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Those abilities are not overpowered. I can't wait till Tav posts his temp. Now that's overpowered.

That's why he's so damn fun to fight.

Nigga's accepted. Oh and one more thing: all ninjas can use the basic techniques, like Kage Bunshin and whatever else is common. So there's no need to write it.
 
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Name: Daaku Raito Seru

Age: Uh what?? Daaku is hella old, though age is indeterminable due to the vastly inhuman look of Daaku, but the grandiose look gives one the feel of a rather young creature merely gifted with that of cosmic beauty and poise. Hover if one were to be completely honest, age is a meaningless notion for him at this time. Last time he checked, Daaku was around 153 when Naruto was still a teen. It’s been over 55 years since then so start adding it up kiddies…

Gender: Male

Personality: Daaku is put off by others more than anything else, but he seems to have a rather gentle nature at times. It just is that he can be completely malicious to others. Daaku has a near constant perception of his surroundings and is mindful of the complications that he and others just might cause, his levels of self control are at an extreme and he has no problem resisting bodily pleasures and other pleasing things about life. He thus chooses to act in full moderation. Then again he can seriously be an asshole sometimes, so watch out for that side of him.

Appearance: Well what can you say about a creature that looks like this?? It's completely gorgeous. Daaku has gone beyond the limits of his humanoid body thus changed his being into that of a more primal form that can only be noted as beastly

Standing upright, Daaku stands about 7 feet tall, but it is completely normal for him to walk on all fours like a wolf or lion would. Daaku looks similar to a lion or tiger might but at present he seriously has a lot of canine features about him. His brown auburn mane extends down to his upper back, but like the rest of his being appears, there is quite a bit of essence swirling around his body that can't really be explained in any kind of normal terms, but most beings would refer to as magickal coating.

His face is much like that of a lion and has both a silky blue fur covering it and also a hardened skin of the same bluish hue. Long ears extend towards the mane, these being a lighter shade of the deep blue that colors the face. White fur sprouts from Daaku's ears and he has horns embedded with runes that jut from both aides of his head on top and another two horns that are much small which grow from the base of his jaw. Spines of what appear to be hardened essence or bone grow from the base of his neck and stop at the top of his head.

Both arms and the upper legs are colored with golden plating, but the other parts of the limbs are not at all, exposed with blue skin-like material that are versed with runes that herald the notion of essence. Below the neck and down to the lower torso, Daaku is covered with draconic plating which is dense enough that Daaku can cause it to have its own pull of gravity.

Three tails grow from the backside of Daaku Sereu and each one is about eight feet in length; plated in scaling like other parts of his body. Other areas such as the eyes and in-between Daaku's spikes and pat of the fur glisten with essence that glows white and can cause different hues of powerful stability around Daaku Seru as a whole.

Alliance: None

Village: none currently

Rank: Daaku is a missing nin, so far his rank is undetermined…..

Clan: Hmm Raito at one point, Seru at another...always the Tarnaic.

Kekkai Genkai:
Tarnaic no Chakra(UmuSeigyoki)

The force of Tarnaic chakra is that of such essence and the manipulation of the very form of chakra itself. It ebbs beyond human life force and grants those implemented with it control of in other words existence. The Tarnaic have senses that are based simply on the makeup of a given life, or spirit-form and this is on all planes of the naruverse. With this in mind the Tarnaic function is like a black hole in sense that it takes in all essence but like the speculated white hole phenomenon it emits such energy and chakra completely renewed for use. About every 8th of a second, Tarnaic functioning takes essence around as their body is a partial port to existence; anything is channeled through them to some extent if present.

The Tarnaic on varying levels are able to view perfect clarity what is going on, not in angles or degrees, but with displacement of the flow of essence to and from another existence. This grants sight inside and out of an opponent’s mind a link with them, the view of chakra, and bodily functioning. By using chakra to pinpoint an enemy, place, or object using an essence strand, they can warp sight elsewhere to view other occurrences. A very high level of chakra sensitivity calls for the chakra’s essence to feel textures of objects, and theoretically go as far as their atomic patterns when other objects come into contact with them. Apparently exposed to the essence of chakra the notion of gathering essence upon and inside the Tarnaic clan can use the constant stream of chakra being taken in and remitted and thus alter them which ebbs meta-physicality.

The Tarnaic chakra effects nigh-omnipotent chakratic and even reality warping powers scales possibly cosmic, yet this is limited, but they can reconstruct matter with chakra and do so on a vast shifting scale. Tarnaic chakra can influence others with this power, and cause manipulation by inducing crippling waves of essence that emulate telekinesis. It should be obvious that this power is able to cause any number of attack patterns, and by such, muster destructive blasts and atmospheric disturbances.

The movement of those in the clan on varying levels is determined by chakra input when moving that is extremely fast particle acceleration this grants subsonic speeds meld another format, only being held together via chakra that ebbs of a near mode of a dimensional rift during travel. By manifesting esence of chakra at a single location, Daaku can open an essencegate and go there instantaneously, but the further he moves, the more draining this is. Moving a few feet would be nothing for him to do, but going several miles just might drain all of his chakra.

Lastly Chakrapathic function is basis on genjutsu that can be fatal. They are irresistible to all, and any ninja, these directly align with those of other ninja, which is why they become trapped, even if they are able to change their own brain waves. The chakra that runs through the jutsu convinces the brain to copy what happens to the victim within the genjutsu on the person’s via chakra automatically…..

Weapons: Something that seems to be made of a cohesive of chakra fluxes that are bound to what is in essence. The sporadic nature of this weapon makes it so that Daaku can generate nearly any kind of property and shift the weapon into many forms, like a staff, or a long bladed sword that is about 8 feet long. To say that he can spawn energy with Fortinbras would be incorrect, it is rather that Fortinbras causes a flux of chakra essence to do its bidding and thus can use fire, or water, or any other elemental property, by using the raw format of what is in the naruverse. With that said the raw of what is bypasses that of an element in tow regardless and also causes a shift in Daaku when he fights. His body becomes essence meaning he bleeds not, but still takes damage as per anybody else. Though one might assume the amount is less than others....
Chakra element: Umm what?? Chakra(Light, Fire, Wind)

Jutsu:
Taijutsu
1)Keiro Tame Junsei Seizui: A taijutsu style developed after many trials and errors. This art is focused on the basic principle that chakra is essence, essence is control, and in a fight perfect control means victory. By using such a powerful force to the extent of mastery, chakra can be influenced to project and interrupt attacks and movement patterns. By exerting prominent force from around oneself, the body can be pushed to greater heights allowing extreme speed, flexibility and overall poise for dangerous stylized attacks, and also sound defenses.

GuniProd Joukai~ The act of enforcing attacks with chakra unlike any other is able to do.

Hand/Arm Attacks- Movement that may be started or shifted from any other given movement can be mixed with chakra as a fist is thrown. Punches from this method are very blunt and even the slightest touch of a fist, or hand can cause abnormal amounts of pain to an opponent from chakra being used to disrupt muscle tissue and also cause blood vessels to rupture. Gathering more chakra during an assault process can be even more devastating as it can thus be used to propel bursts of pressure into enemies that cause imbalance and room for follow up attacks after that.

Leg/Feet Attacks- Kicks in GunIprod Joukai are more than a force to be reckoned with because even from a distance it is still possible to bet hit with one of them. The extension of the legs and feet enable one to lash out at opponents with series of kicks that shatter defenses. From a spinning motion one can kick outwards and use chakra to stabilize them self but offset an enemy, which leads to latch in attacks and aerial assaults. Some of the more damaging attacks are those that start from a roll, or a flip in a given direction.

Pulse Attacks- Chakra consumption is minimal to the Tarnaic, and in inverse thecontrol of it is at a level so they can form numerous different kinds of projectile attacks to use in battle that are made out of chakra, and thus came about the pulse formation. Pulse is basically a pressurized form of chakra that one can emit from the fingers, palms and toes when attacking. Doing so gives hits an extra power to impact compared to other techniques. It is also possible to use pulse to paralyze opponents, but only for a very short period of time.

Chakra conjuring- This is a really one of the most promising and time consuming parts of thus said style to learn. By shaping chakra around small grains of dirt, sand, a leaf, and other items, one can forcefully build weapons of chakra to use in a fight. The weapons aren't made to directly cut opponents. He uses them to inflict painful blunt impact damage, and to break bones with a single hit, just like his other techniques can do.

Senpaicort~ Using the force of chakra essence to enhance the body and its abilities and make sound defenses.

Stability- Using the body's central stand point of gravity and locking in this effect with a chakra based continuum, the Tarnaic can alter personal mono-directional gravity fields under themselves and use chakra to make oneself virtually immovable as long as they are in contact with the ground, although a strong force can move them, this is the basic stability that oneuses to not fall in battle.

Defense- A simple thought really, one controls chakra and can encase outer skin with it to buffer impact and slashing damage. This makes one more resilient to being attacked, but by no means is that saying theydoesn't take damage and can't be hit.

