Fanfiction ► I will leave you now, but I will be waiting for you, on the other side (Rion)

[madammina]

Lovely Madammina.
I knew you would do something involving HM
But you made it work and intertwine very well!
Loved it!
Only thing you could work on is your spacing 'cause I would find myself lost by whose talking and who isn't
But something minor, nothing major.
Love =DDD

Aw, thank you!

It's an old work, so I should really have improved (check out HCTB for example, if you haven't already )

But, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.

 

[Passion]

Aw, thank you!

It's an old work, so I should really have improved (check out HCTB for example, if you haven't already )

But, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.

Oh but I have seen HCTB
Lol
And I like that one a lot as well =)

 

[I_Am_Genesis]

Oh my, that was beautiful.

 

[madammina]

Oh but I have seen HCTB
Lol
And I like that one a lot as well =)

THank you, comment if you like~

Oh my, that was beautiful.

THank you, what did you like, not like, and how can I improve?

 

[I_Am_Genesis]

THank you, what did you like, not like, and how can I improve?

Well, I liked the emotion that you portrayed, as well as the fact that it's about Rion(>). However, things happened too quickly. You need to build it up. And yes, you over emoed Riku. Other than that, it's wonderful!

 

[madammina]

thanks. I'll keep that in mind.