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might be sotw entry.
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Liking the creation of depth here. Your foreground effects in some areas look a little distorted, like incomplete erased c4ds. (mainly left of the stock)
 

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YES I GOT DEPTH. I CAN NEVER GET IT RIGHT SO THANK YOU :D

but, I'm not quite sure what you mean about the distorted c4ds..can you maybe elaborate a bit? I did use one bubble c4d and set it to screen, but the rest in the tag are a mix of brushes and a bit of a galaxy texture soooo...? :c
 

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the c4d looks like the base of your effects but it's to cluttered,tone it down a bit along with the little sparks
depth and lightning are cool though
 

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nice, i really like it. and like they said, depth is great.

i also see a white cutout near the center. it's barely noticeable, but if you stare at the piece, it looks a bit distracting.
 

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the c4d looks like the base of your effects but it's to cluttered,tone it down a bit along with the little sparks
depth and lightning are cool though
I'm not quite sure what you mean about the C4d though because I only used one c4d and they were bubbles, so maybe you're talking about the background stock? D:
And I totally get what your talking about with the clutter. I tend to put in too much and then tone it down lol.
nice, i really like it. and like they said, depth is great.

i also see a white cutout near the center. it's barely noticeable, but if you stare at the piece, it looks a bit distracting.

I didn't see it before, thanks for pointing that out to me. I'll fix it before I post in sotw :3
 
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