2)Mahfin Galays Err Jutsu- A most ridiculous, but nonetheless powerful, and also painful technique. By collecting random charka from around, and building them up with their own, the chakra amounts to devastation, and a tarnaic puts off a burst of speed so intense that the spot they were standing in blows apart. They practically warps to the opponent’s location, and thrust a weapon of choice right in the center of the chest. The pinky releases all of the chakra that was stored and the point of impact takes the force head on. Any opponent will be knocked away with a huge shock from the blow, and chakra can be seen blowing out of the enemies back as they fly away.~None~

3)Jishin Enko(Mercy Arc)- One of the body techniques of the Tenga-ryu technique. Before the attack commences, a person must release a lot of chakra into their upper legs, and feet for stability. Using a feint, a snap kick is thrown from the left, but using a high level speed technique, the left foot ends up slamming down, and up so fast, that a person can kick an opponent in the side from 8 feet away, following up with a kick to the opposite side of the body. During the taijutsu, chakra, has been flowing into the legs, and down into the feet at a constant, and thus enables an extremely fast leaping somersault kick from the feet all the way up an opponent’s chest, that can break bones, and shatter defenses. After this a user throws their body up to launch another even more devastating somersault kick that is easier to hit an enemy with because of them floating with chakra. To end the assault, the user flips their body down, and slams the right heel onto the top of an enemy's head sending them crashing to the ground.~pure~

-Ninjutsu:
4)Senhappa(Beam Blast)- By instantly funneling chakra that that is rapidly used to gather a purified from of energy it is housed in between the cupped hands. This mass gains capacity and as it stabilizes becomes rather dense in compensation as it is then fired from the hands by a push forward on the arms. The blast is always fired off when the fingers are slightly bent to avoid chakra whiplash to during the sequence of the jutsu. The beam of pure bluish chakra expands as it moves making it a formidable attack to use and as the chakra has high impact properties along with damaging chakra blast effects, it can damage foes that are guarding as well. This can be performed many ways and by far can be enhanced where much more chakra is drawn in before releasing the jutsu, allowing for even more dangerous jutsu~pure~

5)Taiyo Senhappa(Solar Beam Blast)- Instead of cupping the hands and charging chakra like in the original Senhappa, a different approach is used. The use of hand signs are made to gather sunlight, or reflected moonlight in the sky which is converted into a powerful form of light chakra by mixing it with the chakratic properties of energy based substance. The other hand charges up another separate mass of energy that stays in the hand during the collection of the other chakra. Collected light chakra is gathered into the hand as another glowing orb of golden white chakra. The chakras are mashed together and a beam of chakra is fired from the hands, rapidly moving and firing pulses of photon energy along with the other energy of the beam which makes the force of the jutsu much more devastating than before. The chakra now has a hindering effect on the skin, and when held off, can quickly cause severe burns by the heat of the polarized chakra.~light, pure~

6)Bu-Meran Sudanki no Jutsu(Boomerang Cutter Technique)- Chakra forms a thin boomerang like projectile and it is then thrown at an enemy, whom will of course react to the jutsu in some way, or another. The boomerang first flies forward to hit an enemy, but if it misses, it comes flying back to hit from behind, and so forth, losing a bit of chakra each time. The blows are heavy, but if it does connect even once, the boomerang flies back and forth for a few seconds, causing injury to any opponent in the assault zone.~pure~

7)Rasensuisei(Helix Comet)-A jutsu that is based upon the life and soul of Tarnaic, a jutsu that uses influx with basic energies, the notion of the climb to the top. It's all about the helix based chakra consumption to make things happen. A user brings a hand up towards the face, and allows chakra to link up between the fingers and it builds a helix of chakra that gains the aspects of tremendous force as the circling blue and red chakra sweeps across her a user‘s body, coming to a stand still inside the palm. The chakra is now shaped as an orb of bright blue chakra, with a spiraling red aura around it that sends off rays of chakra. This orb shines brightly, and the life essence it holds makes it so that it can follow an enemy around by connecting to their own chakra life signature. As the jutsu, travels a long tail of chakra spirals behind it like the tail of a comet, increasing the damage during impact. If so chosen, one is easily able to thrust the jutsu at an opponents body, and the chakra spins at speeds so intense the tail of chakra at the end breaks down and showers the opponent with subatomic bursts of chakra, along with the sporadic effects of pulsating and also spinning chakra.~pure~

8)Gouzen Shishi Rendan(Roaring Lion Combination)- One starts this technique by jumping into the air and spinning around rapidly, using the force from the spin to turn like a drill and exert chakra as they slam into an opponent from a given direction. Coming out of this spin, one thrusts both hands out into the midsection of the opponent and causes a disruption in balance which is followed by the twisting of the body to slam a knee into the opponent's chest. Then arcing the leg up over the opponents shoulder, a kick is thrown to the side of the head, knocking them up into the air. A Tarnaic then brings the left hand behind the body and thus flickers above the opponent, slamming the right fist into their midsection again, and they start falling to the ground. The left hand aims down, and fires a vicious Senhappa right into the opponents abdomen, and they slam onto the ground with tremendous impact, To make sure the enemy doesn't get up from this painful assault, chakra spirals around the right fist and fires a lion's head shaped chakra mass down at the enemy. The rushing air around the chakra gives the sound of a roaring lion before it hits......~Pure~

9)Shinseihappa no Jutsu(Nova Blast Technique)- By gathering chakra in the confines of the body, Sei pulls it through chakra points with the greatest skill, and makes it into pure chakra before using it. The lump of chakra gets larger and it is expelled from inside the body from the mouth. After being housed inside a ninja during the making of the jutsu, the chakra has formed into a large mass that is circular in shape, and quite compact in structure. The jutsu can hit causing impact damage, but it doesn't explode right away. Instead it rotates rapidly, causing terrible external damage, like a large drill, then at the last second, the jutsu collapses, and pieces of flying chakra hit an enemy.~pure~

10)Krazr Disk Jutsu- This jutsu forms a spinning disk made out of chakra, that starts very small, but gets larger and larger as more chakra is added to it. The disk is very sharp, and if it hits a person hard enough, can slice right through meat and bone, and other objects such as stone or the trunk of a tree, it will slice through them like a hot knife through butter. The jutsu is always unstable, so at times the disk with shrink in flight, or get larger on its own. Also the jutsu is very durable, and even if it is damaged, or gets holes it in, will remain intact as long as it has a spinning edge on it. The best part of the jutsu is that will more chakra, the jutsu can be controlled remotely, so that if it is dodged chakra is never wasted.~pure~

10) Seadragon Fist- This jutsu is the addition of what can be the most terrible attack ever. To start one doesn’t need to do much other than raise the palm and conjure a force potent enough to build a ball of flame inside the fist. By moving forward, one charges the fire to a blue flame hot enough to melt the users flesh and thus defense against one’s own attack is needed. So to do so, the user drives the hand forward and unleashes a palm attack that mows down enemies in a wide range. The fire gathers intensity and the palms emit pulses on concentrated flame that slam into enemies, igniting their bodies in flame that can be controlled by the user. For a finish the user can either cause an explosion of white hot flames that bursts in an arc, or consumes enemies in pillars of flames that ignite once more in a beam of destruction~Fire~

11)Hikari Bunshin no Jutsu(Light Replication Technique)- Duplications out of oneself that are made of condensed, and perfectly molded light chakra. Each clone can easily act on its own and continue to function after taking damage, but just like a normal shadow clone after too many hits, the clone will completely expire. Compared to normal clones, these will not disperse, but let off a bright flash to distract an enemy, and then explode when hit too many times in battle. Each clone has a more translucent appearance then a solid one. By manipulating extra chakra, a clone can look identical to A user and these clones also have the same other effects as shadow clones. The clan can cause the clones to blow up at any given time. And also make hordes of the clones at once~Light~

12)Blaq Bunshin no Jutsu(Black Replication Technique)- A jutsu to make duplications made of a condensed substance of dark chakra. The makeup of the substance makes the clones practically intangible, and because of this physical blows and even powerful taijutsu is ineffective. If struck, the most that will happen is the fist, or foot, or whatever has hit the clone, will merely get sucked in, and take some damage from the poisonous makeup of the clone. To effectively take out a clone like this a ninjutsu needs to be used against it, and nothing weak either, else the clone could possibly absorb the chakra from the jutsu, and grow larger once that is done, that clones simply melt into the ground. An enemy should be wary however, these areas are sticky. The clones are pitch black and have no face. These clones also have the same other effects as shadow clones~Dark~

13)Kaijou Atsuryokuha Dangan(Massive Pressure Wave Shot)- A user jumps into the air, slowly performing hand seals. The chakra that spreads up the travels there quicker than normal, and the two extra seals invoke the element of fire into the jutsu. Using another seal, a clan member floats down a bit and shoots a blast, then using that as a distraction which 7/10 times works, launches another blast of flaming pressured chakra that crashes into the opponent causing horrible damage, along with the 78% chance of an explosion because of the fire chakra re-igniting from all of the chakra air pressure that gets left over.~Fire, pure~

14)Rittai Hakyoku no Jutsu(Spatial Cataclysm Technique)- This can be defined, as both a genjutsu, or ninjutsu, and in reality it is both, because that is exactly what it is, a reality made out of chakra. Using the massive power of dark chakra, and essence made Tarnaic chakra, One can manipulate reality itself by bending spatial matter in the area with corrosive chakra. The space doesn't need to be large, because with in the dome of darkness created, space bends back in on itself, so the area can seem endless. Inside this area, chakra is out of control, and so the use of jutsu and other techniques that consume chakra from opponents can consume amounts many times more than usual. The senses inside this area, are twisted beyond recognition, and sight, touch, smell, and taste are all gone, leaving a slight space for hearing. A Tarnaic can launch a number of attacks while controlling this jutsu causing areas inside to bend and crush enemies, and have dark chakra latch on, and turn them inside out if it stays long enough. They can and will destroy the people inside if they don't find a way to them, or somehow overpower the entire jutsu, and the user at the same time. There is one way to break the jutsu completely, and have all senses returned, but if that information were available.~Dark, Tarnaic~

15)Kagirinai Hikari Juutai no Jutsu(Endless Light Zodiac Technique)- Tarnaic can control light, in all of it's aspects, and created a jutsu that involves wielding light in ways that should be physically impossible. Light is visible only to humans because of what the brain can see it as, so if light is on a higher plane than what the brain can define as visible, it becomes invisible to the eye, and that is where the danger lies. Using advanced ability, and charging particles of light chakra until they are brimming with enough chakra to radiate and cause a spectral eclipse, one fires a pulse of light up into the air that is visible for only the split second it moves before it becomes misaligned with the eyes, and becomes invisible behind, and around the user of the jutsu, the Guide to Divinity settles down, and these blades of pure light become the harbingers of death. If one has a powerful eye trait, then it might be possible to distinguish the disturbance in light moving to the eyes, if they are looking at a spot where one of the blades is. One can control these blades with the mind, and slash enemies with blades of light that can incinerate sections on their body instantly if enough power is used in the slash. The blades can be split apart into millions of blades to attack, and in this state they are visible as a pulse of purple light, but move so fast, that a tarnaic can tear apart a ninja with the blades before they can react, and because of their size, a single blade can cause large damage to most defenses that it goes up against. "Mirror on the wall.", we laughs~Light~

16) Choke Slam Jutsu- An intense pure chakratic force gathers and twists into the air so that it gathers raw energies that are able to be controlled at anytime by thought. On a whim Daaku may choose to use this technique to trap an opponent inside a shell of this energy that is not at all avoidable unless they are of the meta-physical nature. In any case as the chakra gathers it moves up the body and begins to cause bursts of chakra to cause immense pain to any enemy caught in the trap and even those whom are nearby as the chakra remits and ripples outward to affect the organic and the natures of chakra. It finally reaches the neck and causes a powered break that chokes out the enemy and near instantly knocks them out. If they manage to survive, the chakra emits another blow and the enemy is sent reeling away by the excess chakra.

