I drew something new. *Critics are welcome**No flaming*

[Raiko]

hey guys , i just got back to drawing last night and i drew an original character(i think...)here it is anyway
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm96/xX_Roxas_Xx/myorgcharacter-1.jpg*nervous laugh*sorry if the picture is a bit hard to see.i forgot to use HB2 pencil.

Critics are still welcome but no flaming.Thanks(hopefully i can improve it coz its in pencil but now i cant coz it is either coloured in or in pen D: .)

Ok here is the edit.It has to be coloured in coz ppl asked me to. and i have a second version of it.
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm96/xX_Roxas_Xx/myorgcharacter2.jpg

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm96/xX_Roxas_Xx/myorgcharacter3.jpg

 

[Nelo Angelo]

I really like it, I thinks its a good character design and I love the weapon, good job :thumbup:

 

[Raiko]

ohhh.thanks!it was hard to think up of the name and the weapon.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

I know how it is to think of names, its hard for me. You picked a very cool name :thumbup:

 

[Raiko]

i've only tought up of its title..im thinking of the name.i think of Dexianla(i used Daniela )sound good?

 

[Fatal_Blade]

Its a good design, be sure to keep working on it if you want to improve her any further. Also I love the weapon.

 

[Raiko]

thanks!^^ does anything look awkward or out of place?i think that she is about 7 heads high.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

That sounds good to me. Go with it. Im not good with anagrams ^^;

 

[Raiko]

so am i..it took me about 30 mins to think of it.yay no school tomorow!inset day!anything to improve it?

 

[JH]

Everything is good except the hair and the face. Try making the hair more...hairlike, instead of it looking like a wig (I'm not saying Sora's is any more realistic).

For the face, try taking a look at some of the faces from Nomura's art. Then draw from that.

 

[Sora788]

Not bad I like the weapon. Are you going to color it in?

 

[Raiko]

not really sure if im gonna colour it.thats the thing that im afraid of,colouring it.im thinkin:"i might ruin it".i'll just shade it in with different types of Hard black pencils.

how can i make the hair look realistic?

 

[The Lionheart]

very good drawing.

it's a girl, right?

i would say add more curves, accentuate the breasts a little more, and soften up the face some. just to make her seem more feminine.

but i really like it alot

 

[Raiko]

yeah it is a female..i'll change it tonight and put up the edit tomorow.for now i'll take the critics until i got what i need.

 

[Fatal_Blade]

If your afraid to color it couldn't you just print off a copy?

 

[Raiko]

i dont really know..im running out of ink.i'll colour the coat in.

 

[Fatal_Blade]

^ Thats fine, again good job.

 

[Sora788]

If you have Photoshop, you should color it with that.

 

[Star Light]

I think It's really good. I fixed the boots though he looks like he's wearing high heels. I know it's a girl but Larexe is, too. I don't think she has high heels. Even I can admit it's hard to runin heels unless bigger bottum and lower to the ground. Overall great drawing.

 

[Darkslayers]

It looks great mate. I can never draw like that.

Anyways Keep it up!