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Chapter 1 ~ The beginning



Elsa was in the kitchen, making herself cornflakes.
Suddenly, Kendall - her stepfather - entered the kitchen. He took her hand and hugged her!


Elsa dropped the flakes.
"What are you doing?!", she whispered.
"Keep calm. Your mother's still sleeping.", he answered while hugging her even more.
"D-don't--!"
"What? Huh? This is between the two of us.", he whispered as he tried to touch her breast.


Elsa tried not to look at him. She was disgusted.
She tried to push him away, but it had no use!
"If you don't want to do it here, we can go out."
"Back off!!"


When Mariam, Elsa's mother, came down the stairs, Kendall stopped.
"Elsa, where's the frying pan?", he acted.
When he saw that Mariam was already in the kitchen, he smiled at her, asking if she wants breakfast.


Elsa wanted to leave, when suddenly Mariam asked her where she was going.
"I'm not hungry. I've gotta go to school.", she said without looking at her mother.
Mariam noticed something was wrong and looked into Elsa's eyes.
"Elsa... is something wrong, my darling?"
Elsa looked at her. She left without saying a word.


In school, Elsa told her best friend, Anna, about what happened.
"I didn't notice it first, you know."
"So..."
"By and by, his looks changed. He always had this... glare. Yesterday, he entered the bathroom while I was taking a shower--"
"Did he do anything?!"
"No, but he knew I was in there. I think he didn't know that I noticed him being there. He stared at me, I was… so embarrassed, Anna."
"Asshole. I remember him, he came to see you some weeks ago, right?"
"He always does. He asks me stuff like, going to the cinema and so on...."
"Girl, you've gotta tell your mother."
"Anna, how could I tell her something like this?! What if she won't believe me?"
"Oh come on. She's your mother."
"She'd trust me... right?"
"Of course! You don't worry."


The same day, but at evening, Elsa decided to tell her mother. She knew it wouldn't be easy, but she didn't have any other chance.


They sat in the living room.
"Mom, I have to tell you something."
"You can tell me everything, Elsa."
"… Mom... Kendall, he's--"
She didn't know where to start.
"Kendall wants to--"
"Be quiet!", Mariam commanded.
Elsa started to cry, so did Mariam.
"Don't say it. I understand..", she told her.
"Mother! I didn't think he would want such a thing! But he does. Please, I'm begging you! Send him away.", she sobbed.


Mariam told Elsa to sleep.
"I'll take care of it."


-


Mariam couldn't sleep. she thought about what to do. The man she loves wants to abuse her daughter. What would happen to their baby? What would she do alone?


-*-


The next morning, Mariam told Elsa that she won't go to school.
Mariam took a bag and put some of Elsa's clothes into it. They left and entered a bus.


Mariam didn't say a word the whole time.


When they left the bus, Elsa couldn't trust her eyes!
They arrived at an orphanage.
"MOM! What are we doing here?!"


They entered the office of the principal.
"Their father died seven years ago. I can't look after both of them anymore.", she lied.
Elsa cried.


Fiona, the assistant of Nadine wanted to change Mariam's mind.
"Ma'am, did you really think about all of this? There has to be a way to--"
"I can't look after her. I have made my decision."
"Please, think again. The child is crying.", Fiona whispered.


Mariam looked at Elsa.


"Tell me, if somebody wants to adopt her, do you want us to--"
"No. She shouldn't call someone else 'mother'."
Elsa looked at her mother.
"I wouldn't call you my mother, either!!", she stated and left the office.


Nadine gave Mariam documents to sign.
Mariam hesitated for a moment, but eventually signed all the documents.


"I brought some clothes for here. Is it okay if I bring the rest tomorrow?"
"The state is offering clothes. You don't have to bring us more.", Nadine answered.


As soon as everything was done, Mariam left the orphanage with tears in her eyes…




-*-*-*-


Elsa was sharing a room with 3 other girls - Susan, Kelly and Michelle.


As Elsa sat on her bed, Susan approached her.
"I saw you this morning.. Was the woman besides you your mother?"
Elsa nodded.
"But why did she abandon you?!"


"Susan! She obviously doesn't want to talk about it, stop asking her all the time!", Michelle yelled.
"Who asked you?!", Susan replied.
Michelle sighed and looked at Elsa.


"Sweety, is there somebody you want to call? I've got a phone.", she smiled.
"Actually, yes. Can I call my sister? She can't sleep without me wishing her a good night."
Michelle gave Elsa her phone.


-*-
Some minutes later, at the cafeteria.


While everyone was eating, Michelle kept asking Elsa to ’take a walk’ with her.
"Oh, pleaaase! We could look at the stars and all!"
"I really don't want to."
"But why? Some fresh air will heal all your wounds!"
"I'm not feeling well."
"I know, and that's why I want you to come out with me! Please, only for a few minutes?"


