Hey, Whats the big idea!

[Kiba]

Oh, Hey look what I made! s1eyeballs

v.1

v.2

Cnc.

 

[tangerine]

Slices aren't a good idea unless they add something to a concept piece. You just end up distracting from a focal point and ruining flow. I'm not entirely positive about this because it's so bright, but it looks like you took a render and lightened it over a stock. As for text, here's the same old rule and advice: It should be a part of the tag, not just pasted over it.

 

[Kiba]

Okay, Thank ya!

And it's actually not a render. Link to stock.

 

[tangerine]

When I said render I was referring to what I guess you would call a "C4D".

 

[Kiba]

v.2

Not much of a difference but I messed with the brightness and contrast and curves.

 

[tangerine]

Please do try and take advice into consideration if you're going to modify a graphic or make something new. It's nice that you thanked me but it would be nicer to see you take something out of the comments you receive.

 

[Kiba]

I do take you advice into consideration! ^^ I just didn't know what to do with the other stuff so I focused on making it not seem so bright!

I do enjoy your crit though and definitely take it into consideration.

EDIT:

Mkay, after taking you criticism I did another one! ^^

I like it better!