Hey Look at this Lindsay!

[Zeagal]

Okay...so this is a picture I drew of one of my characters named Lindsay. She's from Shattered Skies (link in my sig). I drew it today, and I lurve it! Except my scanner got a hold of it...the original has a bit more of her head and there's about a half an inch on the bottom. What do you think?

http://i383.photobucket.com/albums/oo276/ZeagalLindsayVan/LindsayProfile.jpg

 

[Finland]

Not bad, Z! She looks very cute.
And now here comes the critique...

The first thing I spotted were the lips. They look rather odd, probably because they are so even, if you get what I mean... The upper lip should curve towards the face when it gets closer to the lower lip. Now it looks pretty flat. ( Sorry, I suck at explaining xD;; )
The second thing... look at her ear. A little small, isn't it? The shape of it is not that accurate, either... But don't worry, I'm not good at ears either. ;;
Her hair looks unusual too... Long from the other side, short from the other. If you wanted her hair to be like that though, then it's fine. :3
What else... I think the shape of the face is very nicely done. Don't know if the neck is a tad bit too thick.
But overall I like it. <3

 

[Zeagal]

The first thing I spotted were the lips. They look rather odd, probably because they are so even, if you get what I mean... The upper lip should curve towards the face when it gets closer to the lower lip. Now it looks pretty flat. ( Sorry, I suck at explaining xD;; )

Yes lips are my weakness. It's the one thing I really can't stand. So are you saying I should curve the top lip upwards?

The second thing... look at her ear. A little small, isn't it? The shape of it is not that accurate, either... But don't worry, I'm not good at ears either. ;;

Hey this is one of the best ears I've drawn. Haha I'm sort of kidding, but it took me a year to actually start including them in drawings. I should fix it, but at the time I figured it would get covered by hair so I didn't really try that hard. I agree though, it's too thin.

Her hair looks unusual too... Long from the other side, short from the other. If you wanted her hair to be like that though, then it's fine. :3

For this picture yes I wanted it like that. She kind of put it all to that side.

What else... I think the shape of the face is very nicely done. Don't know if the neck is a tad bit too thick.
But overall I like it. <3

Yes the neck is questionable, but thank you.

 

[KeybladeLegacy5]

I like everything...almost haha. The one thing that stands out to me is the lips, they are kinda messed up The rest of the drawing is good though

 

[Zeagal]

I think I know what I need to do to fix those. The top lip gets unexistant so that needs to come up.

 

[june]

it's really good, except for the lips and the ear.
try to practice more

 

[Zeagal]

Thanks and I'll work on that.