By and by, Elsa agreed to go out.
As they entered a park, there were 3 guys, waiting for them.
"Heeey, I'm here!", Michelle greeted.
Elsa grabbed Michelle's arm.
"You didn't tell me that we'll meet up with boys! I'm leaving!", she whispered.
"Please! I gave you my phone some hours ago, so now it's your turn to help me."


Michelle then looked at the boys.
"George, you invited me to a party. Are we just going to stay here or what?"
"They're all waitin' for us. Let's call a taxi and drive to my place."


"Michelle, I won't--"
"Elsa, we'll just chill with them, what's your problem?"
"I won't enter anyone's house!"
"Okay, okay."


One of the boys, Chris, offered them beer, but they didn't accept it.


Sebastion, the other boy, looked at Elsa.
"I guess we're both not okay with what's going on here, right?"


-
At the orphanage.


"Michelle and Elsa are still outside, huh?", she asked Susan.
"Huh?"
"I heard Michelle talking about taking fresh air and such things in the cafeteria."
"Michelle's no good. Why didn't you warn Elsa?"
"You've said it yourself, Michelle's no good."
"Maybe we should go and see what they're up to..."


-
At the park.


George started the Music App on his phone. Chris and Michelle started dancing.
Chris then took Elsa's hand and told her to dance with him.
"Let go!", Elsa yelled as she slightly pushed him away.
"Come on!"
"I don't want to!"
Sebastian told Chris to stop pulling the girl.


"Look. I didn't know about this whole thing!! Michelle told me we'd just--"
"Stop arguing, guys! I'm gonna drink this coke and we'll leave.", Michelle said as she gestured with her coke.
"I'm leaving. You can do whatever you want to!!", Elsa stated as she started to walk away.
Chris took her hand, wanting to change her mind, when suddenly Elsa slapped him, yelling 'let go!'!


Right then, Susan and Kelly arrived!
"Hopp, hopp!!", Susan yelled.
"What the hell is going on here?!", she asked.


She asked Elsa if something happened to her.


Then, Susan walked towards Michelle.
"Dude, you're seriously stupid! Did you think they'd make you their girlfriend by inviting you to a park?!"


"Oh, please. We invited her into my big, gorgeous Villa.", George said.


"What the hell are you talking about, huh?! Asshole!"
Susan punched George!


"I SWEAR, I WILL CUT YOUR THROAT!!"
Everyone was trying to stop their fight when suddenly the police arrived!


They stopped then and there.


"What is going on here?!", one of the officers asked.
"We're complainants!!", Susan yelled.
"Actually, we are complainants, officer. We were just hanging around here, when these prostitutes suddenly offered us a relationship in exchange for payment.", George quickly lied.


Everyone's eyes widened.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!", Susan yelled.
Then she furiously looked at Michelle.
"Michelle, Michelle!!"


---
At the police station, Sebastian's mother solved everything with her lawyer. They got the boys out of jail, but the officer told them that this case wasn't completely solved -- when suddenly Fiona arrived.


"I'm the assistant to the principal in the orphan--"
"Our children aren't even safe in the park they grew up!", Sebastian's mother complained.
"Okay, there's a misunderstanding."
"No, there isn't! Your girls literally offered them a relationship in exchange for money!", Nina complained again.


Fiona looked at the boys.
"You're liars!", she yelled.


As they left, Fiona asked the officer if the girls were set free, too.
"Not yet. They will be sent to an examination tomorrow."
"Examination!?"
"Yes, virginity examination.", he declared.


-
Outside, they told Nina that everything was a lie. Of course, Nina was more than shocked.
Their lawyer told Nina to visit the orphanage tomorrow and tell the principal that she feels sorry and takes back her complaint.


-
In the office.


"W-what are you talking about?! I won't allow such a thing! They're still young, please think about what will happen with their lives! Please, please! Do something about it.", Fiona begged.
"I can't do anything, I'm sorry."


-*-*-*
The next morning, they arrived at the hospital.
The journalists took photos of the girls while they were entering the hospital.


They waited for some minutes, then by and by the lady-doctor arrived. She said that they have to start now.
"I'm the strongest. I can do it, nothing can hurt me!", Susan yelled as she looked at the others. She didn't want them to go through it.


Several minutes later, Susan left the room with tears in her eyes. She sat down and didn't say a word.
"Next.", the doctor called, when she took Kelly by her arm!
"NO! I DON'T WANT TO!", she cried.
Suddenly, Fiona got a call! It was Nadine, who told her that the complaint was taken back by Nina.
"LET GO OF HER!", Fiona yelled at the doctor, pulling Kelly away.
"The complaint has been taken back!"


