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Rain... He reminds... me...of.... myself... you sure his Name is Rain and not Renn?
 

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>.< darn lol.

I don't like this Nagandro dude xP

Rain... He reminds... me...of.... myself... you sure his Name is Rain and not Renn?

okay for you two, i know u guys wanted to be featured in this story but i dont think its gonna happen. When i first thought of this i had it planned in my head. The people who are in this story werent asked, i just used thier names for the character. Thats why i write the Mini Adventures, so everyone has a choice to be in the story. Sorry guys, i really am.

he was blind wow i could tell this is getting intersting

Yay! More intnresting parts coming!

Darn it. D:

Anyways, nice chapter.

lol sorry, and thanks

Omg omg omg....why am i always late now?


I WANTS MORE~!

ur a squirrel thats why! lol xP

no damnit!!!!!! D:< asona not amused...

im sorry, tell me when asona is happy :D

lol


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“Amber!” Max shouted, pounding his fists onto her front door.

Asona, Bell, John and Max were soaked. On the way back from the forest it started to rain.

A light flickered on. The group looked up at the light, then the door.Amber creaked the door so she can look out. Her eye bulged as Max came to view.

“Max!? What are you doing here?”

“We got a problem.” he said.

Amber looked back at Asona, Bella and John. “Come in.”

They walked inside Amber’s cozy home. Candles were lit and the scent of cinnamon filled the air.

“Cookies?” Amber asked.

“Yes please.” John quickly said.

Amber smiled and picked up a plate of chocolate chip cookies. The group dived into the plate quickly.

“So what’s the problem?” Amber asked.

“Cora never came home.” Max said.

“How long has she been gone?”

“Almost the whole day.”

“And who are these people?” Amber asked.

Max turned to Asona, Bell and John. They simply looked back and shrugged.

“We’re friends of Cora.” Bell said, “I’m Bell, this is Asona and John.”

“Nice to meet you. Are you three from Mother Matthews house?”

“Uh-”

“Maybe.”

“What about Cora?”

“She’ll come back, she’s not a little girl anymore. She can take care of herself.”

“Amber you don’t understand, she was in the forest.”

Amber’s eyes popped out, she ran to the phone and dialed a numer quickly.




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“What do we do!?” Cora asked.

“We run!” Rain said.

The sound of thunder crackled through the sky. Lightning flashed and rain started to pour. Cora and Rain started to run. Cora ran ahead while Rain followed behind.

“Can you see?” Cora asked through breaths.

“Barely, but its better than nothing.” Rain answered back.

“Surprise.”

“What?”

Rain fell face first into the mud. Cora stopped, Rain was gone.

“Get off me!” Rain shouted.

Surya tackled Rain to the ground. Rain kicked off Surya, Surya landed he stared at Rain. Both glared at each other.

“Are you losing it?” Surya asked.

Rain blinked, trails of water ran down his face. He could only make out the outline of Surya.

“I can still see your ugly face.”

Surya’s anger bubbled, he charged at Rain. Rain jumped and pushed off Surya’s shoulders as he approached. Rain landed behind Surya, Surya turned around and swung his arm. Rain grabbed his arm, Surya kicked Rain in the stomach.

Rain fell back, and huffed for air. Rain looked up at Surya, his whole image was disappearing. Surya pulled out his sword, aiming it at Rain’s chest. Rain blinked, water only filled his eyes and vision.

Surya’s sword slashed through the rain drops falling. Rain pulled out his own sword, it was strapped on the side of his leg. The blade popped out of the handle and blocked Surya’s sword. Rain pushed Surya away and got up. Rain stood and listened.

Rain drops falling.

The sound of every step Surya took.

The breaths he took.

The yell as he swung towards Rain.

Rain yelled himself and swung his sword at Surya. Both blocked each other’s attack. In reality both were equally match, being taught the same moves, with the same teacher, at the same time.

“Surya! We got her!” a voice shouted.

Surya and Rain turned their head towards the voice. Surya smiled and smacked Rain across the face. He fell to the wet, muddy ground. Rain dropped his sword and tried to reach for it. Surya stepped on Rain’s arm.

"Ah!" Rain struggled.

Rain looked up at Surya. Surya was just a blob, a blob with splattered water droplets. Rain tried to escape, but Surya pressed his foot on his arm. Rain listened for Surya’s next move.

Sword raised up.

