Fanfiction ► Indelible Darkness: Part 1- Chains of Fate

[Lectori Salutem]

Death by Octo-bitch. I never knew Riku had a sense of humour like that^^ Nice chapter, nice action!

 

[Chaos]

great chapter my favorite was the ursala fight lol octo-bitch max keep it up

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Haha Octo-bitch. Great line man. That was a brilliant chap! I didn't expect 3 bosses to get whooped straight away but its your story. The descriptions were really good. Keep it up man, they'll get even better. I also like this pairing nice work bruv!

 

[Kasrinok]

Hey Max! Its G-Baby(Lol), ive heard all about this fan fic from you, seems to me alot of people are waiting to see the finish of this Fan-Fic. I see most people liked the "Octo-Bitch" part lol, very creative. Ill read the whole fic sometime soon so i can too comment on it.