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Fanfiction ► Guardian of Armagedon (The Frozen Wastelands)



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Ok, im just gonna give you guys a preview of my story and i will work on it throughout the week, and if you would like give me your opinions so i could make this story even better...

Overview:

Through many years of corruption and hatrid throughout the world, it has destroyed and weakened the planet, and it is dieing, people and machines take over the creatures and environment destroying anything in its path. The world has come to its end and nothing will bring it back, not even the technology and power of humans can stop its iminent destruction and the wrath of hell will soon consume the world....

Prologue Part 1:

From the firey depts of hell, a powerful demon called "Kil'Jaden" or as know to many as "the devil" has been awoken by the corruption and destruction of this planet. He has unleashed a power unlike any other to destroy the world from the inside-out. He chose a target, the perfect person to take, a person with the ultamate power almost in the entire world, the President of the United States. He began the sacrifice and the ritual begins....

Meanwhile in the barrens of the Artic Circle....

Walking back from his catch of the day, Jak tosses the meat on the table while bleeding from his left hand. He also sees his right hand covered with the blood from his other hand and begins to yell at himself.
"God damn! Not again," he yells. He then looks at his arms and looks back into his past from the hundreds of scars he has been delt with.
He runs outside, and begins to look how horrible his life is; he then slams the old, wooden door so loudly it could be heard for miles. His house is like a massive "garage shed" made completely out of woods from nearby trees. He also was brought up, but not by his parents, an old man named Fredd. Fredd is a generous, kind man, with a messed up childhood. He smoked drugs and drank at 15 and never was the same, now hes slowly dieing and lives far from Jak, away from the cold. He left Jak when he was only 4 years old. He managed surviving by living in a cardboard box and eating fish from the rivers that are nearby. When he was 6, he became an expert hunter and hunted, wild bears, wolves, and snow leperds. When he was 11, he was attacked by a massive bear he called "Misha", and will never live the day down and was always on the lookout of her. Now hes 17, and still he lives this very moment, and still searches for Misha.
 
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Prologue Part 2:

He begins to eat his meat, suddenly hears a soft roar in the distance. He begins to grab his gear and his wooden spear just incase he may need it.
He opens the door and runs toward the sound; he then dives behied a massive snow mound and peaks his head over the top. He sees three snow leperds feasting on a unusally large bear. He notices a scar from the bears face, he knew it was Misha. He swiftly charges at the first snow leperd and jabs his spear throigh its chest. It falls to the ground, moaning with pain and the second one begins to run at Jak. He then swings his spear around and cuts its throat and it falls to the ground.
He looks around for a second, notices one of the leperds is still alive. He then feels a sharp pain in his back and gets thrown to the ground. Jak is getting enraged, he tosses his spear at the leperd missing it by a hair and the leperd dives onto Jak. It begins to claw and rip up Jak and kicks the leperd after it cuts him dead in the face. Jak begins to bleed from his skull and rushes for his spear. He grabs it and forcefully shoves it through its skull and it finally falls to the ground, dead.
He approches the great bear and tries to pull her into the shelter of his home. He then begins to treat his and Misha's wounds. He finds a deep gash into one of her legs. Jak also notices a small spear shoved into her heart. He begins to help her and removes the spear from her.
After the long night of helping Misha, she becomes good friends with Jak. Jak begins to build new weapons and armor to protect him and kill foes. He disigned a weak gun from metal tubing, a hammer, wooden carved stick, and some metal pieces that where melted togeher. How you may ask where did he get the resources from? Fredd sent him those after hearing about the leperd attack. He also uses small, smooth, pebbles as bullets for his gun. Taking a profession in leatherworking and skinning, he is able to make padded leather armor after killing a beast for the hides.
He walks outside with Misha, and fires his gun at a nearby wolf. Misha charges with a full force attack, and begins to draw back. Jak runs up to it dodging a vile bite from the wolf. Misha claws it in the face and the beast falls down. Jak grabs his spear and stabs it threw its neck, dead.
Jak hears a roaring sound in the distance, it gradually gets louder and louder.
"Avalanche?!?" he woundered. Out of a matter of seconds, a tsuniami wave of snow and ice began to charge at Jak and Misha full speed. It was only about a second before it hit them. Crashing down the sloppes Jak and Misha were dragged under the snow and as soon as you know it, they vanished for enterity....
 
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Chapter One, Part One - The Beginning of it All

In a world of chaos and destruction, the world is slowly collapsing under their feet.... People, and machines destroy the forests and the heart of the planet.... Now, the time has come and the world will suffer and the people and machines will die. The only way to stop this destruction, is to summon the great gods of the spirit worlds or the wrath of the devil will soon consume this world....

Date: 11/09/06
Location: Middle of nowhere, Alaska


It has been a three-hundred and forty-seven years since the great Jak has walken of these frozen plains.... He has been frozen in ice for almost all enterity and has not been seen or located ever since.
A lonely mining worker begins to walk through the snowly great plains looking for a place to mine for frozen oil. He grabs his pick and says,"Boy, this seens like a good spot, i have a feelin' that theres some oil over 'ere."
"Norrivck? Where are you?" a voice yells in the distace.
"Petey im over yonder cliff" says Norrvick.
"I can't see-" After hearing those last words, a sudden scream comes from the distance and slowly dies down.
"Petey? Petey?!? Where are you? Whats going-" Then out of the blue a massive bear jumps from the cliff and smashes Norrvick's face into the neraby boulder.
From the frozen depts Jak emerges from the snow next to his fathful pet Misha, it has begun....

End of part One

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