Slashing through the air.

Surya’s sword pierced through Rain’s left arm, but only through his arm sleeve of his shirt. Rain blinked, trying to get a clear image of Surya’s face. Nothing. Surya could of killed him, but he didn’t. The pressure on Rain’s arm disappeared. Surya vanished, leaving Rain without Cora.
 

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okay for you two, i know u guys wanted to be featured in this story but i dont think its gonna happen. When i first thought of this i had it planned in my head. The people who are in this story werent asked, i just used thier names for the character. Thats why i write the Mini Adventures, so everyone has a choice to be in the story. Sorry guys, i really am.

No it's fine! Really don't worry about it :)

This is my favorite chapter so far btw. It's just epic lowl!
 

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Whoa... o_O.O that was sooooo epic!!! But HE LOSSTTT!!!! T.T and he can't see and they took Cora!!! Depressing!!! D:
And hahahaha I make good sweets ;D
 

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Grrrrrr today is grrrrr day cuz i had to write this whole thing on my email, i miss my computer :C



No it's fine! Really don't worry about it :)

This is my favorite chapter so far btw. It's just epic lowl!

Really? Sweeet

omg rain is so awesome he just like daredevil but, damm he lost and now i want cookies give me some lol

haha dare devil? kool and cookies? i got none :/

This is an awesome chapter. So Epic. C:

Thanks ^^

AGAIN IM LATE.

that was epic krista, i seriously cant wait to know what happens.

Wooo more epicness! lol

asona happy that there was a new chappy. but is now unamused again.

nothing pleases you! lol jk

Whoa... o_O.O that was sooooo epic!!! But HE LOSSTTT!!!! T.T and he can't see and they took Cora!!! Depressing!!! D:
And hahahaha I make good sweets ;D

lol make some cookies for John xP



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Amber's little house was full of different emotions. Nervous. Scared. Hope?

Everyone waited for a knock on the door. The knock would come from the local officers in City. Max stood in the corner of the living room, fiddling with his fingers. Asona and Bell doodled on a peice of paper. John, well it was naptime for him.

Amber stood near the window, she bit her lip, waiting for the officers to come.

"Oh!" Amber squealed.

Everyone jumped, "They're coming!" Amber shouted.

Amber ran to the door and opened it as three officers appraoched.

Each officer wore a maroon color uniform. On the left stood a shorter officer, his name badge read Brad Lovet. He had corn yellow hair and blue eyes.

The Officer to the right had bright red hair. His teeth were bright white, matching his sun-like appreance. His name was Tim Halls.

The Middle Officer had broad shoulder. More of a brutal look than the gentle looks the other two officers had. He wore dark sunglasses that matched his dark brown hair. Officer Jared Port.

"Evening ma'm." Officer Jared Port said.

Amber blushed, she swung the door wider for the officers.

Officer Jared Port walked in with his hands behind his back. He examined every teenager in the room as a trouble maker. Officer Lovet and Halls stood by the door.

"Now what is the problem here?" Officer Port asked.

Max stepped forward. "Our friend is missing."

Officer Lovet pulled a note pad out of his jacket uniform, he began to take notes.

"What is the name of your friend?" Officer Halls asked.

"Cora." Everyone said in unison. Officer Lovet scribbled down the name.

"Last place seen?"

"Um, we found her backpack in the forest." Bell said.

"By an abandon house." Asona added.

Officer Lovet nodded and scribbled on his note pad.

"We'll send a search party." Officer Port said.


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The water droplets that poured onto Rain's face started to slow. He lay still, waiting till his vision completely disappeared. As the last bit of gold in his eye faded into a dark brown, almost black, it triggered memories. Memories buried deep in his mind.

"Why can't I see?"

"You were born that way."

"Why?"

"You're something special that the Heavens sent down."

"I wish I could see."

"My son, you dont need your eyes to see the world. You can listen to the beauty around, listen and feel it."

"What if I can't?"

"You got your heart, you can see anything with it."

"Really?"

"Yes my son J---"

J---?


Rain shot open his eyes, "My name!"

Rain pulled the sword out of his left arm and sat up. The blade sliced his arm, blood trickeled down.

"My name, its starts with a J."

Rain sighed, all that surrounded him was darkness. Rain stood up, he held Surya's sword. He put it in front of him, trying to find his sword. Rain heard the clink-clank of the swords crashing into one another. Rain held both swords in hand. He swirled both swords in circular motions, gracefully each sword cutting through the remaining droplets of rain falling.

