at me. He really never gave me to much credit. I was supposed to be helping him land the ship but I was so far in thought that I nearly forgot about it.
“Ok, ok. Don’t get your feathers in a bunch.” He just sighed at my sarcasm, like he always did. Of course there was Goofy, sitting in the back of the ship taking a nap, and I admit if I was him I would be doing the exact same thing. We had been through so much together, I felt that I owed so much to those two and I’m sure they felt the same about me.
Landing the ship was no problem, I had helped Donald do it a million times before. As we entered the atmosphere, the Gummi ship began to shake and the exterior began to glow with heat. I let up on the gas and let the world’s gravity do the work for me. Quickly we were within range for landing so Donald put on the brakes and I brought out the landing gear. We touched down with the ground and the ship shook hard, but I was used to all of it.
As we exited the back of the ship, Donald smacked Goofy on the head to get him to wake up. Goofy just sat up slowly, and yawned.
“Good mornin’, guys.” Donald looked annoyed, as usual but I just had to laugh to myself, they had acted like nothing had ever happened and that put me in a good mood. Yet I still worried about Riku, and missed Kairi. I shook my head, trying to focus at what was going on instead of getting worked up.
We walked into the town square, gazing up at the never ending night. Nothing had changed since the last time we were there, which made me even a little happier, knowing that something in my life was never going to change. Leading the three of us, I started to walk towards the item shop, hoping to replace some of the items we had used during our last battle. Yet as we neared the store I felt something change.
“Guys, did you feel that?” I looked out the corner of my eye at my two friends. They had their weapons out and were nodding their heads up and down in a yes. I summoned my keyblade, just in case. Something didn’t make sense, why would I get this feeling? What else could possibly give me this feeling of coldness and dread except.... No that can’t be! Once Kingdom Hearts was sealed, so were the heartless, or so I thought. All of a sudden thousands of shadow heartless came up from the ground. Usually these heartless would be a piece of cake to get rid of but this time there were thousands of them. The three of us charged straight at them at full force but it wasn’t enough. The shadows started grabbing our arms and legs, pulling us down to the ground. I tried to shake them off, but it was no use. My strength was slowly leaving me. I looked around for Donald and Goofy but I saw nothing of them. I was about to give up but I heard a someone shout.
“Don’t worry Sora! I’m going to use a Thundaga attack on them but it might hurt you too.” It was Donald. I felt relief but I heard hesitation in his voice, I knew he didn’t want to hurt me.
“ Donald, just do it, I’ll be all right!” No sooner I heard him shout the magic word and felt the lightning attack strike me. I had never felt so much agony in my life. The heartless were pulling at my body and the lightning was striking me at the same time. I then feel the heartless disappearing and my body getting lighter. The attack stopped and a stood up. I looked over at Donald and smiled. He and Goofy looked at me with a look of worry in their eyes. I just smiled at them, then I fell to the ground and passed out.
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