-*-*-


Of course, at the orphanage, Nadine yelled at them and complained about what happened.
She also told them that they were in all newspapers and were thrown out of their schools!


Fiona tried to reach principals in the whole city and get them a new school place.
As nobody wanted to take them, she suddenly got an idea.


As Fiona arrived at the school she was thinking of, she just entered the conference room!


"Sorry, but I need to talk to Ms. Nina! I'm sure you remember me. The assistance of the orphanage."
"What is it?"
"It's special. Mind sending the teachers away?"
Nina stood up and left the room, together with Fiona.
"Get to the point, you see that I have work to do."
"The girls are in the newspapers thanks to your son and his friends."
"My son and his friends didn't do anything."
"Whatever. I'm not here to argue with you about who's right and who's not."
"Look, I talked about it with Sebastion."
"You don't get it. The girls had a virginity examination. They're in the newspapers, so they were thrown out of their schools. And no school's accepting them.", she furiously explained.
"That's a shame. I hope you will find a school that accepts them as soon as possible."
"YOU will."
Nina smiled.
"You're... crazy. This is a special school."
Fiona nodded.
"Look, if you won't accept my offer we won't take back our complaint. If I have to, I will print their pictures one by one and hand them out in the whole city.", she threatened.


Then, she suddenly went into the office again.
"I am here to tell you guys something.", she announced!
"I will accept your offer! Bring me the documents as soon as possible and we'll be done!"
Fiona nodded and left.


-*-*-
The next day, the girls arrived at their new school.
In class, everyone was looking at them, especially two girls: Candace and Daniella - Sebastians sister.
Candace sent everyone in the class a photo of the girls while they were entering the hospital.


Everyone started to laugh and look at them.


"What are you laughing at?! Phones are not allowed in class, you know that!", the teacher called out.
"There's some funny picture, teacher. Do you want to look at it?", one of the students said while showing the teacher her phone.


"Put this thing away. Actually, no, give it to me!", the teacher said as she took the girl's phone.
Right then, the bell rang and the teacher left the class.


Candace talked to the girls, while they wanted to leave.
"If I were you, I wouldn't even be brave enough to leave my home! We don't want you here, go back to where you came from!"
"Oh, shut up! Do you think we want to be around you idiots?!", Susan yelled.
"Why are you here, then?!"
"We didn't have another choice, princess!"
Candace laughed.
"You're wearing my old clothes. We sent them to the orphanage some days ago.", she told them while she pointed at the pink vest Susan wore.
Susan threw the vest onto the ground, yelling:
"TAKE IT, YOU STUPID SHIT!", and left the room.


-*-*-
Candace's house.


Candace's dad was sitting in the living room, with a gun in his hand. He - and his company - has many debts.
As Candace's mother saw him, her eyes widened.
"A-Abraham?! Wh-where did the gun come from? What will you do?!"
"I'm done, Miley. My company, my money... my reputations.... they're no more."
Miley tried to calm him down.
"Everything will be resolved, my dear... Please, give me the gun. Let's talk.."
They both started to cry.
"We're bankrupt. I can't handle this anymore. I may land in jail..."
"We can talk about it---"
"I CAN'T HANDLE IT ANYMORE!", he yelled as he placed the gun on his forehead!!
"ABRAHAM!"
Miley tried to take away the gun when suddenly Candace came downstairs and saw them quarreling.
"LET GO!"
……
He accidentally shot her!!
"MILEY, NO! MILEY!"


Candace couldn't believe her eyes.
"Dad?! DAD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!"
She knelt in front of her mother and cried.
"Please wake up, mom!! Dad, do something!"
Suddenly, another shot!!
Candace yelled as she saw her dad falling down! Everything was filled with blood.
"DADDY NO!!!! DADDY!!!! NO!!!!! NO!!!!! MOMMY!! DADDY!!"


-*-*-
Some days passed. None of her relatives wanted to take care of her, which is why……


###


Candace arrived at the hospital. She let everything behind, everything she took was a small bag with clothes.


As the girls looked at her, Candace cried.
 

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I had no idea what I was getting into, but things sure did escalate fast. I actually feel a bit bad for Candace, because that has to be brutal and would be traumatizing. I hope the girls will be forgiving towards her now that she's landed on their doorstep too. Of course, Elsa being abandoned by her own mother really sucks hard. I can't even imagine how any parent could do that to their own kid. Either way, I think the most decent person Elsa has met is Sebastian at the moment outside of say Fiona and Susan. Interesting story thus far, Muke.
 