17) Kiyouteki Nisshahabyou no Jutsu(Fanatic Solar Radiation Technique)- A thin ray of concentrated sun rays shines down on an opponent during the day, or a twinkling beam of moonlight during the night. An opponent will notice that this ray of light is a bit hot, but usually takes no notice of it until the sparkling light envelopes their body and begins to rapidly widen, catching them in a stream of radiation. This isn't simply heat, but deadly radiation focused down onto a single person, and while their body is fired, the beam widens causing burns, and horrific damage that can melt flesh, and drive a ninja insane as their body begins to lift off the ground, and take more damage in the beam of fanatic light. A sudden jump in temperature and concentration makes the light so hot, that an enemy caught in the attack could be incinerated, or blasted far away from the terrible heat. Can you say terminal cancer??~Light, Fire~

18) Shainingu Rasensuisei(Shining Helix Comet)- The same format as the Helix Comet is used to build the jutsu, but this time, light particles are infused into the making of the jutsu, giving it a bright white glow, and a tail that is shorter, but golden colored. The jutsu now heralds photon energy, and as it moves, it spins inwardly, causing a miniature fusion process so small, that the contained energy can easily cause a massive explosion, but the chakra inside stays in a clam manner. By directing the jutsu with his hand, Daaku can literally make the jutsu move like a comet and have it crash down into an opponent with the same effects from previously plus the added effect of an implosive blast that sucks in an enemies chakra then backfires, causing an ensuing explosion of photon chakra. Like before, Daaku can rush an opponent with this jutsu, but now instead of a mere high powered pulse, the jutsu acts as a chakratic drill with an extra beam of light firing from it.~light~

19) Rasenteikiatsu(Helix Cyclone)- A pressurized format of the Raensuisei. Daaku holds his palms out, and as he builds chakra into each palm, wind chakra takes from and manifests itself into the jutsu and forms a long tail on the orb of chakra that wraps around it multiple times, giving it even more of a helix based appearance. If thrown, the jutsu soars at an enemy, as it nears them locking the opponent into a flux of shearing wind blades that slash at an opponent/s. With the first effects of the jutsu in mind, the wind chakra continues to break down; reaching molecular particles can cause massive nerve damage as the jutsu finally comes to a close at which time it shreds its outer shell, and explodes into a massive cyclone that can easily sweep enemies away.~wind~

20)Rasensouran(Helix Control)- The basic concept that if Daaku forms the energy for the Rasensuisei; he can manipulate it in an incomplete format. By doing this, he can form the energy into multiple types of weapons, and use the chakra that makes it to build any number of objects, such as shields, or use the formation of the jutsu for other aspects. Basically, the chakra is kneaded for personal use.~pure~

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu:
1)Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: 1)красный сущность рушиться с треском(Red Essence Crash)- Taking the hands and circling them through the air, also performing a tatsu seal before and after motioning of the hands, chakra emits from the body and spirals around, forming patterns of webbing that encompass the user's body as they lift into the air, directing the web of chakra around enemies, cutting off escape paths. At first it seems that the body is merely just floating around for nothing, but from virtually clear chakra, the webbing turns a bright blood red color, expanding to more than 300 meters across the horizon. With timing that isn't like the other jutsu of red, the web crashes down into the earth so fast that the only reason it is obvious that the web has moved is because it is no longer in the sky. The crash creates a chain reaction of chakra and a massive earthquake that can cause fissures and the webbed chakra covers enemies, twisting into them and reversing their chakra flow, bringing it to a halt while chakra pulses through their body, devastating the network of chakra, and damaging organs. Immediately after the crash, there is another crash of falling essence that can merely devastate anyone hit by such condensed unearthly chakra hitting them randomly.[красныйкровь предел]

2)желтый сущность взрывной(Yellow Essence Explosion)- A twister of chakra rumbles across the ground, sweeping up particles of material such as dust and other elements, the ground isn't liquefied, but at once turned into the finest grain dust particles that spread out over the area in an instant , the area lightning up with yellow chakra that dazzles the eyes. Hardened amounts of essence are taken from the enemy due to exposure to the environment, and around the area an unbreakable field of chakra is made, trapping an enemy inside. Their body is literally part of the field, so breaking it with tremendous force would literally mean suicide. The chakra laces itself with all the particles, heating them up, and just a single pulse from the controller of the jutsu ignites the particles in the air. Because the dust is so fine and so small, it immediately combusts and causes a devastating yellow explosion inside the area, destroying those inside very easily if they have little defense. This causes a chain reaction of explosions of yellow chakra that can continue on for some time, virtually reducing the enemies inside to nothing more than a husk of their former selves. By chance that they do manage to protect themselves, even thought damage is always ensured and they do not perish, an enemy will find that their skin is ripped open, possibly deeper than that with such wounds that can bleed out in minutes.[No Rank желтыйкровь предел]

3)оранжевый сущность буряр(Orange Eessence Storm)- A high powered force slams into all enemies within 5 meters of the user of this technique, as a release of essence directly on the body with no restraints can cause massive pain. The sky lights up as spots that seem far away in the sky turn orange, blinking with orange light, as if they are stars in the sky. However with each second that goes by, these dots of orange get bigger, multiplying in size as they get closer, appearing as burning masses of orange chakra shaped like megaton meteorites. These release chakra streams that lock on to not the chakra signature of enemies but their natural core that makes them exist, meaning that one of the huge orange chakra meteorites will lock on, and follow an opponent, most likely smashing into them, if not the ground near them. The magnitude of these raining meteorites is like that of a bus hitting the ground moving at 500 miles an hour. Death is ensured with a direct un-countered physical hit. Luckily the chakra only damages the organic, and is not able to leave massive craters in its wake, though the chakra remains, drifting inside the opponents and slowly poisoning them, causing loss of chakra, and amnesia.[ оранжевыйкровь предел]

4) Doushi Enkotsu: Normaaku(Kindred Harmony: Normaaku)- This is the ultimate bond one can hope to achieve in the Naruverse, something that when thought about ebbs on the breaking of so many different laws it just is a bit difficult to fathom, but nonetheless it is possible. This must be called Gattai which in nearly every aspect is a raw fusion of the essence of two souls that far expends in the series of what’s been done thus far in the Naruverse. It’s taking the foundation by storm with experience and shaking it to its very core. The bodies of two shinobi merge creating a completely homologous form standing roughly six feet and six inches in height. The nature of this man is completely poised of both Daaku and Normatsu thus he stands proud and confident, the mix of both men of valor. Their appearance is nothing less than dazzling. A violent colored pale tint of fushia be his hair, spiked from the backside and downwards. Trailing around from the sides, it juts out just a bit to convey the fierce tenacity of the spirit that is tipped with blond along with blond highlights throughout the hair. All the qualities of both Normatsu and Daaku are taken into a single entity, merged down to their very existence; they are one another in all essence.

His body is lithe and muscled, not overly so, but to a peak of perfection in a mere gaze from the eye. Most of the body is awash with a fuchsia coating of silky fur that is reminiscent of a lion’s. The fur even covers the sides of the face and goes up to the ears. The rest of the body is also covered modestly with this fur but it thins around the hands and feet, and also the area of the chest, but is still highly visible. A golden yellow sleeveless jacket adorns this warrior of ultimate force and it is covered with twinkling and fluxing chakra that also writes and rewrites the tale of life in runes that were once on Daaku. There is a bladed shoulder pad of armor off to the right side of this. Moving off both hands would be a mist of white flecked translucent chakra that spans from the back, up the spinal cord to the shoulders. From both hands, are two open fingered gloves, combined between dark gold and fucshia with a chakra plated piece in the center that empowers from that plate naruverse essence. He wears no pants, but has a loin body wrap to cover the lover extremities. Unlike the other clothing this seems to be made of a mixture of chakra and fabric as the golden hue is clearly chakra, while the fuchsia fabric isn’t clearly physical. Normaaku wears no shoes to speak of and carries on the back nothing but the raw force they are as a whole.

Normaaku possesses Daaku’s UmuSeigyoki and Normatsu’s Vulcan Ukiyogun forces. Able to augment their skills by working as a team, they can utilize anyone of the other's abilities and or jutsu. These skills can effectively shred through just about anything that is placed before them. This type of gattai or combination doesn't run just on chakra, but the power of essence and the ability to believe in yourself and your comrade, even exceeding well over the limit of holding the gattai when it seems impossible…….

Forbidden Jutsu
1)Mujuuryoku Rasensuisei(Zero Gravity Helix Comet)- Daaku or Seru sends out pure waves of chakra that surround a confused enemy on all sides in an unavoidable trap of sanction, both secure, and invisible in nature. He then fills the space inside the space with dark chakra, and melds the two with a mixture of tarnaic chakra that starts to grow into each other immediately. This causes a reaction in the area that starts to bend into itself, and the sense of gravity is lost, causing a floating effect on whomever is not a tarnaic inside of the same level. An enemy will bounce helplessly around, being drawn ever so closer to the growing rasensuisei that he is making as they fills it to the brink with tarnaic energy, and it pulses like the norm for the technique. Eventually the opponent ninja is sucked by the rasensuisei's gravity to the jutsu itself, and spun around on the jutsu, being cut open by the high rate velocity spinning their own body is doing on the chakra of the jutsu. A ray of concentrated chakra fires from the rasensuisei, going through the opponent in most cases, and splitting apart the area the enemy was trapped in, leaving them either dead, or motionless on the ground.~Tarnaic~

