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This is an Old Fan Ficc i wrote About Me and Cloud and my Friend Mushu and Reno..i got 14 chapters done so...yeah..here


Couples:Aimee x Cloud Misha x Reno

*they start in Midgar,and are walkin' around,Aimee and reno aren't there,Aimee's workin' in a Bar,and Renos somewhere*

Misha:I'm bored,Are you bored?I'm hungry,are you hungry?(Continues asking annoying questions)
Cloud: (thinkng)yeah..whatever...
Misha:Hey!(slaps Cloud)Pay attention!
Cloud: (stops and looks at Misha)don't hit me....
Misha:I'll hit you if i want to...(sticks her tounge out at him)
Cloud: (starts walking toward the place where Aimee works...i forgot its name^^;;)lets get Aimee...
Misha: (Grins)why Aimee?
Cloud:Cuz i want her here.
Misha:Aww...you wuv Amiee?
Cloud:......shut up(walks in that place(Whats its name?)
Misha: (follows)HIYA AIMEE!!!!!!!!(Jumps up and down)
Aimee: (sitting behind the Bar and is Drawing,looks up)Oh,hello Misha(looks at Cloud)and Hi,Cloud how are you today?
Misha: (sees Aimee was Drawing)Oh!!!!!!let me see!(Grab the Drawing pad thingy)Whow...its a.....Kitty?
Cloud: (sits a the Bar thingy)Misha....put it down....
Aimee: (Smiles)its Red XIII...well kinda(walks over to Cloud)umm.....so you never told me how you were doing today?
Cloud: (looks at Aimee)..im fine...but..a...yeah,we came to get you.
Misha: (Runs over to them)Oh Yea!!we need ya to come,wes gots ta goes ands gets Reno...z?
Cloud:that made no sense..
Aimee:I'll go...but do you guys need anything before we leave?
Misha:Cloud needs a kiss(jumps up and down)
Cloud: (turns all red)MISHA!!! SHUT YOUR BIG MOUTH!!!!!!!!!
Aimee: (giggles)okay....(leans over the bar top thingy and Kisses cloud on teh Cheek)
Misha:Awww....so cute!!!!!!!!(runs out the door)We need to leave now!!!!!
Cloud: (face is bright red)umm...yeah...we..umm....need....to....wait..(falls over)
Aimee: (giggles)Come on Cloud(helps him up)I hope Misha doesn't leave us...
Misha: (half way to another Town)C'mon!!
Cloud: (grabs Aimee's hand and starts running after Misha)
 
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This is an Old Fan Ficc i wrote About Me and Cloud and my Friend Mushu and Reno..i got 14 chapters done so...yeah..here


Couples:Aimee x Cloud Misha x Reno

*they start in Midgar,and are walkin' around,Aimee and reno aren't there,Aimee's workin' in a Bar,and Renos somewhere*

Misha:I'm bored,Are you bored?I'm hungry,are you hungry?(Continues asking annoying questions)
Cloud: (thinkng)yeah..whatever...
Misha:Hey!(slaps Cloud)Pay attention!
Cloud: (stops and looks at Misha)don't hit me....
Misha:I'll hit you if i want to...(sticks her tounge out at him)
Cloud: (starts walking toward the place where Aimee works...i forgot its name^^;;)lets get Aimee...
Misha: (Grins)why Aimee?
Cloud:Cuz i want her here.
Misha:Aww...you wuv Amiee?
Cloud:......shut up(walks in that place(Whats its name?)
Misha: (follows)HIYA AIMEE!!!!!!!!(Jumps up and down)
Aimee: (sitting behind the Bar and is Drawing,looks up)Oh,hello Misha(looks at Cloud)and Hi,Cloud how are you today?
Misha: (sees Aimee was Drawing)Oh!!!!!!let me see!(Grab the Drawing pad thingy)Whow...its a.....Kitty?
Cloud: (sits a the Bar thingy)Misha....put it down....
Aimee: (Smiles)its Red XIII...well kinda(walks over to Cloud)umm.....so you never told me how you were doing today?
Cloud: (looks at Aimee)..im fine...but..a...yeah,we came to get you.
Misha: (Runs over to them)Oh Yea!!we need ya to come,wes gots ta goes ands gets Reno...z?
Cloud:that made no sense..
Aimee:I'll go...but do you guys need anything before we leave?
Misha:Cloud needs a kiss(jumps up and down)
Cloud: (turns all red)MISHA!!! SHUT YOUR BIG MOUTH!!!!!!!!!
Aimee: (giggles)okay....(leans over the bar top thingy and Kisses cloud on teh Cheek)
Misha:Awww....so cute!!!!!!!!(runs out the door)We need to leave now!!!!!
Cloud: (face is bright red)umm...yeah...we..umm....need....to....wait..(falls over)
Aimee: (giggles)Come on Cloud(helps him up)I hope Misha doesn't leave us...
Misha: (half way to another Town)C'mon!!
Cloud: (grabs Aimee's hand and starts running after Misha)
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this is a good fan fic i didn't find any spelling errors please update
 