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I had no idea what I was getting into, but things sure did escalate fast. I actually feel a bit bad for Candace, because that has to be brutal and would be traumatizing. I hope the girls will be forgiving towards her now that she's landed on their doorstep too. Of course, Elsa being abandoned by her own mother really sucks hard. I can't even imagine how any parent could do that to their own kid. Either way, I think the most decent person Elsa has met is Sebastian at the moment outside of say Fiona and Susan. Interesting story thus far, Muke.
Thank you very much! :)
The second chapter is on it's way and may seem a bit rushed, which I do admit, but still, uh...
Here goes. :D
 

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Chapter 2 ~ Mother!

The next day, at school, everyone was talking about her and her father. Candace couldn't withstand it anymore and confronted everyone.


"ENOUGH!! YES! IT'S TRUE, MY FATHER COMMITTED SUICIDE. BUT FIRST, HE KILLED MY MOTHER!!"
Everyone was silent.
"What? Do you feel sorry?! Nobody wanted me. AND NOW I'M IN THAT ORPHANAGE. WHAT A MOVING STORY, RIGHT?! ARE YOU SHOCKED?! DO YOU FEEL SORRY?! TALK TO ME!! SOMEONE HAS TO!"
… …
"SOME DAYS AGO, YOU GUYS NEVER LEFT ME! 'CANDACE IS FUNNY', 'CANDACE IS COOL', WHAT HAPPENED?!!"

"YOU GUYS ARE AWFUL!! I HATE ALL OF YOU!!"


- - - - - -


At the swimming lesson in school, the teacher told everyone to change their clothes.
As everyone did, Susan waited for everyone to get out of the boy's locker except for George, when she suddenly entered it as well.


She stood there, staring at him.
"What the--?! Girl, this is the boys locker!"
"I'm sorry.", she said while still staring.
"What, what're you looking at?"
Susan approached and smiled.
"You're really hot, that's what I'm looking at.", she said.
George smiled.
"Of course, I am."
"George, I am so sorry about what happened. Do you accept my apology?", she said with a cute voice.
"You know what... don't go to the girls' locker. You can change your clothes here, right?"
"Awesome.", she smiled while opening one of her buttons on her shirt.


Suddenly, she kicked George between his legs!!
George yelled and fell to the floor.
Susan grabbed his head, yelling:
"Oh, you bastard! They sent us to a virginity examination that they, we were SO embarrassed, but how could you know, asshole?!"

"Come on, go and tell your friends this, too!! 'Susan kicked me between my legs', but you wouldn't be able to do it, bastard!!"


Suddenly, she took his clothes and put them into the toilet, clogging the toilet while "washing" them down.
Then she looked at him with a smile and left.


- - -
At the orphanage, the girls complained about their teacher. They told Fiona about him forcing them to swim after school was over because they couldn't swim properly.


Of course, she drove to the school as soon as possible.
She entered the office and asked for the swimming teacher.
"I am the swimming teacher, come in."
The teacher was Fiona's fiance.
"What are you doing here, Fiona?"
"Let me go ahead. So, you know that I am the assistance of the orphanage's headmistress. I got told that you discriminated the girls of the orphanage."
"Discrimination? Me? Wait, no, how should I even know which student comes from where? And besides, there were other students in detention, too."
"N-not only the girls?"
"Nope."
"Okay then. There seems to be a misunderstanding. Sorry."


- - -
In Nadine's office at the orphanage.


A woman entered the office.
"What are YOU doing here?! You have to leave before Kelly sees you."
"She doesn't know me, Aunt."
Nadine looked out of the window.
"They're coming back from school! Please, leave! This is too risky."
The woman left the office.
As she wanted to leave, the girls entered the orphanage.
Without looking at Kelly, the woman passed her and pressed a note into her hand.
As Kelly looked at the note, she saw a phone number and an address written on it!


- - - -


Of course, Kelly couldn't resist. She didn't tell anybody and took a bus.
She arrived at a huge Villa.
"Is this... where my mother lives?"
When suddenly, the same woman arrived.
They both stared at each other.
"Mother…"
"My daughter…!"
They ran towards each other and hugged.
"I'll explain everything!"
"WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME BEHIND, MOTHER?!", Kelly cried.
"I waited for you for so many years now, mother!"
"Kelly.."
"WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME BEHIND?!"
"I didn't have another chance, Kelly! I forgot about you once Delia was born---"
"YOU FORGOT?!"
"N-n-no, I didn't mean it like that, Kelly!"
"YOU HAVE ANOTHER DAUGHTER?!"
Kelly was so frustrated, she ran away.


- - * - -


At the orphanage, Kelly told the others everything.
"WHY WOULD YOU GO THERE, IDIOT!", Susan yelled at her.
"I always told you: 'your mother probably isn't like in your dreams'!! Was I right? Yes! Did you listen to me? No!"
The others told Susan not to yell at Kelly like that and tried to calm her down.


