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A friend of mine from China asked me to look over a speech she wrote and correct all her mistakes..the thing is, I'm not very good with grammar and stuff, so I was wondering if anyone here could read over it and fix it up a bit, she has to give the speech next Tuesday I believe. I looked over it, I saw some mistakes, but I'm still not too sure.
here it is
Thank you in advance. I know it makes me look lazy, I'm just not too confident in my grammar skills.
A friend of mine from China asked me to look over a speech she wrote and correct all her mistakes..the thing is, I'm not very good with grammar and stuff, so I was wondering if anyone here could read over it and fix it up a bit, she has to give the speech next Tuesday I believe. I looked over it, I saw some mistakes, but I'm still not too sure.
here it is
Spoiler ShowWe are the world, we are the future
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! My name is Caiyingkai, I am from business English class 1. This is my great honor to share my topic with you here. And today my topic is "we are the world, we are the future."
In today's China, Post 90s is a generation often questioned by the society, we have received more praise and abuse than any generation in contemporary society. We were born in a computer era, so we have more access to the internet then other generations, which leads post 90s to live in the world connected with QQ. But post 90s are not a generation addicted to the virtual world, and spare no time on our study and daily life. We can see many shining stars of post 90s in every aspects of society. Do you remember the three students in Changjiang University? The three teenagers have been termed "heroes" by some observers, a term rarely associated in China with the post 90s generation. As one student of the post 90s, I am confident to say our post 90s are not a bad generation! We are the future flowers of our country!
As for me, I am proud that I am one of the post 90s. I can yell to the whole world that I am young. Though I can't say I am a great man, but at least I am a girl who has my own dream and I am working hard for pursuing my future. I am nobody today, but I will be somebody in the future.
There's no denying the fact that the post 90s generation is playing an important role in contemporary society. What I want to say is that, we are growing up and on the way to becoming mature, bearing heavy burden from parents, schools and society. Perhaps the contribution made by post 90s is not as great as the post 70s and 80s by the time, but we are young, and I think in the future, we post 90s will perform excellently in every field of the society. All in all, Ladies and gentlemen, post 90s, we are the world, we are the future! Thank you for your listening!
Thank you in advance. I know it makes me look lazy, I'm just not too confident in my grammar skills.