2)Sakura Senhappa Shuukyoku(Cherry Blossom Beam Blast Finale)- Certain blows are just not meant to blocked, but there is always that ninja who would seek to try anyway. Daaku doesn't really care. He makes an essencegate to tear a rift through Alnaphar, and instantaneously transports his leg in front of an opponent, and kicks them heavily away. He does the same rift technique again, with his leg appearing under the opponent, and slams this foot up, sending them spiraling upwards, and then again to perform a final overhead smash that sends them flying back towards them ground with twisted force that guarantees them to land standing up. Using the formula for the Senhappa technique, Daaku charges an orb of chakra that he thus hurls down onto the opponent, whether they catch and hold off this massive ball is up to them, as being crushed, or holding it off has the same effect. Chakra will in turn harm and burn away their chakra, and the pressure will consume chakra upon contact. Daaku then proceeds to charge chakra into his hands, and pulls it in, allowing the chakra particles to remain separate yet so close together that it does not appear this way. Daaku shoots this wave of energy down towards the opponent already holding off the first sphere of chakra, but it has an irregular effect. The separated particles flow through the energy ball the opponent is fending off, and the chakra absorbs the ball in its entirety, reflecting light from the sun to appear as large cherry blossom petals. In an instant however, the opponent is ripped to shreds by these miniature chakra blades that sweep down and tear into an opponent. The body is torn asunder from chakra ripping away at physical chakra in place disrupting feeling in the body. This leaves the opponent numb, and they keel over with the body rendered useless. Lying traumatized leaves the opponent open to the chakra that is left over from adsorption to ignite in a blast that consumes the enemy.~pure~

3)Rasengenki Damahappa- The link to the source of Tarnaic is opened and thus the fusion of the Senhappa and Rasensuisei can happen. Chakra is communed from both Alnaphar and all over the planet to mix as the essence of chakra and be used for a technique that is so completely overwhelming that if used, people are sure to leave a changed being. One needs to stay in a secured position with the arms placed on the ground to direct the chakra to the jutsu, which appears high in the air as it forms. Each particle of chakra looks like a sparkling wisp as it is added to the mass, and as the jutsu grows it becomes more, and more obvious, appearing much like a massive Helix comet without the tail attached. The chakra becomes less and less stable at this point as bands of chakra wrap around the unfinished jutsu, another process starts. Both hands are pulled back as chakra is siphoned seemingly from the mass above into the cupped hands where it obtains a state of compactness, getting strength from the now fused forms of energy from both the Senhappa and Rasensuisei. Whether on the ground or in the air, a master user of the Tarnaic chakra now shifts to an opponent and then lets the mass of chakra with a blue hue floats in the air near them. It is small in nature, but has many bands of the red helix.

By pressing both hands towards this mass of essence itself, the raw nature of the jutus rushes outward and tears paths in realit to fire directly at the opponents in the area. The jutsu harbors such intenses strength that the turquoise colored beam eradicates organic matter around it other than the Tarnaic and essence of existence itself consume and at once would ravish other techniques used against this jutsu, so if anything only than another attack with the same kind of essence make up could possibly stand against it. An opponent will find themselves struggling to defend themselves against this chakra, and further more than their own body seems to start draining of its own chakra by being near this jutsu of rampant life, but also death. One can release the chakra outwards in a massive explosion that will obliterate any enemies, as outrunning a blast means nothing due to the fact that once in contact with the jutsu, ninja have already been connected to Alnaphar and the essence that wills their defeat. ~?????~

Bio:How long has it really been since Daaku was at all been happy?? From the times when he was actually a small child hundreds of years ago to the time period where he was at peace with Rayex and his students there are always things that change about his being, yet stay the same. Daaku has always been a beacon for what is to come and just what is about to happen in this coming day and age. It never matters what he looks like, or what body he is in because merely: Daaku will ALWAYS be Daaku, even if he kills a few kids of figures out yet another way to cheat death AGAIN. Regardless let’s go back quite a bit in time.

At one point in time mamny years ago Daaku was born in in Konoha to the head of the Raito clan Masahiro Raito and his wife Fuu Raito. He always looked up to his father who was the master of the Burrakuai. Daaku loved his parents dearly and wanted to be a great ninja like his father who was respected by many and feared by some. Daaku trained hard so he could one day have the recognition of the Hokage, for Masahiro was very good friends with the Minato Namikaze. By age 6 Daaku had learned jutsu that took others years to master. He graduated at the top of his class from the ninja academy and had all but mastered the Burakkuai at age 7. He was already a chunin before he turned 10. 2 years later however all hell broke loose and not only did his mother fall ill and die from a terrible sickness that boiled her flesh, the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox attacked Konohagakure soon after. Many fought bravely, but it was all no use.

A bit later….Daaku met Orochimaru before he got to the village and along with nine others, including Anko they were branded with Orochimaru's first ten Cursed Seals of Heaven. Of the ten, Anko and Daaku were the only ones to survive. Orochimaru rejected them as subordinates, believing Daaku and Anko did not have the lust for power or vengeance needed to fuel the Cursed Seal ,and Anko's receded, thus the 10% chance of surviving the seal. However for unknown reasons Orochimaru let them both live and Daaku finally made it to the Village Hidden in the Clouds. Daaku continued to train in light element jutsu and master his ninja skills, but made sure not to use the Cursed Seal often, so he didn't become prone on it's power. By showing mastery in his chakra element and showing extreme ability and leadership in every mission givin to him Jounin status was awarded to Daaku at age 14. Daaku was the youngest jounin squad leader in the village.....ever.

Years went by but, When he was 21 Daaku found his three star pupils; Akina, Heishro, and Tokishe, but during an S-rank they were faced by a ninja with unimaginable power. He killed all three Genin. Daaku fought with his Burakkuai and Cusred Seal pushed as far as they would go and it still wasn't enough. All of his genin had appeared dead, but when Akina rose up to fight determined to complete her mission and fulfill her duty as a kunoichi Daaku was shocked. Sadly the ninja killed her by cutting her in half. It was here that daaku knew of the past and of course made it so that things followed as they should and thus lead him back to Konoha after he killed the Jounin in the Hidden Cloud after a traumatic accusation and then as always he move onto another saga.

Almost 3 years later in the saga of Shippuden Daaku felt that Rayex’s training was going well and that it was time for him to prove that he really had learned what it truly meant to be a ninja. Of course as Daaku loves a good fight he decided to have a little battle with Rayex to see how long he could stand against Daaku’s new raw power and Burakkuai skills……

Not only had Rayex’s reaction time increased, but he was much better at defense and taijutsu. Obviously after years of training with Daaku, Rayex was much better at everything and was really giving Daaku a run for his money(with the level of power Daaku was using anyway.) Eventually they both used a new jutsu that involved energy swords. Rayex used his Vorpal Blade and Daaku used Raiton: Heijin Sengetsu. There clash was violent, but Daaku underestimated the jutsu and it broke through his. Daaku just avoided having his arm cut off and knocked Rayex back.

Rayex ended using a new jutsu that Daaku hadn’t seen before. It seemed that it was a variant of the White Noise technique that Rayex had told him about. It was certainly of the electric nature and Daaku didn’t have time for most of his jutsu to be formed, much less the time for hand signs. He fired a Chou Senhappa just as Rayex used his jutsu. This was another miscalculation. Rayex’s jutsu had a higher concentration of electric chakra and it interrupted the flow of Daaku’s chakra, causing it to pierce through it and slam into Daaku’s arm, causing an instant burn scar. It also didn’t help that Daaku turned to witness Aiko and Kaito(who were supposed to watching the match) making out……wait wait wait too much huh?? Lets just jump waaaaay ahead. Like 12 years more or so.

"Wow it has been a long time, since I started all over, and life has changed so much in that time. Looking back now, it must have been a t least 11 years. Actually it has been 12." Daaku was writing, one of the usual things he did, when not waiting for Kei his adopted son. "I could write a book doing this kind of thing, but that would mean I'd have to start from the very beginning, which in this case might take more than a bit of time to tell." The pen dragged across the paper, as he grabbed for another with more ink.........

Ah, that's much better, well anyway, for those of you who don't know, I am Fang "Daaku" Raito, founder of the Tenga-ryu school of fighting. Many years ago, I went by other names, such as just Daaku, and even monster. When you are a ninja like me, there are just some things that end up having to be done, and after all the pain and suffering, life will go n regardless of what the heart and it's desires try to make us all believe." A moment goes by, as Daaku just stares at the paper, almost tearing up.........

Year 1: Pain is something that Daaku knows too much of, "I still think back, to when Tsunade left me, and I just couldn't take it, that pushed me past my limits, and I stopped loving women all together, and even though I had always been bisexual, I didn't merely go after men during this time, but instead left everything behind to once again find myself, as my hurt was hurting so badly, that I didn't understand why I was so worthless as a person, so I left Kumo, and those whom I loved, and those whom cared for me.

Year 2: Once again Daaku was alone in the world, but this gave him more time to define his skills, and even rethink life as a ninja, and make a new way of fighting with not only chakra, but spirit itself. It is the spirit that Daaku always wanted to gain control of, and so he tried to do just that. " Starting this year, I hid away in the mountains and trained away from the world. itself. I called this a way of not only fighting, bit life itself, the Tenga-ryu Art, and it seems that because of popular I am, pun intended of course, I simply couldn't be left alone, and others had been searching for me."

Year 3: Another year had now passed, and Raito showed up out of the blue. "It was shocking that he'd come looking for me. At first I was skeptical." Raito of course had been searching for almost three years for Daaku, and with everyone he had with him, he refused to leave without first learning something, and so brought about the idea of Daaku opening the ninja school of the Tenga-ryu Art. This doesn't happen over night of course, and so time passed in all the things needed for this school's opening to be accomplished.

Year 4: A ninja school, it seemed that Daaku's dream of teaching once again was finally to come true, but was this the right path for him?? "Like I said, I was very skeptical at first, but this was also during the time I had begun study of the Alnaphar summons, and more of what could be done with the Tarnaic, and the odd kekkei genkai that Ayumi, Raito, others, and I possess." Much more than hearsay, it was not merely an eye trait, but a full blown kekkei genkai, that Daaku never turns off, which in turn made it even more of an addition to his body. "Hmm, those summons the kekkei genkai, what about a new line of jutsu, forbidden, and regular?? I love the idea." So the opening of the Tenga-ryu Art school complete, it was back to training.

Year 5: Raito was one of the first students of the Tenga-ryu Art, and like others after him, he was to first be taught not even how to attack, but the way to hold a sword correctly. “That didn’t take very long, and he went to on to learn and began to master other techniques, such as the Raging Dragon Fang. "My school thriving on the eastern section of the Esterc Mountain range in Kumo, and having branched out to have teachers other than me meant the world to me.” Dreams do come true they say...........