- - - -


Some days later, in theater class.
"Okay, children, this time, we will learn to trust each other. One partner will let themselves fall while the other one will catch them. So, now let's get to the pairs…", their teacher announced.


"Elsa, you'll take…Sebastian! Go ahead guys.", she smiled.
Elsa didn't hesitate one bit - she let herself fall and Sebastian immediately catched her.
"Kelly, you'll take…Michelle."
"Me?", Michelle gasped.
"Yes."
"Why do I get Kelly and not a boy?!"
"Michelle, come on already.", the teacher sighed.


Kelly looked at her.
"You'll catch me, right?"
Michelle nodded.
"I'll count to 3 and then you'll let yourself fall, okay?"
Kelly nodded.
"1…2…oh, wait! No, uhh..", she started to mumble.
"Okay, um, so… 1…2……3!"
Kelly let herself fall and they both fell to the ground.
"Michelle!!"
"Kelly, you're just-- ugh!"
They sat down.


"Susan, George, it's your turn."


"We'll fall!"
"Don't worry, I'm there for ya.", George said.


Susan stood up.


"Okay, when I say now, you'll let yourself fall!"

"NOW!"

Susan hesitated.
"Ohh, miss, he won't catch me, I'm sure!"
"Just trust me!"

"You're there, right?"
"Right here."

"What about your arms, are they--"
"They are!!"

Susan hesitated again and sat down.


"Why won't you trust me?!"
"Why should I? You remember what happened in the park, right?!"




- - -


After several minutes passed, George asked Thomas if he could make an announcement.
Thomas agreed and left him alone in the office.


George sighed. He activated the microphone.


"Hello. It's me, George Eberling. Sorry for interrupting whatever you are doing now, but... I have to make a confession. I slandered something terrible about my classmates Susan, Michelle, Kelly and Elsa.
What you've read in the newspaper is a lie. Every single line. I invited them to my house that day, but… they didn't want to come, so I started a fight. When the police suddenly arrived, I lied out of fear. I told them that they offered us a relationship in exchange for money.


Do I regret it? I do.
Susan,… Michelle,… Kelly,… Elsa… I am sorry.


Do you guys forgive me?"


In class, Susan slightly nodded with a smile.


-*-*-
As Michelle left class early that day, she went back to the orphanage and waited for the others.
She drank some cocoa that Fiona made for her.

"Michelle?"

"Yes?"
Suddenly, a young woman stood in front of her.
"I…I am your mother."


Michelle couldn't believe what she was hearing!
"I saw you in the newspapers. I've been searching for you for so many years now. Finally, I am united with my darling again.", the woman cried.


"I don't know you!!", Michelle yelled as she walked away.
"Don't go, wait!", the woman yelled as she grabbed Michelle by her arm.
"I didn't abandon you! They kidnapped you! My darling, I will explain everything!"

"Your name isn't Michelle. It's Jade!"
Michelle started to cry and ran into the orphanage.
"Please don't go, Jade!"
Michelle waited.
"Take this note! It's my address. Please come and at least give me a visit!",her mother cried as she put the note on the table and left.


- - -
Some hours later, Michelle decided to go for it and drive to the address. She waited for the bus and stepped in when it arrived.


After several minutes, she arrived at the station where she had to leave.
As she found the house, she knocked on the door.


As she opened the door, Michelle's mother wanted to hug her, but Michelle hesitated.


"Jade. I knew you would come."
"I am not Jade. My name is Michelle."
Her mother sighed.
"Tell me. If you didn't abandon me, how did I end up in front of the church?"
"Come in, this is your house."
"I don't have a house."
"You always had.", she smiled.


Michelle entered the house.
 

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I'm surprised by the change of heart George is showing. Maybe he has feelings for Susan? Then Michelle being kidnapped at some point as her mother claims is both surprising and mysterious. I think Michelle is going to do whatever benefits her to get wherever she wants to go and do with her life at best guess. Otherwise, it's pretty exciting with every twist and turn thus far!
 

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Wow, you did a good job! You're very creative! I'm surprised that George finally told the truth. Hopefully the woman that claims to be Michelle's mother is her mother. And the name Jade sounds nice! Can't wait to read more to find out what happened between Michelle and her mother and what WILL happen between the two.
 