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Thanks i guess..
I got 14 chapters done so ill Edit this in a sec w/ Chap. 2

~~~~~Chapter 2~~~~~

Aimee:Cloud...Can you slow down?*Out of breath*
Cloud:*slows down to a walk*You okay?
Aimee:*stop,sits down*yea...but...you....got any idea how to catch her?
Cloud:* sees a Bike*hey,i got an idea
Aimee:*stands up*a motorcycle?
Cloud:*walks to the Bike,gets on it*Hey...ya comin'
Aimee:*gets on it*umm....okay...
Cloud:*gets that butterfly in his stomach feeling*umm...you might wanna hang......*Clears throut*you might want to hang on to something.
Aimee:*wraps her Arms around cloud's waist and closes her eyes and rest her head on his back*okay....im glad its you driving this bike and not Misha
Cloud:Okay....
*they eventually catch up to misha*
Misha:HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!PULL OVER N" SHOW ME YOUR......ummm..OH! iknow...PULL OVER AND SHOW ME YOUR BIKERS LISCENSE.

Cloud:*stops and turns of the bike*Shut up..why'd you leave so fast?
Aimee*walks up and stands next to cloud*its okay,Misha,just wait next time okay?
Misha:*looks at Aimee and Cloud*...Ya know....you two would have a pretty cute Kid^^
Cloud&Aimee:*Both turn bright red*WHAT?????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
Misha:well you would.....
Aimee:*calms down*....okay?well you guys need some sleep right?
Cloud:*still freaking out*WHY???HOW?????IM SOOOO CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!
Misha:*pulls Cloud into an inn*we need sleep...so shut up!
Aimee:*walks up to the front desk*um...2 rooms,please^^
Cloud:*snaps out of confusin*two...two?why....
Misha:Aimee's roomin' wif Meh*skips to Their room*
Aimee:*walks up to Cloud*well i'll see you in the mornig,Good nite Cloud*Kisses him on the Cheek and walks to her room,Sees Misha jumps on the bed and sighs*
Cloud:*Face turns red*umm...yea,nite..*walks in his room and smiles*
 
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Aimee said:
Thanks i guess..
I got 14 chapters done so ill Edit this in a sec w/ Chap. 2

~~~~~Chapter 2~~~~~

Aimee:Cloud...Can you slow down?*Out of breath*
Cloud:*slows down to a walk*You okay?
Aimee:*stop,sits down*yea...but...you....got any idea how to catch her?
Cloud:* sees a Bike*hey,i got an idea
Aimee:*stands up*a motorcycle?
Cloud:*walks to the Bike,gets on it*Hey...ya comin'
Aimee:*gets on it*umm....okay...
Cloud:*gets that butterfly in his stomach feeling*umm...you might wanna hang......*Clears throut*you might want to hang on to something.
Aimee:*wraps her Arms around cloud's waist and closes her eyes and rest her head on his back*okay....im glad its you driving this bike and not Misha
Cloud:Okay....
*they eventually catch up to misha*
Misha:HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!PULL OVER N" SHOW ME YOUR......ummm..OH! iknow...PULL OVER AND SHOW ME YOUR BIKERS LISCENSE.