Year 6: “There was also one jutsu that I have worked on for years on end, and just keep on working with it, no matter what.” The Senhappa jutsu, now called the Reidokuhappa, for reasons that Daaku had disclosed once before. “Heh, stupid Narator guy, of course I did. The reason is because the true nature of the attack is far to dangerous to use the true name, and thus there are always ways to lock it away, but of course I also had been training with the Catalyst Flare Jutsu, and Big Bang Jutsu to perfection.

"I also had to keep at manipulating life energy and chakra, to make the use of the Life Commune Jutsu I had developed. If I am to make and run a school, and keep teaching jutsu, I need to understand them first. The use of Alnaphar summons for my ultimate jutsu was one of the main things on my mind, but I also kept in mind that a lot of my students, and others attending the school were ready to learn the Roaring, and Sky Dragon Fang Techniques.”


Year 7: Raito had been doing more than a little training of his own, yet Daaku was not pleased with this.“I wanted him to stop, but he was becoming to wrapped up his own power. The Tenga-ryu Art is about the spirit, and so are it’s techniques, but Raito began using a powerful technique I had once used, but stopped in the Tenga-ryu Art...........the Ultimate Fang. I know he was losing himself, just as I did, because that jutsu does not draw power from the heart, but waves of insanity that eat away at the core of a person.” Figuring that Raito would eventually come to his senses as he did, Daaku left well enough alone.

Year 8: Raito even went as far to kill a few of his students during a sparring match with the attack, but just brush it off as accidental death, and honor their deaths. "I don't understand why he would do that. Even if he was pushing them to be stronger, that move is far to powerful to be using on young students, and I thought he stopped........"It was something that Daaku thought was far too questionable and he sought to look farther into what had happened, but things were cluttered at this time and after a year of moving, and having the location of the entire school switched, Daaku had seemingly reached nirvana himself.

Year 9: The school reopened a few months later right outside of Konoha, but Raito continued down his dark path. "I was overjoyed, when Raito came to me, and we had a talk. He was done with his ways of the dark. Raito saw that the Ultimate Fang was changing him, and he did not want to be the person that he saw himself becoming. I of course believed him, and we went on with life" With more students than ever, and new ranks, and additions to the school, that Daaku could easily afford, things seemed to be perfect.

"I finally completed my studies on on the soul chakra, and how to use the Life Commune Jutsu to the fullest, and this marked the time when I came up with the the Raifuyougi: Zokusei Genki Dama, and when I began to work with Raito using our kekkei genkai to make new jutsu using it's power alone. I had quite a few students graduate from the school, and go off to become great ninja, but there were still some who wanted to stay and become teachers of the Tenga-ryu.

Year 10: Who says that it is impossible to find love?? "I can't believe it was only 2 years ago that I met him. Songi, now the love of my life. I thought my heart would never heal from the loss of Tsunade, but it did, and it healed a whole lot faster, with Songi there to support me, and stay by my side." Daaku had the school open, but being so busy never actually noticed Kei and Sogi as anything more than students at the school. With the school doing fine, Raito back on the right track, and others teaching, Daaku didn't need to work all the time, and so had time to fall into a relationship that wouldn't have been possible otherwise.

Surprisingly, a visitor came from a sparring match with Daaku. "I was busy that day, and for once turned down a fight, but when Songi himself came and brought the visitor to me, I had to change my mind. I was almost disturbed after not seeing her for so long." It seemed that Ayumi had already met Songi and had a very long and intimate chat with him about me, which later on that that day proved to lead to some ravishing fun............."Yeah, umm narrator guy, stop doing that." So Ayumi and Daaku did battle, and Ayumi decided not to finish the match, admitting that though she was very strong, she was no match for her father, and the year finished off with no much else happening.

Year 11: "It was for the best I suppose, I look back now a year later, and it just seems to be something that couldn’t be helped.” Raito challenged Daaku to a dual, and the students, members, teachers, and others who just admired the school were shocked. He had been becoming more distant, but that was supposedly because he was committed solely to becoming a great Tenga-ryu Art master, and so it was never questioned. However when the new batch of students were signing up for the school, Raito seemed to snap.

"Why would anyone want to kill me, not only that, but their own master?? The greed, and want of more power maybe, or merely the insanity of Raito’s core falling apart. I just never thought that he'd been hurt that badly inside. It was a huge shock to me, and something that I feel was my entire fault." The battle was a long one, as if Raito were matched to Daaku in every way, with each attack, Raito knew it, every jutsu, Raito, and Daaku always had a counter for the other. It was a battle that will probably be talked apart for the good part of this century. “Raito was good, he was more than good, there is a time during the fight when I actually though he was better than me, but I could not let his suffering, nor insanity to go on.”

The battle was becoming more destructive with every punch, kick, slash, and blast of chakra, until Raito thought that it was about time to stop playing with Daaku, and uses the Ultimate Fang to finish him off. “I have no idea what was in his head, but his words of playing with me the entire battle, I just didn’t know what to think with that, but there was one move I knew he had no chance against.” The final art, Miy itto Ami. The Holy Blossom Petal. The move to top all others, the spirit that harbors mind, body, and soul, then end of almost 12 years of training........

“What, how can you know that move Daaku-sensei?? I though you told me that none of us could even learn it, for doing it once means instant mastery. I have been trying all this time to learn it, why.........WHY are you in the stance for it?? I'll kill you where you stand with this blow.” Raito was far too gone to be able to stop himself, but Daaku knew that his student needed to die, it was the only way, regardless of what the emotions would be afterwards, this had to be done
“Ultimate Fang!!!”

“Seinaru Hanabira!!!”

Daaku thrust his blade up, and it was over after his mouth closed. The raw power of the human spirit, communing with life, the soul, and the heart of the sword, was too much. The Ultimate Fang was torn apart, and Raito was lifted off the ground, as arcs of spirit and life-force ripped through him, and his armor. He lie on the ground, bleeding, looking back on his days. “Ugh, I won’t die here Daaku, just you........ugh wait, this isn’t over.” Daaku never looked back, but he did know that Raito died, no one could survive such an attack, and week slater, what was left of Raito’s body was found rotting in the Konoha Forest. “I was something that stayed with me, and I couldn’t do it anymore. I left my school in the hands of my highest ranking student before Raito, and took my leave. I would not give up teaching, but I needed something a bit simpler. I could not face running a great ninja school knowing I had failed my greatest student."

Year 12: "Songi talked to me on this matter for some time, and I eventually figured that his idea was not a bad one. His son Kei was just old enough to be a genin, and in need of a sensei, it was nothing to have him assigned to Arashi, and so he was. The time when all of the other students graduate from the ninja academy, so I might get new students as well." Daaku knew that it was in his best interest to take the test to be officially a jonin in Konoha, though his status in Kumo would never go away.

Some things are very nostalgic and Daaku had been paying the entire 12 years for his mansion to be cleaned, and updated because it was a place that he loved, and couldn't give up. There is even a garden on the front lawn, filled with gorgeous flowers, though some think it odd that flowers are growing from a giant crater. "Heh, it's only a few days until I get to have fun I guess, but that pretty much ends this lil entry. I really COULD make a book!!!!"

With all that said, things moved into a more twisted time where Daaku knew that after such a long time he was bound to go back to his pas once more and obtain the forces that he needed to so that he would obtain the Ultimate Tarnaic power, or rather the Crest of Essence. So how did this happen, well simply put, Daaku went friggin nuts and attacked Kumo, his very home after such a long time, and he ended up getting into a battle with Sanosuke Uchiha: friend, acquaintance, and Rayex’s uncle as well. He also happened to be the man whom killed his students all that time ago. To make a very long story short, the battle kind of ended like this.

In the reality of Sano pouring out what seemed his everything into a single attack, Daaku was not doing this. "More than a decade ago, you said you couldn't kill me. That weakness is still there!" Daaku’s eyes gained an even deeper hue, his anger revealing itself more than it had shown before. He was to the point where he planned on killing everybody, but he thought of Ayumi’s life, that of Rayex, and even children he didn’t know. It was like the thoughts were not his own, yet still his own.

The mockery from Sano was the key. “SHUT UP!!!!!!! I COULD HAVE KILLED YOU ALONG TIME AGO, BUT I SAW YOU CHANGED YOU BASTARD!!!!! DAMN IT GET LOST!!!!!!” He was far gone from stopping, and the collision of attack was monumental, the burst and combined explosion would have killed Sanosuke, but the nature of Sano’s own attack, and also the harsh fact that Daaku had reverted his chakra elsewhere would have saved him. The blast was nothing short of chaotic, and everyone around would have felt the shock, as if the cry of another being had been allowed to reach other people’s ears. Even through all the smoke, shining light and darkness, where nothing could be seen, something was visible. It was like a nebula, and bright radiating nebula that had been opened.

It was Daaku’s nebula, the one that contained the secrets of life, the secrets of the Tarnaic, Alnaphar, it was his everything, it was everything……..Daaku lay on the ground motionless, his body didn’t budge, but his body was nothing like it had been before, and though the eyes were closed, a sickly yellow red glow came from his lifeless body. The forms of multiple spirits like beings could be seen flying off, one of them carrying what looked like a see-through copy of Daaku himself before he became something else entirely. What laid on the ground looked like it was perfect, no cuts, wounds, not even a drop of blood, or a speck of dirt, yet it didn’t move.

Kei stood with his arms crossed, a white aura not around him, but behind and in front of him. There were sparkling chakra balls laced throughout what Sojiro saw, and he was amazed that Kei hadn’t been knocked away. “I don’t know why this had to happen. Why did this have to happen?? Dad!!!!! No, please get up!!!” Kei just stared down at Daaku, seeing that he was not moving, not breathing. He was dead, and Kei knew it. The tears ran down his face and he dropped to his knees, his changed appearance shaking.

Kei sobbed, and stood back up, Sojiro dragging himself back along towards the others. Kei’s hair was white, but it had an odd transparent gleam to it, the hair being completely straight and draping over his shoulders. His entire body was glowing, all of his blood vessels emitted light, and his teeth were sharper than they had ever been. It was something beyond the heavens, as Kei even had multiple halos around his being, both arms, and his head and back adorned a silver-yellow halo. His attention turned to Sojiro whom was standing next to him at that time. “Kei…..what happened to you?? I can’t believe it. Daaku is dead, and Dad is some badly hurt. I don’t know what to do anymore.”