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I'm surprised by the change of heart George is showing. Maybe he has feelings for Susan? Then Michelle being kidnapped at some point as her mother claims is both surprising and mysterious. I think Michelle is going to do whatever benefits her to get wherever she wants to go and do with her life at best guess. Otherwise, it's pretty exciting with every twist and turn thus far!
Thank you, KitKat! :)
Umm, how should I say this... yes, there will be something between those two. But will it be love? Won't tell that part. ;)

Wow, you did a good job! You're very creative! I'm surprised that George finally told the truth. Hopefully the woman that claims to be Michelle's mother is her mother. And the name Jade sounds nice! Can't wait to read more to find out what happened between Michelle and her mother and what WILL happen between the two.
Wow, I never imagined somebody else would read my story! (lmao)
Thanks! :DD

The 3rd Chapter will be posted today. :)
 

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Chapter 3 ~ Maniac


"Tell me more. Why would anybody kidnap me?", Michelle asked.
"I've got no idea. One day, you were just suddenly gone. But now that I've found you, we will be a family again!", her mother smiled.
"My friends--- no, the girls at the orphanage really want a mother, but I am not like them. I think I didn't get used to you... is it okay if we won't hug for a while?"
"Of course, that's okay. I understand you, you're right. But please, just let me hold your hand… my beautiful daughter."

"Come on, let's prepare your room."
"But I can't stay here. You have to inform Nadine, the headmistress, and all that stuff."
"You're right… Can't you call them?"
"Okay."
As Michelle called Nadine, she answered the call.
"Ms. Nadine, I found my mother."
"What?! What mother, where are you?"
"I'm in my mother's house, and---."
"She has to talk to us first! Give her the phone, I want to talk to her."
Michelle handed her the phone.
"I'm very thankful. You looked after my daughter for so many years now. Jade -- or Michelle -- will stay with me."
"Are you crazy? You're not buying an apple from the market here, you have to come here first! There are documents to fill, there will be tests if Michelle really is your daughter, and be--"


Michelle's mother shut down the phone.
"Thank you! Don't worry, my daughter is safe here. Bye!"

"Was that your headmistress? She is such a cute lady!"
"So, she allowed me to stay here?"
"Yes, now come on, let's prepare your room.", she smiled.


As they entered a child's room, Michelle didn't know what to think of it. It had so many plushes and toys, it was incredible!


"This was your room.", she smiled.
Michelle was looking at the cot, standing next to a big TV.
"Was this my cot?"
"It was."
"You haven't even changed the room.", she turned around.
"I knew you would come back one day."

"But, of course, we will change all the furniture! You can choose everything.", she smiled.
"That would be amazing!", Michelle gasped.
"Okay, I'm going to make dinner. And this time, I want no refusal.", she smiled as she left the room and went into the kitchen.


- - - -


Nadine ran into Fiona's office.
"Fiona, they're up to something again!"
Fiona felt uneasy.
"Ms. Nadine, what happened?!"
"Michelle called me, she said she's in the house of her biological mother!"
Fiona widened her eyes.
"Is there such a possibility!?"
"I don't know… I told the woman to come and talk to me and she declined the call!"

"Wait, let me call Michelle!"


- - - -


As Michelle's phone rang, her mother took it.
'MISS FIONA', was the caller.
She turned around to make sure Michelle wasn't looking as she declined the call!!
She took out the SIM and completely shut down the phone.


Then she hid the phone so that Michelle wouldn't find it!


Right then, Michelle entered the room.
"Oh, will we have guests?", she asked as she saw the table with 3 plates.
"Your father! If he hears that I found you, he will be so happy! Come on, let's call him.", she told Michelle while dialing her husband's number.

--"Christopher? I found our daughter! Jade is here!", she smiled.
-"Sandra, what are you talking about?!"
--"Our bad times are over, Christopher. We will be a happy family again."
-"Sandra, our daughter die--"
--"Pssshh!! They lied to us, Christopher! Why are you believing them!? Jade is here, next to me. She is such a beauty."
-"I understand. Okay, umm, could I talk to our daughter for a minute?"
Sandra gave Michelle the phone.
---"Hello?"
-"Look, I don't want Sandra to hear what we're talking about, okay?"
Michelle looked at Sandra and felt really uneasy.
---"Y-yeah. I'm listening.", she said as she slightly turned around.
"Tell your father that we love him!", Sandra whispered.
-"So, our daughter died. I don't know who you are, but get out of that house immediately!"
Michelle's eyes widened a bit. She looked at Sandra.
---"A-a-are you coming?! Please come as fast as you can!"
-"I am, but please get out of there!"

"He's coming."
Sandra smiled.


* - * - *
Several minutes passed.
Fiona, Candace, Susan, and Kelly searched through the whole city! They asked everyone they saw if they had seen Michelle, described her, showed pictures....


