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SilentTrinity

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thanks a lot. i wanted the cops to play a bigger part in the next chapter, explain who the man they are looking for(hint someone Lucas met.) and what that man did.

UPDATE: Read the first post and expect a sequel. things will wrap up and set up the next story.
Sequel will include the main villain and more on the history of the Power.
 
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Chapter 9

Final Arc Part One

Laughter. That's all I could hear when I reached the door steps of the Order. I opened the large doors to see dead bodies being burned everywhere. I stared in horror as the faces of people I had seen years ago came to me.

Who would do this? I walked along the large building, going through the halls til I reached the Headmasters room. It was slightly ajar and I walked in, not expecting to see the person in front of me.

"Well,well well. If it isn't Lucas." John said as he turned to face me. The man who lead me to Emily, to the Order. To the Truth. My shock was soon replaced by anger.

"John. You..." I said gritting my teeth. He smiled as he got up from his chair, the dead body of the Headmaster lying in a pool of blood next to the window.
"YES! Bingo! Finally! It's taken you this long too find out!" John said cackling. I stared at him with an intent to kill him.

But something told me to hold back. If he had done this by himself then he was a lot stronger than he looked.
"Do you know how long I've been waiting to finally kill all these people?!? Too long Lucas!" John said his insanity beginning to unravel.

"Why John? What did this Order do to you?" I asked him still keeping myself from jumping on top of him, and punching him til he bleed.
"Why? WHY?!? Did they never tell you what THEY did to me and my sister?!?!" He yelled at me angrily like it was obvious that he was the victim.

"No? Well that's a shame." John said brushing his hair back. He had sleeked it recently.
"John...I'm going to ask you this once..." I said finally losing my patience for this mad man.
"Did you kill...her?" I said the thing I was most asking for. He faced me and smiled.

His body began to chance shape, turning from the person I knew as John into....
Emily. How? What was he?
"What..." Was all I could muster. He began to laugh using her voice.

"Lucas this is way beyond you! You thought that everything you ever did was your choice!?" He said transforming back into his old form.
"Lucas you are the fool! I've always been following you! Ever since you left my office!" He said the glint in his eyes shinning brighter than I've ever seen.

"Your actions! Your movements! Your speech! They were all influenced by me!" He said walking towards me and transforming into something I would have nightmares for the rest of my life.
He transformed into me.

"CMON PYRO! Show me your potential!" John screamed as I stared into my face. I ran, charging at him. I hit him in the stomachache and took him with me out the large window. As we fell he began to laugh, I pointed my hands and used all the rage in me into my right hand.

A large burst of fire appeared and both of us fell in a giant ball of fire. His laughter in my ears as he laughed with my voice. The flesh burning off his flesh and mine was excruciating. I howled in pain as I felt my fingers being slowly burned away. As soon as I had began to howl in pain, I felt a slight change in weight and John had punched me in the face.

"Soon...brother...you will understand what it is like to be one of us!" Were the last words before I blacked out. Once I came to I saw that I was no longer in California. I was in a dark forest somewhere in England. I didn't know this til much later.

As I slowly got up my hand began to hurt, and it felt as if fire was crawling on it. I looked to see that most of my flesh had been burnt from the large burst of rage. But for some reason, I felt something else besides pain.

I felt...lighter. Is how I would describe it. My body felt lighter, as if I could do anything. In fact I was so lite that I began to change.
"What the?" Was all I could say before my body began to change shape. I had obtained the same power of shape shifting as John did.

"Huh?" My new voice said. It was much deeper and I looked to see that I was a few inches taller, and that from here my feet looked giant. Somehow John had given me his power, and taken most of mine. I tried using the Power, but all that came out was a tiny spark. I sighed and began to look for a way out.

My search for revenge had just begun for the man named John. He would die for his sins.
 
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you know when you said the door was slightly open you could have just said ajar which means the same thing. my tutor at work taught me that lol.

anyway that was epic and i knew he was behind it. so wait john me because you know thats my real name or just a name lol anyway that was so cool.
 

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Well...here it is the ending and Epilogue all in one last part.

Hope you enjoy it as much as i did.

