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Le Gasp! What kind of writer makes a story without a happy ending? (Besides Lemony Snicket?)
Yes, I did. The raven's named Marc in Larxene and 14 so I wanted to change it up a bit.*gasps* Ken Anderson! and Rolly Crump! And "grandpa" Marc!
You named the raven Claude?
And wow, Leota's human!
Sorry for the late comment. My internet booted me out earlier.
^Who, who, and who?
Yes, Leota's human, it would make sense if this took place before she was imprisoned in a crystal ball. Does it? Was Constance the one who imprisoned her?
^Yay my reputation proceeds me!
It's just that this is one of only two Haunted mansion stories I've seen her as human. And the other was only because it was her backstory.
Thing is, the only Haunted Mansion I've "seen" is the movie w/ Eddie Murphy. I know there's a book, but is it the same story as the movie or does it tell about Constance and all that, because I've never heard of her before this fic.
Well I knew you were going to put in her so I wasn't surprised. But I had no idea you were going to throw in Ken Anderson. Or Claude either.Yes, I did. The raven's named Marc in Larxene and 14 so I wanted to change it up a bit.
I wanted to build what was going to happen, so that's why Leota's human.
You're missing Harriet Burns too. Also, the Davis referred to in Day 1 is another Davis who worked on the project.
Yep! And that's all for a bit.Ooo, an update!
No commentWhy do I get the feeling that Madame Leota was doing that on purpose to reveal Constance's true nature?
So, Sora and Riku aren't speaking to each other? Awww...don't give up Riku! Follow your gut!
What I like: This story
What I don't like: You gave Kairi the gayblade. It isn't hers, its Riku's
My Theory: Someone dies
Because it was originally Riku's. And people think Riku is gayWhy do people call it the Gayblade? It doesn't look gay, it looks girly, which is why it's Kairi's, not Riku's.
GAH! I want to respond but I don't want to spoil anything!
Sucks, doesn't it? As a writer, I don't want you to say anything. As a reader... I want you to spill your guts about every little detail of what's going to happen next. But if you did, I'd probably plug my ears and hum or something.
Great update, btw. I love Madam Leota. Though I've never actually read a fic where she's out of her crystal ball. And Riku should follow his instincts and Sora and Kairi should listen to him and leave that mansion. =)
Yeah, it was a fanfic someone wrote. Very detailed, very awesome. =)Choc said that too, and she's HM obsessed like I am. Well, she said that the only other one with ML out was a back story. (Which this isn't)
But, if Riku leaves... what about Kairi and Sora?