Cloud:*stops and turns of the bike*Shut up..why'd you leave so fast?
Aimee*walks up and stands next to cloud*its okay,Misha,just wait next time okay?
Misha:*looks at Aimee and Cloud*...Ya know....you two would have a pretty cute Kid^^
Cloud&Aimee:*Both turn bright red*WHAT?????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
Misha:well you would.....
Aimee:*calms down*....okay?well you guys need some sleep right?
Cloud:*still freaking out*WHY???HOW?????IM SOOOO CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!
Misha:*pulls Cloud into an inn*we need sleep...so shut up!
Aimee:*walks up to the front desk*um...2 rooms,please^^
Cloud:*snaps out of confusin*two...two?why....
Misha:Aimee's roomin' wif Meh*skips to Their room*
Aimee:*walks up to Cloud*well i'll see you in the mornig,Good nite Cloud*Kisses him on the Cheek and walks to her room,Sees Misha jumps on the bed and sighs*
Cloud:*Face turns red*umm...yea,nite..*walks in his room and smiles*
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nice chapter this fan fic is getting really good
 
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 3 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*in Aimee and Misha's room*

Aimee*comes outta the Bathroom in a pretty night dress*so whats up Misha...you seemed to be in a rush
Misha*looks out the window*nope..just wanted to see Reno...anyway,i really did mean what i said about you and cloud...you 2 would have a cute kid^^
Aimee*Maybe....Cloud would never....Anyway,you must like reno..huh?
Misha:*Turns red*Aimee please,please don't tell anyone??
Aimee:*smiles*Don't worry,your secert safe with me....
Misha:*stands up*Wonder what Clouds doing?
Aimee:*Sits down*kinda....why?
Misha:*runs to the door*lets go find out..
Aimee:*gets up and walks to Misha*but...*whispers*be quiet...
*the girls leave their room and walk to Cloud and are standing outside his door*

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~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*Aimee and Misha are standing out side Cloud's room*

Aimee:*whispering*whos he talking to?
Misha:*whispering*don't know....
*inside the room*
Cloud:*sitting on his bed in nothing but pants,*....why.....*sighs*Whys Aimee so nice...Misha's just loud,but shes funny,and a good friend,but Aimee's...just..
Reno:*On speaker Phone*Dude,face it your Crushing on Aimee,
Cloud:*lays down*Maybe....i get that feeling..kinda like you did last Friday when you tripped and fell on Misha.
*outside the room..and their whispering i just don't wanna type it over and over again*
Aimee: oh..my god...
Misha:Cloud loves you
Aimee:Reno's crushing on you...wait shhhh
*Back in the Room*
Reno:Hey Misha's cute..how can i not like her
Cloud:...that just you,but i think..i love Aimee...
Reno: Dude.....so just Sleep wif her already...
Cloud:I'm not like that..Aimee isn't either..
Reno:Some man you are....
Cloud:Shut up your only 17!
Reno:so...your 21...wait...Oh crap!
Cloud:see i win,but still i do love Aimee and i don't want aything to happen to her..
Reno:what ever,i'll be there in the morning,see ya
Cloud:yeah,see ya*hangs up the phone*well...i guess i Love Aimee*sighs*maybe..we could...*Turns off his light and goes to sleep*

*Back outside his Room their whipsering still*

Misha: OMFG.....
Aimee:lets go back to our room
*they go back*
Misha:RENO WUVS MEH!!!!!!!!
Aimee:*yawns*well..you'll see him in the morning i guess,but...about cloud..
Misha: oh..you mean...
Aimee:yeah...should we?
Misha:yeah....
Aimee:..lets just go to sleep?
Misha:*Jumps in her bed*K nite Aimee
Aimee:*gets in her bed*Nite Misha..*whispers*nite cloud
 
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 3 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*in Aimee and Misha's room*

Aimee*comes outta the Bathroom in a pretty night dress*so whats up Misha...you seemed to be in a rush
Misha*looks out the window*nope..just wanted to see Reno...anyway,i really did mean what i said about you and cloud...you 2 would have a cute kid^^
Aimee*Maybe....Cloud would never....Anyway,you must like reno..huh?
Misha:*Turns red*Aimee please,please don't tell anyone??
Aimee:*smiles*Don't worry,your secert safe with me....
Misha:*stands up*Wonder what Clouds doing?
Aimee:*Sits down*kinda....why?
Misha:*runs to the door*lets go find out..
Aimee:*gets up and walks to Misha*but...*whispers*be quiet...
*the girls leave their room and walk to Cloud and are standing outside his door*

