Here I go again...

[Gizelita]

I know I'm no good at graphics, but, as everyone can see, I keep trying. This time I tryed to make something a bit darker. I'm not sure what everyone thinks but this one I liked a bit, there's something missing though.
I'm not really sure about the size yet, so I'm just going to post the one that I think fit the best for now.

 

[Amphetamine]

i think the size should be a bit smaller, just cut some off hte bottom.
but, this looks smokey and hazy. it's like i can't really see the stock, and it also looks blurry. maybe you should try and make the stock sharper, and make it stick out more.

 

[Daddy]

I think the main problem with this is that the 'cloud' like effects actually decreased the quality of the stock you've used.
It make it looks sort of distorted and choppy. I think that you should either get rid of some of it or use another method to create that creepy factor. Also, I think this is probably the only rare instance in which that particular font choice works for a tag. Some may disagree, however.

 

[Gizelita]

I guess it ended up like this because of the Radial Blur I used at the end, I should only delete one or two layers with the blur and everything should be solved, once I do that I'll post here. And I'll see what I can do with the size, that's been my worse problem so far with tags. Thanks for the advice.