becuase this story is based off facts from KH but no one can be the character or have the same special stuff they have the main example is the keyblade
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ok i get it i think watever just keep it up i need something to read while im wrighting my fic
this is excellent. can't wait to see what's next.
this fic. rocks!
1. good please
2. an orphan, who knows nothing of her past other than that her parents were brutally murdered. her older brother took care of her till she was 5, then he abandend her. she then met up with sgp but when heartless attacked they were sepperated. she was left to fend for herself. when she was 8 she was trained by a martial arts monk. after 6 years of training, she left and went to explore the world.
3. has a big battle with heartless and is found by the others lying on the ground, knocked out and severly hurt.
4.2 daggers and a nija sword
5. sgp!
6. theif
7.um..maybe some black mage powers (the basics like fire,water,ice,etc)
1. good please
2. an orphan, who knows nothing of her past other than that her parents were brutally murdered. her older brother took care of her till she was 5, then he abandend her. she then met up with sgp but when heartless attacked they were sepperated. she was left to fend for herself. when she was 8 she was trained by a martial arts monk. after 6 years of training, she left and went to explore the world.
3. has a big battle with heartless and is found by the others lying on the ground, knocked out and severly hurt.
4.2 daggers and a nija sword
5. sgp!
6. theif
7.um..maybe some black mage powers (the basics like fire,water,ice,etc)
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yay maggie has jaoined and i watched over her and i still will so all you desperate boys back up
yay! i joined! lol *dances around* party over here! WOOT WOOT! party over there! WOOT WOOT! ...so..when are u posting the next chapter setharoth? (fyi, i''m rreeaaalllyyy impatient lol)hurry up she will destroy us well not me
yup ^.^ SGP is the only life i'll spare, cause if i destroy him in my sudden burst of rage and impationce....well, then he wont be able to type his fic.....so...ya...
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and remember i watched over u when u were abandoned and wheres the chapter
yup! ...wheres the chapter! *grabs torch*...hmm..*looks under rock* setharoth! where are you! *looks in a bush*
(.)(.) ????????????????did some1 talking?i can't see anything!
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Chapter 5
They are driving in the car with amy and Rg in the back seat and also Seth driving with Sgp next to him. Luc is hanging out of the backseat sleeping. They are currently driving throught the city.
Sth: how much futher Sgp
Sgp: i dont know
Sth: fine
Something hit the car Suddenly
Rg: What was that??!?!?!?!?!?!?
Amy: Yay do you know?
Sth: probally some rock
Cld: OWWWWWWWWW
Cld: WHat the hit my head
Sgp: shut the up CLd
cld looks back
Cld: HOLY SHIT
Sgp: what happen
Sgp: DO you need to go to the bathroom again
Cld: NO but there are some black thing that are near my ass
Sgp looks back at Cld
Sgp: Why did you just say that
Sgp: holy shit the shadows are back
Sth: Good i will shack them
Sth start taking random turn into other alleys
Sth: WHY AREN'T YOU SHOOTING THEM SGP
Sgp: oh yay i should
Sgp takes out his guns and shoots them
Sgp: DIE
Sgp is laughing like crazy
Cld: YOU ALMOST SHOT ME
Sgp didn't even listen
Seth: oh shit
Seth jump off a ramp going over the river this is it
Rg:ahhhhhhhhh
Amy: please lets us reach the other side god
Luc: STOP YOU ARE CLOSE TO HITTING ME
Sgp: DIE YOU BITCHES DIE
ps: redharry123 you are in the next chapter
They are driving in the car with amy and Rg in the back seat and also Seth driving with Sgp next to him. Luc is hanging out of the backseat sleeping. They are currently driving throught the city.
Sth: how much futher Sgp
Sgp: i dont know
Sth: fine
Something hit the car Suddenly
Rg: What was that??!?!?!?!?!?!?
Amy: Yay do you know?
Sth: probally some rock
Cld: OWWWWWWWWW
Cld: WHat the hit my head
Sgp: shut the up CLd
cld looks back
Cld: HOLY SHIT
Sgp: what happen
Sgp: DO you need to go to the bathroom again
Cld: NO but there are some black thing that are near my ass
Sgp looks back at Cld
Sgp: Why did you just say that
Sgp: holy shit the shadows are back
Sth: Good i will shack them
Sth start taking random turn into other alleys
Sth: WHY AREN'T YOU SHOOTING THEM SGP
Sgp: oh yay i should
Sgp takes out his guns and shoots them
Sgp: DIE
Sgp is laughing like crazy
Cld: YOU ALMOST SHOT ME
Sgp didn't even listen
Seth: oh shit
Seth jump off a ramp going over the river this is it
Rg:ahhhhhhhhh
Amy: please lets us reach the other side god
Luc: STOP YOU ARE CLOSE TO HITTING ME
Sgp: DIE YOU BITCHES DIE
ps: redharry123 you are in the next chapter
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yay chapter hey that was short
sorry but i have to keep it suspensefull and i might make another today
you better or i will hunt u down
i think its good. way ta go
J
JenovaDOWNFALL
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I wanna be in!
yay i'm in the next chapter! cooly! thanks so much! please write more soon!
please write more soon!
T
The_Superior2345
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sniff sniff, this is still the best fan fic i've read.
supier if you want to be in it you have to give me proper info =about you and jenonva you have to give me info
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