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~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*Aimee and Misha are standing out side Cloud's room*

Aimee:*whispering*whos he talking to?
Misha:*whispering*don't know....
*inside the room*
Cloud:*sitting on his bed in nothing but pants,*....why.....*sighs*Whys Aimee so nice...Misha's just loud,but shes funny,and a good friend,but Aimee's...just..
Reno:*On speaker Phone*Dude,face it your Crushing on Aimee,
Cloud:*lays down*Maybe....i get that feeling..kinda like you did last Friday when you tripped and fell on Misha.
*outside the room..and their whispering i just don't wanna type it over and over again*
Aimee: oh..my god...
Misha:Cloud loves you
Aimee:Reno's crushing on you...wait shhhh
*Back in the Room*
Reno:Hey Misha's cute..how can i not like her
Cloud:...that just you,but i think..i love Aimee...
Reno: Dude.....so just Sleep wif her already...
Cloud:I'm not like that..Aimee isn't either..
Reno:Some man you are....
Cloud:Shut up your only 17!
Reno:so...your 21...wait...Oh crap!
Cloud:see i win,but still i do love Aimee and i don't want aything to happen to her..
Reno:what ever,i'll be there in the morning,see ya
Cloud:yeah,see ya*hangs up the phone*well...i guess i Love Aimee*sighs*maybe..we could...*Turns off his light and goes to sleep*

*Back outside his Room their whipsering still*

Misha: OMFG.....
Aimee:lets go back to our room
*they go back*
Misha:RENO WUVS MEH!!!!!!!!
Aimee:*yawns*well..you'll see him in the morning i guess,but...about cloud..
Misha: oh..you mean...
Aimee:yeah...should we?
Misha:yeah....
Aimee:..lets just go to sleep?
Misha:*Jumps in her bed*K nite Aimee
Aimee:*gets in her bed*Nite Misha..*whispers*nite cloud
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nice fan fic but don't get them out so quickly wait for people to respond at night you get alot of people on the forum
 
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OH GOD SCRIPT. D:
I HATE SCRIPT.

Script is lazy, stupid, and the bad path for a fanfiction.
Come on, you can actually describe/things/better when you write WITHOUT script style!

Also, Cloud's already in a love triangle with Aeris and Tifa. And WTF is Misha? Is she the one from Tokyo Mew Mew?
And did you put yourself in this fanfiction?
All in all, it's not that good.
AND IT'S IN SCRIPT DAMN IT. T-T
 
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Mr. said:
OH GOD SCRIPT. D:
I HATE SCRIPT.

Script is lazy, stupid, and the bad path for a fanfiction.
Come on, you can actually describe/things/better when you write WITHOUT script style!

Also, Cloud's already in a love triangle with Aeris and Tifa. And WTF is Misha? Is she the one from Tokyo Mew Mew?
And did you put yourself in this fanfiction?
All in all, it's not that good.
AND IT'S IN SCRIPT DAMN IT. T-T
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um if you didn't like it why even post just go if you don't like it and the triangle thing its a fan fiction and if you read her first post misha is here friend
 
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Zexion543 said:
um if you didn't like it why even post just go if you don't like it and the triangle thing its a fan fiction and if you read her first post misha is here friend
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i agree with you

If you didn't like it >.> don't post..just leave//and yeah,Its a fan Ficton!!
I like Cloud,And Misha is my friend
Sora_Ish_mine!

She likes Reno...so just leave
 
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Zexion543 said:
um if you didn't like it why even post just go if you don't like it and the triangle thing its a fan fiction and if you read her first post misha is here friend
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Oh, so I'm not allowed to post when I don't like it?
In fact, I am allowed to.
Script is stupid, lazy, and quite frankly, retarded.
You can describe scenes so much more with literate style than retarded script.

Cloud is totally OoC, Reno may be also(I really don't give a crap about any FF characters besides Sephiroth), and the whole thing sucks, with multiple grammar errors and that stuff.
Write some one-shots, improve your skills, and KEEP SCRIPT TO THE MOVIE SETS.

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