Chapter 10 and Epilogue

Final Arc Part 2

As I began to get use to this new body, I started to realize what had happened. John had somehow unlocked something inside of me. He allowed me to develop all my powers, including shape shifting. (Other powers came to me in the upcoming days but that is not an important story.)

But, even though I grew more and more powerful, I felt empty, not able to do the thing that I had so greatly accepted. The Fire abilities that I once had were all but gone. The small spark that I could maintain was pathetic, and made me somewhat happy, but I was still empty.

As days turned into weeks, I kept on searching for John, hoping one day that he might appear like he did back at the Order. But it never happened.
My dreams were filled with his laughter as I walked in the halls of the Order, not able to do anything but attempt at killing the man who had killed these people who had become like a second family to me, even though I wanted nothing to do with them.

I grew old, and as that happened, I realized that my story was ending. I headed back home to find you, sleeping in a small bundle in your mothers arms. I told her what had happened and asked if you had burnt finger tips.
You did, and on that day I knew that you would be the one to read this, and my story. My life story has been told from me too you, even though I couldn’t tell you in person. My son, my dearest Luke, you have the Power to do whatever you wish. But heed my warning my son, for if you follow the same path as John, then you have doomed the entire world. All I wanted for both you and your mother was a peaceful life, and I wished that they didn’t come to her and ask her questions.
I love you son. If these are my dying wishes then, no matter what you do….I will always love you.

From,
Lucas.

Luke closed the last piece of paper that was his father’s writings. He sighed as he understood what he was, and how his powers had come to be. At least he wasn’t the first one to have these Powers. He looked at the sunset, the beautiful Hawaiian sunset. He had received these letters from his father many years ago, and had only recently rediscovered them. For now, he knew why he had felt so empty whenever he thought he was trying to do something. The writing, the CEO’s, everything he had ever put some effort into, he had realized why he felt empty. It was because of his father’s influence in his life, invisible from the scenes as he watched Luke grow up.

His name was probably from some old movie that his father had liked, and his mother, who was always loving and caring, told the officers who came to their house many years ago that she did not know anything about his father. But now everything began to make sense. Luke closed his eyes and began to think. He was living it quietly in Hawaii ever since he had turned twenty one. That was three years ago. It was now the year 2017, his father had written these stories in the nineties. His father was probably still in hiding, and his mother, although she still loved him, was too busy with all her personal problems with the town.

Luke got up, his tan muscular build, glowing in the sunset. He had always been fit, something that his father ever thought about doing according to his writings. Luke began to laugh at what happened to his father after he left his home, and became saddened that he never gave Tomas and his sister a chance at being friends. Luke started to slow his pace and began to wonder at the possibilities that he could use. He looked down at his right hand pointer finger. He tilted his head as he snapped his fingers and a small spark appeared.

He smiled as he walked back to his small home on the beach. If he could still use the spark after not using it for so long then maybe he could use the other powers that his father had mentioned about. For the son always inherits the Power from his father, and from what Luke knew about his father’s father, the reason why he drank so much and abuse his father was for the very reason that he wanted his son to e able to use the power, and have a better life than he could ever have. Though his father was quite smart, Luke was a lot smarter. Luke began to pack his bags, but then decided to only pack one bag.
As he began to head towards the airport, Luke saw an old hat near his home, swaying in the wind. He stopped and stared at the thing before picking it up and examining it. It was an old rumpled hat, most likely from the nineteen forties, and had seen many things over its long life. Luke shrugged and took the hat, putting it under his arm. As Luke walked away, a man in the shadows smiled as he walked away. The shadowed man began to mutter to himself.

“Lucas…you shouldn’t have done something so easy.” John said appearing from the shadows. He looked as if he hadn’t aged a day in his life.

“The sin’s of the father pass to the son. Lucas your sins have passed down.” John said leaning against a post looking back down at his hands. He smiled and the old twinkle in his eyes shone with great enthusiasm.

“Luke…now it’s your turn to play Cat and Mouse with me.” John said as he walked away and disappeared into the sunset.
 
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That was great ending to a wonderful story man. I think the mother of Luke is Jane or some girl that Lucas met in his life. Anyway it seems Luke will have his own problems now that John is still around. I hope you make a sequel to this buddy.
 
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