The look on Kei’s face was one of hatred. His eyes burned into Kaito whom had given Daaku a look of despising intent. Kei stepped towards him as he held Sano. “You. How could you even do such a thing??” His hand moved forward, the gleaming halo getting brighter. “He was your sensei. He was somebody whom tried to protect you.” He stepped closer, the ground flitting away pieces, they floated abnormally around Kei. He didn’t bother to say anything as Sano passed out, and Daaku was snatched up by a dragon. He just glared at Kaito.

“Wait Kei NO, calm down!!” Sojiro grabbed Kei’s arm as it ripped forward and a blast of almost clear chakra got fired at Kaito. The grab caused Kei’s arm to move in another direction, and everyone around, and in the plaza witnessed the left half of the building nearby get eradicated., its makeup glowing before blowing apart and the fragments vanishing altogether.....

Kei dropped to his knees, and stared at Sano. “You killed Daaku. You killed my DAD!!!!! WHY DID YOU DO IT!?!?!?!?!”

Daaku was dead.

Lets move on huh?? Pretty much after a few days Daaku more or less transformed or that much was brought back to life from having his spirit and essence returned to his body in a new shape that granted him the power of the crest. Anyway all the cool shit happened for years to come and ther was peace or whatever, still as time passed, those around daaku aged and some of them grew to be just as he was in the light of chakra. Sojiro and Kei both must still be alive somewhere, but who knows where. It was deemed noteworthy that the three should not see each other as their fluxes could cause something far worse than anything ever before witnessed to happen in the Naruverse.

Oh geez, so now like 50 years after Naruto ended up being the Hokage, more drama arises and like usually some corny ass group of people want to start more shit for everybody. So once again we gotta go back about 10 years to when Daaku heard that Kei was running amuck and working for some twisted people, or rather using the people and pretending to work for them to gaiun his own ends. It was here that Daaku grew tired of not being as he should be and invoked the right of Nebula that had long been sealed upon him and gained his Demonic form. Or at least it looked that way.

With such raw essence now even greater than ever at his command, Daaku began matering other things in the naruverse and planning on what to do when the time came for he and his old family members to spawn the destiny that was hundreds of years in the making. So now with such new forces and peril in the land, Daaku once again busts out of the woodwork and starts pwning again.....​
 
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Name: Haruka Oei

Age:21

Gender: male

Personality:Haruka is a happy guy who is always smiling and always trying to do his best.He likes to make friends, and help people. He is very kind and very considerate. He loves to do things on his own, but likes it even more when friends help. He is one of those few people who you can always count on.

Appearance: Haruka Has medium length pink hair, with black underneath. He wears blue jeans and a blue shirt, with a white cloak over it. He has dark brown eyes that appear to see straight to a persons soul. He normally carries a staff with him. It's a long oak staff about 6 feet tall, just the same height as Haruka.

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Alliance: Heaven and Earth

Village: Hidden rock Jutsu

Rank: Jonin

Clan: No clan

Kekkai Genkai: The Earthly Eye- This is a kekkai genkai that was just created, Haruka is the only known wielder. He was born from an ancestor of sandaime kazekage, and an Uchiha, which created the Earthly Eye. This eye is like both the Satetsu manipulation and sharingan. Haru's eyes are normal most of the the time, but when he activated The earthly eye, his eye turns completely grey, including the pupil, and black swirls like the sharingan appear at the edge of the grey. The Earthly Eye allows Haru to see heat, and Magnetic forces, and the lifelines for humans. This Kekkai Genkai also gives him strength more then anyone has ever known. His body is hard already, but with his jutsu's it makes it harder, and his Kekkai Genkai allows him to use stronger earth Jutsu's.


Weapons: Rensen Geki: a long katana, your average length of about 3 to 4 feet., It is made of a hard metal called Orichalcum, the same stuff Ultima is made out of.

Kunai: He uses regular kunai to.

Senbon: Long needles used to pierce someone's body.

Shuriken, and demon wind shuriken:

Divine light Shuriken: a special type of shuriken that Haruka made himself. It is like a demon wind shuriken, but bends light to become invisible.


Chakra element: earth, lightning, water

Jutsu: (10 for Genin, 15 for Chuunin, 20 for Jounin. Jounin may have three Forbidden)

Taijutsu
Stone body technique:
This technique sends chakra through his body making it hard as stone, allowing nothing to pierce the skin. This Jutsu only lasts a little while.

[Sub-jutsu]-Magnetic stone technique: This taijutsu uses Lightning chakra that melds with the stone body technique and creates a huge magnet to grab any metal from enemies within a certain distance.

Stone fist technique: This taijutsu turns Haru's hands into stone to be used as weapons to punch the enemy.

Electrical Paralysis technique: This techniique uses lightning chakra to shock and paralyze an enemy for a short amount of time. To complete this jutsu he must touch the spine of the enemy with his right hand, while lightning chakra is coursing through his body.

Strength of the Earth technique: This technique takes the power and strength of the earth and supplements Haru's own strength without making his body into stone.

Speed of lightning: This uses chakra lightning in his body to supplement his reflexes past that of your average jonins, and even past the elite ninja, to what was once considered high for an akatsuki.

Grace of water: This Jutsu uses the water in his body to control his movements to be more graceful and fluid, like water.

These last three jutsu's are always activated when Haru starts a fight.


Ninjutsu
Rock wall Jutsu: creates a wall of rock that appears in front of Haru and can distract them for a few seconds.

[Sub-Jutsu] Rock Tomb jutsu: Uses the rock wall jutsu to curl around the enemy and crash in upon them creating a tomb.

[Sub-Jutsu]- Rock spike tomb: Sends spikes into the tomb stabbing into the person in the tomb bleeding them.


Chidori: Gathers lightning chakra into ones hands making it appear visible and with a noise like birds, and can be used 5 times.

[Sub-jutsu] Water Chidori- uses water chakra with lightning chakra to create a white blade in the hand of the user, like the chidori, but with water added into the mix, adding an extra shock.

[Sub-Jutsu] Chidori Storm- Creates 4 rock clones that each use chidori and come from four directions to converge on the enemy. Can only use this once, counts for using chidori four times.

Ground tunnel Jutsu: (Can't remember real name) Haru uses earth chakra to go into the earth through a tunnel and appear where he wants to appear.

Rock clone Jutsu: Creates clones out of rock that looke exactly like Haru, but are stronger then normal clones because they are made of rock.

Water clone Jutsu: takes less chakra to create these clones.

Water style; Water dragon Jutsu: Creates a large water dragon that attacks the enemy.

Magnetic wall Jutsu: Uses earth and lightning chakra to create an invisble wall of magnetism which deflects any weapon, and strengthens his attacks, sending his weapons flying through the field faster then it should be.

Summoning jutsu: Allows Haru to summon wolves to his aid.

Genjutsu
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Forbidden Jutsu
Grand summoning Jutsu: Summons the great king of wolves, Origenki.

Stone Wave Jutsu: creates two tidal waves of pure stone about a mile long, and 100 yards high that converge on each other crushing anything that is between them.

Polar Magnetism jutsu: This Jutsu is forbidden because it changes bodily functions and can kill people in seconds. This Jutsu changes the polar directions in someones body, making their mind think they are upside down, and making their whole body react that way and change the whole body, causing excrutiating pain, and if the person isn't strong enough, killing them.


Kekkai Genkai Jutsu:
Earthly Drain: This KG jutsu allows Haru to drain the chakra and lifesource from around his body, from trees and plants, to animals, and even humans.

Earthly dance: This is a special technique that allows Haru to move with the stone, becoming stone, and then human. It allows him to merge with the earth and spread out, then come up anywhere he likes.


Earthly nexus: This Jutsu takes metals from the area around Haru and brings them out to form what he wishes. He can create Arrows, Bolts, or anything that he wants. He can also meld these weapons with his body allowing certain body parts to shape into something else.


Bio: Haruka Oei was born inside of the Hidden rock village as a clanless orphan. No one ever knew his parents or where he came from, so they put him into an orphanage until he was 8, when he started showing signs of a Kekkai Genkai that needed training. He first used his kekkai genkai to help dying plants in the Orphanages garden, and no one even knew, until one day one of the sisters who ran the orphanage found him, and his gray eyes. They were scared and so they sent Haruka to the Ninja academy for training. No one had ever seen what he had before, but when his blood was studied they found that he was the child of an Uchiha and a desendant of the old Kazekage who used Satetsu Manipulation.

Haruka trained away from most of the other kids at first, but as he grew up they put him with them, and he rose fast with friends by his side. He was always better with teammates, and they were always better near him, it was just how he was. When he was a Chunin he had alot of missions with his friends, and was the first to reach Jonin. He made Jonin when he was 17, and he now fights to protect his friends who he has made in the Hidden rock village.

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Name: Matsui Haruma

Age:13

Gender: male

Personality:Matsui is rather indifferent. Rarely caring for other things around him. Matsui never likes to let anyone in and constantly remains distant from other people. He gets aggresive really easily and has various emotional outbursts. He is very proud of his power, and can become overly cocky at times.

Appearance:Matsui Haruma


Alliance: Will of Fire

Village: Konoha

Rank: chuunin

Clan: Haruma clan


Kekkai Genkai:


sousakanougan- Sousakanougan is a dojutsu kekkei genkai passed through the the Haruma clan. It has certain similarities to the Sharingan, since it transforms through "Stages" like the Sharingan. When it is activated the iris turns a pale silver and the pupil turns into a eight sided star shape. The pupil is surrounded by "bands" and the number of bands increase according to what stage the Sousakanougan is in.

Sousakanougan has a variety of abilities, most of which are unknown and unexplored. One of its abilities is that the user will be able to use a holy chakra called Shinsei. However, its main ability is chakra corruption or chakra manipulation as some say. In a sense it gives the user perfect control not of their own chakra but chakra of other living and non living things. Another one of their abilities is perfect perception to an extent greater than both Sharingan and Byakugan, being able to break through genjutsu and even reverse them ( unless the person's mind is unbeleivably strong).

1st stage- This is the most basic stage of Sousakanougan. In this stage only one band is surrounding the pupil. While the user can still make the mental link and peirce through genjutsu the corruption is limited only to elemental chakra. It can change what kind of element the jutsu is supposed to be. For example if somebody did fire ball jutsu, Kishin can change its properties to a waterball or a ball of mud. However there is a limit to how much he can do this, and if he does it more then three times a battle then he will be unable to use sousakanougan and may even render him blind for a short period of time.