- - -
"I made soup, rice, and chicken! And lots of salad, too!!", she smiled.
Michelle didn't say a word.
"Ohhh, do you like yoghurt more?! Do you want me to go and buy some, my dear?"
Michelle had an idea!
"Yes! YES, I love yoghurt over all! Where's the market, I will go and buy some!", she stated as she stood up.
"No, no, no, no!!! You can't go!! They must be waiting for you!!"
"'They'?"
"Those who kidnapped you as a child! You won't go."
"Maybe they forgot me, huh?"
"NO!! I can't lose you again now that I've found you!!"


Suddenly, Michelle ran towards the door as fast as she could! Sandra pushed her away and locked the doors!


"WHAT THE HELL?! WHY ARE YOU IMPRISONING ME HERE?!"
"Safety's sake!"
Michelle ran into the living room again.
"WHERE'S MY PHONE?!"
"What will you do?"
"Um, I have to tell my friends that I finally found you!", Michelle acted.
Sandra smiled and gave Michelle the phone, together with the SIM.
Michelle went into the kitchen and called Fiona!


- - -


"Girls, Michelle's calling!", Fiona declared.
"WHAT?!", they gasped in unison.
-"Michelle, where are you?!"
--"HELP! Ms. Fiona, you have to help me, please!!"
-"WHERE ARE YOU, MICHELLE?!"
--"I am in----"
Suddenly, Sandra took the phone out of Michelle's hand! She walked towards the window and threw the phone out of it!!




- - -


"Hello?!", Fiona yelled into her phone.
Suddenly, a phone fell to the ground!
They looked at the residential building it fell from.
"This is Michelle's phone!!", Susan yelled.


Fiona ran into the building, yelling Michelle's name.


- - -


"YOUR DAUGHTER DIED, YOU MANIAC!!", Michelle yelled as Sandra pushed her into the living room.
"SHE DIDN'T! SHE HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED. You are my daughter! You are Jade!"
"I'm not! I swear, I'm not your daughter! Your daughter died and that's what your husband told me!!"
"DON'T LISTEN TO HIM!!", she yelled as she touched Michelle.
"WOMAN, YOU ARE NOT MY MOTHER!"
"Jade, I am your mommy!", Sandra cried.


- - -


The others were searching for the right door, when they suddenly heard Michelle yelling for help!
"It's from here, Ms. Fiona!", Kelly stated.
"MICHELLE, WE ARE HERE!"


- - -


Sandra suddenly took a gun!!
Michelle saw the gun and just stared at it.
"I won't let you go again.", she said.
She grabbed Michelle's arm and pulled her into the living room, where they sat on the couch.
Michelle cried, as Sandra aimed towards her with the gun.


- - -


As the girls wondered why Michelle suddenly stopped yelling, a young man appeared.
"The woman inside there is my old wife!", he declared as he opened the doors with his keys.
"That woman took a girl from out orphanage hostage!"
"I know!", he said as he finally managed to open the door.
They ran into the house, where Sandra yelled at them not to approach!


Sandra still aimed towards Michelle with the gun.


"Ma'am... please stay calm. Drop that gun..", Fiona told her.

"Christopher.", she smiled.
"Look, our daughter.", she then added.
-"Sandra, our daughter died."
"IT'S A LIE! SHE DIDN'T!"
"Sandra, Jade died."
Sandra shook her head.
"Come on, let's drop that gun. You will harm the poor girl.", Christopher calmly told her.
… …
"Why did our daughter die, Christopher? WHY?!"
"Sandra…"
Sandra looked at Michelle.
Suddenly, the police knocked on the door!
"WHO CALLED THEM?!"
Michelle saw the chance, stood up and ran towards Fiona!


Christopher tried to take away the gun, but he couldn't!
Suddenly, a shot.


- - -
Some minutes passed.
Sandra shot herself with the gun.
"Sandra, are you okay?!"
"The ambulance is on its way.", one of the officers stated.


Michelle hugged Fiona and told them what happened, with tears in her eyes.






------------


In a house in a village.
A young woman and an elderly woman...


"My dear… I always have this guilty feeling when I am about to sleep... I can't die with this feeling."
The woman's eyes widened.
"Sarah…… your daughter, she…"
… … …
"Your daughter is… alive, Sarah."
 

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Re: Hurt Flowers {3}

I did not see this coming at all. I guess suicide is becoming the usual theme for you in this story. I feel slightly mystified at the end about Sarah's daughter being alive. I'm not a hundred percent sure who she is, or who's daughter is hers. A shame Michelle had to go through that tragedy, witnessing a maniac of a woman trying to convince her she's her daughter. Otherwise, it was a good chapter nonetheless.
 

