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Fanfiction ► GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.



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I love all of your poems Grimm,and your new one is no exception.

<3
 

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Poetry huh? You've got talent that's for sure. What am I talking about? You're GJ! You're all about quality!

Love it and keep it going.
 
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Thanks for the comments, everyone, I really appreciate it. <3

And SD...you give me too much credit. :3

Anyway, new one up today, probably. =D
 

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Lol, impatient are we, DP?

New one now. Writing it down at this moment, and without planning...let's see how it works out shall we.

Side note: Sex inspired. =D And yeah, short phrases ftw. :3


When we feel

A touch
A bite
A stroke
And love

Blowing in your neck
nibling your ear
A slight peck
Do you want to hear?

A moan
A word
A scream
Of love

Stroking your hair
And your wet skin
Isn't it fair?
Come on, give in

Come on, give in...

And let me kiss you

 

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Thanks once agian, DP, thanks once again. =D

Lol, now that I re-read it, it sounds more like lyrics down from 'Do you want to hear?'. xD
 

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That's unexpected.



You must have loving companions.



I always do that when I write poems. They don't come out that bad. Anyway, really good and...motivating.

1. Unexpected?

2. Its a poem, what does that have to do with companions? :/

3. Yeah, I normally don't just planning, but most of the time I have some sort of idea at least of what I want. This time I just wrote down what was on my mind, and formed it into a poem.

4. Motivating? In what way exactly. xD
 

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1. Unexpected?

Yeah. Coming from you of all people.

2. Its a poem, what does that have to do with companions? :/

Well...such vivid descriptions can only come from experience.

3. Yeah, I normally don't just planning, but most of the time I have some sort of idea at least of what I want. This time I just wrote down what was on my mind, and formed it into a poem.

You wrote what was on your mind? Are you lovesick or perhaps hormone-driven?

4. Motivating? In what way exactly. xD

Suddenly I feel like going back to school.
 

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Yeah. Coming from you of all people.

What do you mean by that? Sarcasm I pressume?

Well...such vivid descriptions can only come from experience.

Its just sweet lovin', baby. xD I never go without passion.

You wrote what was on your mind? Are you lovesick or perhaps hormone-driven?

I was acutally thinking a lot about my ex that day, so maybe. :3

Suddenly I feel like going back to school.

I still don't get what you find motivating? =P
 

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What do you mean by that? Sarcasm I pressume?

Never mind.

Its just sweet lovin', baby. xD I never go without passion.

How nice.

I was acutally thinking a lot about my ex that day, so maybe. :3

The question is: is she thinking about you?

I still don't get what you find motivating? =P

Let's just say I don't attend an all boys school.
 

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Well, anyway, a new one! =D Hope you all like it. I think it'll be more of a short, poetry based story, in stead of a normal poem. We'll see.

Hehe, it turned out as a middle-way. Its a bit story-like, but still a poem. ^^

And btw, I'd love to see some poems of you then, SD. PM pwease? :3



In search of happiness

Walking through this world of dreams,
I stare at all these wonderful things.
A bird flies by, with colors blue, green, yellow, red, or so it seems.
A bird floats gently on these winds

A bright, yellow sun is rising,
with strings of red touching the earth I'm walking.
The fluffy clouds are lying,
trying to be green instead of white, while I'm talking

to myself and even singing
a song of nature.
Its like a life of easy biding,
this place with temperature.

A gentle sun.
A bright blue sky.
Makes all undone,
And lets me fly.

A single breeze,
or a drop of water...
Is more to me,
than all that matters.

I my dreams.

In a wish.



 
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