2nd stage- In this stage the pupil is surrounded by two bands instead of one. It has all the abilities it previously had exept now it has "chakra disruption". By adding Shinsei chakra to his hands and making phisical contact Sousakanougan can "disrupt" the chakra flow and the chakra input and output. At first there will be nothing wrong but as the person continues to use chakra, their jutsu's power will dwindle and eventually they wont be able to use as much chakra and will have to resort to taijutsu only.

3rd stage- In this stage the pupil is surrounded by three bands now. Including all the abilities it had before, it now had control over chakra routes. With just the use of his mind, Kishin can control the route that jutsu travel. However, this can only work on far to mid-range jutsu. So basically if he activates this then the only thing they can do is taijutsu, genjutsu and close range jutsus. Like in the first stage, there is a limit to how much he can do this and the reprocutions will be the same as in the first stage.

Shinsei chakra- Shinsei chakra is a holy chakra element that controls elements that aren't of this world. It isn't weak against any chakra element, but it doesn't have any advantages against the other chakra elements either.. One thing special about this chakra is that it doesn't just attack on a phisical scale but on a spiritual scale, hurting the spirit/soul or whatever leaving no phisical evidence of any damage.

Weapons:Zero- Zero is a three sided shuriken like weapon with an endless chakra chain attached to the middle. Although shuriken looking, Zero can act like a boomerang being able to be thrown and returned to the original place it was thrown. It's effect is absorption being able to absorb chakra from whatever it cuts or touches for that matter (excluding Matsui). To Some people the chain would be a disadvantage to Zero and Matsui, but it's quite the contrary. With a little bit of chakra, each link of the chain can expand and make an air tight dome around Matsui and whoever he chooses, within a certain area around him.. The dome's walls slowly drain chakra from the victom until they barely have anything left.

Chakra element: Lightning, water( due to intensive training, is able to use the watervaper in the air for jutsu).

Jutsu:
Ninjutsu

1. kinshi sareta neji senkei no jutsu (barred spiral technique)- This justu is a technique similar to Rasengan. In some aspects it is even harder to learn. Using chakra manipulation, a spiral galaxy shaped disk of chakra is created. Once the disk is established two "bars" appear on either side of the disk. The disk can be used as a close range attack or a projectile technique. When it makes contact, it doesn't just cut flesh, it also cuts chakra greatly decreasing their chakra count. The lightning is so powerful that the body wont be able create new cells for 24 hours after they are hit by this attack. So they can't be healed properly for that period of time.

A) Raiton Kinshi Sareta Neji Senkei no jutsu (lightning release barred spiral technique)- By adding the lightning element to the jutsu Kinshi Sareta Neji Senkei becomes engulfed by a chidori like lightning. This has even greater destructive capabilities than the original version. Upon impact it has a very high probability of paralyzing upon the original effects. The lightning is so powerful that the body wont be able create new cells for 24 hours after they are hit by this attack. So they can't be healed properly for that period of time.

B) Futon Kinshi Sareta Neji Senkei no jutsu( wind release barred spiral tachnique)- Instead of adding wind chakra while still in the palm, this jutsu gets wind chakra while it's traveling to its target. Upon impact the entire disk transforms into millions of little needles. The needles completly cut through the body, tearing through everything. Since the needles are small on a microscopic level, there wont be any holes where the needles have been.

2.ooki ku hirai ta burakkuho^ru no jutsu (Gaping black hole)- Matsui molds chakra in his stomach and heart into a sphere the size of his head. The sphere is completly black and looks almost endless. The sphere appears from his mouth and is flung towards the target. The sphere's speed rivals the fastest projectile in the Naruverse and is almost impossible to dodge by an average ninja.

A) mugen no ooki ku hirai ta burakkuho^ru no jutsu (Endless Gaping Black Hole)- This jutsu made the same as it's original version only it's effect is different. Instead of a black ball it comes out as a beam. The beam much more powerful than the ball but is much slower.

3.Suiton: Mizu Kemono ( Water release: Water Beasts)
Using a mixture of water manipulation and shape manipulation, Matsui can make beasts of anykind of beast he can think of. Each beast he makes has multiple paperbombs inside them..... so big boom.

4) Jinnukutenshi(Flesh Angel) The Jinnukutenshi, or Flesh Angel, is an upper level summon of the Haruma and a sentient being, capable of its own thoughts and actions independant of its origin, (the Haruma member who conjured it.). The summon itself is incapable of using Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, and relies solely on brute strength. Its form is held together by the Chakra given to it from the user, and this is the only Choushizen Gishiki which drains the user of his/her Chakra constantly over time. On that same coin, Ninjutsu and Genjutsu are almost completely ineffective when used against it. Being a berserker-type fighter, the
Jinnukutenshi has no true human psyche with which to affect with Genjutsu, and as for Ninjutsu, depending on the strength of the Jutsu, the Jinnukutenshi does not feel pain other then simple, brute force. Ex: Fire will burn its flesh, but it will regenerate and the summon will feel no pain.

6.Chidori- This jutsu channels a large amount of lightning-chakra to the user's hand. The high concentration of electricity produces a sound reminiscent of many birds chirping, hence the name. Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and thrusts the Chidori into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal to humans. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces.

A) Chidori Nagashi- this jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from his body, instead of concentrating it in his hand. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead only paralyzing its victims. By sending the current into the ground Matsui can stun opponents from a distance.

B) Chidori Eisou- Matsui increases the range of his Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. However, each of these additional blades is proportionally weaker than a single focused Chidori. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb any target it hits.

7. uchouten ninarukoto( walking on air)- By engulfing his feet in chakra, Matsui can walk on air as it was solid ground. This is basically the same principle as the walking on water or climbing up trees techniuque.

8. Mizu no Tatsumaki(Tornado of water)-A technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious

9. Mizu No Yaiba(Sword of Water)- A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsus.

10)Den-Nami-Yuushou(Lightning Wave Champion)-The user makes an X shape with his arms, once the charge is complete, the arms are thrown to the side as the enrgy flows to, and concentrates into the limbs, then they can use the stored electricity to deliver punishing and shocking blows to the opponent, shot out in a wide arc, or used as a variety of containment/defense fields. The containment is used for a quick escape, or to obtain the advantage in battle.

The fields can be many different forms( cage, sphere, walls, etc...). The field can be broken, but if touched with bare bodyparts, they will be electrified.The wave is moderate speed(about as fast as a kunai, but if it hits, it can send spasms through the opponents body. It can be dodged or blocked.
Like the battle spirit, the champion enhances hand to hand combat, if hit with an attack directly, they are electrocuted, and if skilled enough, can be used to cut the skin, but since it is concentrated on the hands and feet, the damage to them is intensified if used for more than ten minutes

11) Lightning wave spirit-This technique uses no seals, the user just spreads his feet, and summons the electricity, it requires intense concentration and a bit of time. The user becomes charged with electricity, who can then use it to enhance his battle skills to super human levels, punches and kicks becom very powerful( a kick to the arm will surely break the bone, a glancing hit will fracture it), or the user can ionize
it, when it is ionized, it can deaden or sever the nerves to the body part it hit.
Ex. The user hits you in the arm, your arm becomes useless for a time, if the nerves are severed, it will become useless permanently.

The downside of this technique is that it strains your body to the limits, and if used for too long( over ten minutes), can reverse the flow of electricity in your body, so you burn from the inside out. Also, it takes a few minutes to charge, so if the user is not aware of his surroundings, he can be defeated easily. With enough skill, the user can move while charging, but cannot perform any jutsu, it breaks the process of the charge.


Genjutsu​
12. tenkuu no jigoku(Sky of Hell)- This genjutsu goes directly to the brain, making it actual reality to the actual victom. First the victom of in the place they love the most, doing the thing they love the most with the person they love the most. Pretty sweet right? After the user has gotten used to their new "Heaven" Matsui enters the reality and everything changes. It goes from everything they love the most to the place where they hate and fear the most, and pinned to a cross while watching the person who dthey love the most get tortured and killed by demonic version of themselves. Time there goes very slowly and one second feels like a year.

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu:

11. hoshi no hashira(Star Pillars)- By using Shinsei chakra Matsui can make pillars of various elements and chakra. Like yougan no hashira it can be used for both offense and defense and can't be put out by any chakra element period.

12. kouha (light waves)- By cupping his hands together and mixing both Shinsei chakra and the essesence of light itself, Matsui can make a ball of pure light energy. By thrusting his cuffed hands forward the light ball transforms into a wave of light energy. The wave can reach up to 10 meters.

13. kuroi nami(Black waves)- This jutsu is the polar opposite of Kouha. But instead of a ball of pure light energy it is a ball of pure dark energy. However unlike Kouha, Kuroi Nami expands with the darkness in a persons heart. If a person has a lot of darkness in their heart then the jutsu will get out of control and be unbeleivablely powerful.


15. Hiraishin no Jutsu- It allows the user to move himself to another location in the blink of an eye. Although it is often compared with the Body Flicker Technique, the speed of this jutsu is much greater. In principle, this jutsu is similar to the Summoning Technique, as it revolves around manipulation of time and space rather than accelerated movement, but instead of bringing something to users, it sends them somewhere. Additionally, it makes no noise and produces no puff of smoke, allowing the user to appear behind someone unnoticed.

To activate this jutsu, the user needs a special seal or "jutsu formula" to mark the destination. After this is done, the user enters a dimensional void that almost instantaneously transport himself to the location of the seal. Matsui applied the formula in advance to weapons such as kunai. By giving one such kunai to a person, he can immediately teleport to that person at any time. He an also apply the mark to a touched area, such as his opponent or some other surrounding feature.

Furthermore, if an object marked with the seal may touch the ground, Matsui will immediately know the position of everyone close to the object. This technique also possesses surveillance purposes as he can continuously sense where anyone is as long as the seal is on them. No matter where an opponent is, he arrived directly next to tim. The jutsu is also very unique because it requires no use of chakra, due to a special secondary seal that emits the same chakra as him, allowing him to have an instant connection to the area.