Rain gripped each handle of the swords as it twirled into his palm. Rain pushed down the swords into the soft, muddy earth. He dropped to one knee and listened. Sound waves traveled from the swords, each wave crashed into trees. Waves traveled beyond, never crashing. Rain smiled, he flipped the swords and the blade disappeared into the handle. Rain sprinted off.
 

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YAY! YOU"RE NAME STARTS WITH A J!


lol, i smiled when he got up and said that. AND YEAH IM DOODLING! FTW!


ha ha lovely, krista.
 

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This such a cute chapter~
The second part would have to be my favorite. :3
 

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Cool! I wonder what his name is!! I want to see what happens next lol.
and hahaha wait for it:
[IMG]http://1000awesomethings.files.wordpress.com/2008/09/cookies.jpg[/IMG] be happy john, I made cookies. xD
 

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I'm guessing his name is... jacob... or uhhh actually that's the only J name I really know xP

lowl nice chappy :)
 

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YAY! YOU"RE NAME STARTS WITH A J!


lol, i smiled when he got up and said that. AND YEAH IM DOODLING! FTW!


ha ha lovely, krista.

LOL BeLL ;P

omg new chappy!! x3 i happy

yay! finally!

i don't trust those officers for some reason. and plus yay rain is remembering

dont worry they're good

This such a cute chapter~
The second part would have to be my favorite. :3

really? thats great

Cool! I wonder what his name is!! I want to see what happens next lol.
and hahaha wait for it:
[IMG]http://1000awesomethings.files.wordpress.com/2008/09/cookies.jpg[/IMG] be happy john, I made cookies. xD

omg those cookies look soooooo good lol

I'm guessing his name is... jacob... or uhhh actually that's the only J name I really know xP

lowl nice chappy :)

Oh u wish Cara

[IMG]http://twilightguide.com/tg/wp-content/themes/Aspire/graphics/cat/taylor-lautner/taylor-lautner.gif[/IMG]



lol xD


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Cora’s hands and legs were tied together. A dark figure carried her on his shoulder. Every step, every minute Cora felt weak. She felt strong before, but now it felt like it was draining or her power had been turned off.

Cora could only see the muddy ground. Every time the dark figure holding her stepped, a splash of mud flew onto her face. Cora would kick and struggle, but the dark figure pinned a cold knife to her side.

Suddenly Cora was slammed onto the hard ground. It was concrete, and the entrance to Negandro’s castle. Surya stepped forward,and took off his mask.

“The rest of you stay out here, I’ll take her in.” he said.

Cora closed her eyes as Surya’s face came closer to hers. Cora didn’t want to see the scar she left him. Surya smirked and pulled Cora’s arm. Cora got up and faced Negandro’s castle entrance. The castle had a depressing look. It stopped raining, and the moonlight made the castle glitter.

Cora felt a cold object on the center of her back, she gulped and stepped forward. As Cora approached the big castle door, it open on its own. Cora gasped.

Surya pushed Cora, “Keep walking.”

Cora’s every step echoed inside the depressing castle. Bird flaps interrupted the silence, Cora jumped and tried to stop. Surya pressed the cool blade against her.

“You know what I don’t understand.” Surya said.

Cora didn’t answer, she kept walking.

Surya continued, “If you have such great power, why don’t you use it?”

Cora thought to herself, that is a very good question.

“Well?”

“I don’t know.” Cora said quietly.

“Hmm you know what I think?” Surya said.

“What?”

“I think its Rain.”

Cora stopped, “Why?”

Surya loosen his grip on the knife, he lowered it from away from Cora. Surya walked around Cora and faced her.

“I don’t want to loose my friend.” he said.

Cora didn’t understand.

“He’s doing all of this because of you!” Surya shouted.

“What did I do?”

“Everything! He turned on his own family, to be good.”

Cora lowered her head. Surya just stared at her, his anger bubbling, making his scar pop out.

“I’m sorry.” Cora said.

Surya’s anger disappeared and for the first time he felt something in his empty heart. He tried to shake it off, but the feeling stayed.

Cora looked up at Surya, his face emotionless, yet she knew what he's feeling.

“I need to get you out of here!” Surya said.

“Why?”

“Maybe I’m not the only one who has a change of heart.”
 
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