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Re: Hurt Flowers {3}

I did not see this coming at all. I guess suicide is becoming the usual theme for you in this story. I feel slightly mystified at the end about Sarah's daughter being alive. I'm not a hundred percent sure who she is, or who's daughter is hers. A shame Michelle had to go through that tragedy, witnessing a maniac of a woman trying to convince her she's her daughter. Otherwise, it was a good chapter nonetheless.
Thanks.
It wasn't really suicide, I didn't know how to write that. xD
I should've written it a bit better. I mesnt that, because of Christopher and her pulling the gun around, she accidentally got shot. :)
 

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Re: Hurt Flowers {4}

Chapter 4 ~ Robber

Elsa was sitting in the PC room, scrolling through Facebook.
As she saw how happy her friends were, she decided to post a text:


'too broken, really angry……… and alone'


Some minutes later, she got a message.
'I'm as lonely, angry and broken as you.'
After seconds of hesitation, Elsa answered:
'Who are you?'
'Sebastian. We have many things in common.'
'I don't think so… did you ever feel the need to kill someone?'

'No'
'Then that means you're not as broken as me.'


---


Candace stared at her suitcase, in which her clothes were in.


Kelly and Michelle opened the suitcase.
"Candace, these are so wonderful! Could I wear one of these sometimes?", Kelly admired.
"STOP TOUCHING MY CLOTHES!!", Candace yelled at them.
"I was just--"
Candace pulled the suitcase away.
"I DON'T WANT ANYBODY TO TOUCH THIS SUITCASE!!!"
Kelly stepped back in fear.
"WHAT ARE YOU YELLING?!", Michelle yelled back.
"STOP PULLING A SHOW HERE! YOUR RICH DAYS ARE OVER, GET OUTTA YOUR PRINCESS-MOOD!!"
……
"We will sleep in the same place and wake up at the same place! GET USED TO IT!"
Suddenly, Susan pulled her away.
"Michelle!! Let her alone!"
Michelle sighed and rolled her eyes.
"Whatever."


-*-*-*
The next morning, in front of the school, George decided to talk to Susan.
"We did have or quarrels and arguments and such, but now it's all over, right? You trust me now, right? So, uh, we can be…"

"…can be, what?", Susan asked.
"Lovers."

"Lovers? Where did that come from?! You accused us that day, don't you remember? In the park."
"Susan, I--"
"You may have done that confession, and I did forgive you. But this doesn't mean that we can be 'that'."

"You told them we wanted a relationship in exchange for money."
"Can't we forget all of that?"
"'Forget'? George, I had to take a virginity examination!"

"They treated us like shit! I'm 16 years! Why?! With which right?!"

"You know what? I've never been as ashamed as I was that day. Why did I have to go through all of that?! WHY?! WHAT FOR?!"

"Because a stupid teenager used us to hide his lie!"

"Do you understand what you have done to me now?"

"And here you are asking me to become your lover. Sorry. Such a thing won't happen."


- - - - - -


In the Cafeteria, Michelle stood in line and waited for her turn.
As Alex, one of Geroge's friends wanted to pay, he dropped 20 dollars.
Michelle narrowed her eye at the money.
She quickly knelt down and took the money, putting it into her pocket.
Sebastian slightly gasped as he saw what she did.


Alex searched everywhere for his money, and as he turned around, he saw Michelle.


"You stole my money, haven't you?!"
"What're you talking about?", Michelle pretended.
"I'm talking about the money you have stolen!"
"Oh, shut up! Who knows where you left it!"


Everyone looked at them.


"GIVE ME MY MONEY YOU ROBBER!", Alex yelled as he got pushed by Susan.
"What if I give you a kick in-between your legs, huh!?"
Nearly everybody surrounded them now.
"Okay, then let's call the police.", Alex suggested.
Sebastian took 20 dollars out of his wallet and dropped it without anybody noticing -- with the exception of Elsa!


He knelt down, picked up the money and handed it to Alex.
"Dude, your money was on the floor the whole time. You shouldn't accuse people like that."
……
"What? How is this--- I swear, I looked everywhere!", Alex stated.
"It's okay, we shouldn't stretch this."


Michelle looked at Sebastian and gave him a slight smile before she walked away. Elsa, on the other hand, whispered "thank you" as she passed by.


(CHapter got reeeeally short this time, sorry)
 

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Re: Hurt Flowers {4}

It's alright if the chapter is short. George really needs to start out with friendship rather than hopping straight into being Susan's lover or boyfriend in all honesty. I'm glad she refused him for now. Of course, the whole money scandal in cafeteria was pretty dang ridiculous. Gosh, if it weren't for Sebastian things would really get out of hand. I kind of doubt police would settle the matter, because usually a principal is enough to do it. Otherwise, it was a pretty interesting chapter, Muke.
 

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Okay, finally read them! Man, Michelle can be a jerk! The short chapter is really good. The 3rd chapter I finally read and I was really shocked how Sandra was pointing a gun at Michelle. I would have be scared if I was in that position!
 
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