Bio: Like any ninja, Matsui's past is filled with many deaths, and has missed out on his fair share of happiness. He was born to Katashi and Izumi Haruma thirteen years ago in the cloud village, making him the youngest of 17 children. In the Haruma clan the next leader isn't chosen by the oldest, they are chosen by who the current leader thinks is the the most deserving of the title. Well anywayz, around the time Matsui was born Katashi was starting to get too old to be an active leader (In his mid 50's) and decided it was time to the next leader. After weeks of deliberating, He had decided to pick the next leader on the day of Matsui's first birthday. But cliche' and predictable as it is, both Katashi and Izumi were murdered in their sleep that night (like in a bad anime).

With nobody to tell them who's the leader, the children started fighting over who should be leader. Eventually the fights started to get violent and bloody and the Haruma clan was on a path to self destruction. Seeing that this fighting would just get everybody in the clan killed, the eldest child Ichiro took his youngest brother and left the cloud village. After a month of hardship and a long journey, Ichiro and Matsui finally made it to Konoha. Once there, Ichiro met Yuuki Uzumaki. The two instantly, fell in love and eventually moved in together. Due to Yuuki's connection to the Hokage, Ichiro and Matsui were accepted into the village and weren't counted as missing-nin from the cloud village.

By the time Matsui was five, he had already started developing his Sousakanougan. He went to the academy, and graduated with flying colors when he was 9. He was put into team 8 with Ichiro as his sensei. Team 8 was very successful and was even sent on A and sometimes even S-rank missions. During an S-rank mission they stopped to take a break in the outskirts of the village that they were going to enter. Ichiro left Matsui in the resting place while him and the other member's of team 8 left to continue on the mission. They were ambushed by the kage of that village and his subordinates and were killed there and then.

After finding out what happened to his brother and teamates, a devastated Matsui returned to the village to deliver the bad news.1 year later, even after Ichiro's death, Yuuki and Matsui still lived together and Yuuki was even helping Matsui prepare for his Chuunin exams. But do to unforseen cirsumstances, she had to leave the village for a little bit. With nobody to train him, Matsui went to train in the forest overby the gate to the leaf village. There he met a strange middle-aged man who offered to train him. The man's name was Zero Nakagashi. He was an S-rank ninja who traveled from village to village with no real affiliation to any village. He taught Matsui a variety of high-level jutsu, and even gave him a giant three-sided shuriken which was named after Zero. Because of his master's training Matsui was the only one who passed the chuunin exams, and was even considered by some to be jonin level. Zero left the village again shortly after without even saying goodbye to Matsui.

About a month after the chuunin exams, there were a small group of people attacking Konoha. To counter these attacks, the hokage had dispatched several groups of ten jonin and chuunin, Matsui being apart of them. After one attack, the band of people were followed by the chuunin and jonin. Matsui went solo for a little bit to follow two people who were going a different way. He eventually caught up with the two people and unmasked them. Upon unmasking them, he saw two very familiar faces: Yuuki and Zero. Both of them looked pale and were coughing up blood. After a long discussion, and a battle after that, Matsui defeated his two friends who were both in a severly weakened state, (they were not even at half strength). After saying their goodbyes to Matsui, Zero activated a paper bomb, killing both him and Yuuki.

Now about two years later, Matsui is called out again to defend his village. And so starts another bad chapter of the boy's life.


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Name: Ayana Komiya

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Personality: Ayana is a calm person. She never shows fear even when faced with death. She takes everything lightly and tries to find fun in everything she does. It’s hard for her to take a life so she beats her opponents into a state of unconsciousness. She can be bossy at times but is willing to take orders from shinobi higher rank than her.

Appearance:
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Alliance: Suiton Fist

Village: Village Hidden in the Mist

Rank: Jounin

Clan: Komiya Clan – The Komiya clan are known for their knowledge is genjutsu and their ability to use water jutsu without a water source nearby. They also have good skills with the sword. They are great strategists. They can be noted by their brown skin and light brown eyes as all members of the clan share that same trait. Also every high ranking member of the clan carries bottles of water with them which they can be seen drinking a lot. The Komiya Clan found that by drinking a lot of water, they can combine their chakra with water, allowing them to produce water, itself, through the pours in their skin and combining it with water vapor in the air to produce water techniques without a water source nearby. They have to constantly drink water in order to keep themselves from dehydrating.

Kekkai Genkai: None

Weapons: Katana, Kunai Knives, Paper Bombs, (Bottles of Water)

Chakra element: Water, Lightning, Fire

Jutsu:
Kinjutsu (Forbidden Techniques) :

Demonic Illusion: Box of Souls (genjutsu) - This forbidden technique requires a lot of chakra and concentration. This jutsu traps the enemy in a square surrounded by 4 statues. The statues eyes begin to glow and then create a blinding flash. After the flash the enemy sees that he/she have been stabbed from all sides with the statues’ swords. Then souls that have been trapped in the jutsu come from the statues’ swords and grabs the soul of the enemy pulling it into the sword to be trapped in the jutsu forever. (Reason for being forbidden: This jutsu has been known to shorten the life span of the user and will put the user in terrible pain causing her to be hospitalized. This is a last resort jutsu)

Fire Release: Crimson Blue Flame (ninjutsu) – This forbidden technique requires accuracy. After the hand signs are done the user MUST look at their target because whatever the user looks at instantly becomes engulfed in a shiny blue flame that freezes things upon contact. (Reason for being forbidden: The user must look at the target. If the user becomes distracted and look somewhere else it too will become engulfed in cold flames. Besides the fact that it uses over 50% of the users chakra, all allies should be far away because they could cause a distraction and be looked at and become engulfed in flames.)

Water Release: Aquatic Armor (medicjutsu) - This technique was created by Ayana. Water rushes from her pours and covers her entire body. The water then heals all wounds on the body to as if they were never even there. (Reason for being forbidden: Because the water is from her body it dehydrates her faster and uses a lot of chakra. She has to drink fresh water immediately to keep from dying of dehydration rather than her wounds.)

Katanajutsu (Sword Techniques)

Aquatic Blade Technique – Ayana releases water from both her wrists that stretches out and forms a blade of water. The water blades are as strong if the blades were made of metal. Ayana can make the blade stretch to combat enemies far away.

Lightning Current: Thunder Blade – Ayana sends waves of electricity to the blade of her sword. The electricity is so powerful that it causes the blade to be able to cut through rock and other metals.

Genjutsu (Illusion Techniques)

Demonic Illusion: Binding Tree- With this jutsu, the user can make themselves disappear so that they can approach their opponent unnoticed. Once near the desired target, a tree will grow at the target's feet and branches from an illusory tree will bind them from behind so that they are unable to even move or use hand seals. Once the opponent believes that they are captured, the user can then reappear from above the tree and quickly kill the opponent.

Demonic Illusion: Mirror Sight-The enemy sees everything backwards. To the enemy right is left, left is right, up is down, and down is up.

Vision of Transparency – The user becomes invisible to the enemy just as long as she remains immobile. If she makes a sudden movement then the jutsu cancels and she can be seen again. (Used to spy)

Taijutsu (Martial Arts Techniques)

Lightning Current: Thunder Fist – Ayana’s fist and feet become charged with electricity. Upon contact the enemy gets a shock that slows them down for a little while.

Ninjutsu (Ninja Techniques)

Water Release: Black Rain Technique - This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil.

Water Prison Technique - This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. Clones can be used in place of the actual person, provided that the clone is the one that performed the technique.

Water Prison: Conductability - While the enemy is in the water prison technique the user sends an electric current through her arm to deal more damage to the enemy.

Water Dragon Bullet Technique - takes the form of a giant, powerful dragon, created out of water. This jutsu usually requires 42 hand signs but it only takes Ayana 15.

Water Release: Semi Death Technique - This technique is one of Ayana's more helpful ones. Within a split second she is able to turn her entire body into water. This way it weakens the damage she recieve from attacks that would otherwise kill her.

Lightning Hound - By manipulating lightning chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the lightning expand to can create the form of a hound. The hound-shape remains connected to the user's hand with a bolt of lightning, allowing them to control it during its attack.

Flock of Pain Technique – Ayana creates a flock of birds of electricity that fly from her hand and towards the enemy. The birds shocks whoever touches them and fades away after being touched. Because the birds are so small the amount of chakra used depends on how many birds Ayana creates.

Paralysis: Zero Mobility – Ayana sends an electric current through the ground. When it reaches the enemy’s feet the enemy cant move and is stuck in that one spot for a short time. She can control the current so that it wont effect allies.

Fire Release: Immortal Phoenix - This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is used mainly as a distraction as the user isnt really aiming.

Fire Dragon Flame Missile - This technique exhales a long stream of incredibly hot fire from the user's mouth like that of a flamethrower.

Flame of the Snake’s Head – A flame emits from Ayana’s mouth. The flame take s the shape of a snake as it gets closer to it target. As it gets closer it opens its mouth and just before it reaches the enemy it engulfs the enemy in its mouth of flames and explodes.

Gigenjutsu (Joke Techniques)

Lustful Sins Technique (genjutsu) – Ayana creates an illusion to the enemy. Depending on the enemy, he or she sees the most attractive man/women that he/she have seen. The illusion then lures the enemy to it (seemingly to have sex) but when the enemy gets within touching distance of it, it transforms into the enemy’s worst nightmare, sending chills down the enemy’s back. The illusion is nude and what the illusion looks like depends on the enemy’s natural attractions. (Ayana uses this technique to get a quick laugh either during battle or when she’s bored)

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: None

Bio: Ayana is seen as gifted in her clan and in the Mist Village. She became a Genin at the age of 9 and a Chunin at 12 and Jounin at age 16. She mastered her clan’s genjutsu and water techniques at an earlier age than her father, who is the clan’s leader. Her swordsmen skills are said to rival those of the Legendary 7 Swordsmen of the Mist long before her time.
Ayana was given a special sensei because of her gift when she became a Genin. She trained with a young boy named Daichi Ikoga. Their sensei was named Irei Nakada. They trained and went on missions for years until a couple years ago. On a mission to the Land of Fire they were ambushed by shinobi. They were outnumbered but still fought back and in the end only Ayana and Daichi were left standing. Their sensei was killed in battle. Distraught with the fact that their sensei had died Daichi left for the Leaf Village to seek revenge. Ayana tried to follow but soon lost him and was forced to return to the Mist Village alone.
Ayana became a Jounin and started working with other Jounins on missions. Now she goes on missions for the Suiton Fist Alliance.
 
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