Notorious White Mage Captainess
- Feb 14, 2008
- Phantom Manor
I knew you would do something involving HM
But you made it work and intertwine very well!
Only thing you could work on is your spacing 'cause I would find myself lost by whose talking and who isn't
But something minor, nothing major.
Aw, thank you!
It's an old work, so I should really have improved (check out HCTB for example, if you haven't already )
But, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.