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The new poem is really nice, but I do like the previous one better.
Poetry huh? You've got talent that's for sure. What am I talking about? You're GJ! You're all about quality!
Love it and keep it going.
Love it and keep it going.
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Thanks for the comments, everyone, I really appreciate it. <3
And SD...you give me too much credit. :3
Anyway, new one up today, probably. =D
And SD...you give me too much credit. :3
Anyway, new one up today, probably. =D
*Waits for the new poem*
Yeah, don't mind me. >_>
Yeah, don't mind me. >_>
Lol, impatient are we, DP?
New one now. Writing it down at this moment, and without planning...let's see how it works out shall we.
Side note: Sex inspired. =D And yeah, short phrases ftw. :3
When we feel
A touch
A bite
A stroke
And love
Blowing in your neck
nibling your ear
A slight peck
Do you want to hear?
A moan
A word
A scream
Of love
Stroking your hair
And your wet skin
Isn't it fair?
Come on, give in
Come on, give in...
And let me kiss you
New one now. Writing it down at this moment, and without planning...let's see how it works out shall we.
Side note: Sex inspired. =D And yeah, short phrases ftw. :3
When we feel
A touch
A bite
A stroke
And love
Blowing in your neck
nibling your ear
A slight peck
Do you want to hear?
A moan
A word
A scream
Of love
Stroking your hair
And your wet skin
Isn't it fair?
Come on, give in
Come on, give in...
And let me kiss you
Awesome poem!
Its so abrupt and I love the pace. <3
Its so abrupt and I love the pace. <3
Thanks once agian, DP, thanks once again. =D
Lol, now that I re-read it, it sounds more like lyrics down from 'Do you want to hear?'. xD
Lol, now that I re-read it, it sounds more like lyrics down from 'Do you want to hear?'. xD
It's kinda nice. I like it!
That's unexpected.
You must have loving companions.
I always do that when I write poems. They don't come out that bad. Anyway, really good and...motivating.
1. Unexpected?
2. Its a poem, what does that have to do with companions? :/
3. Yeah, I normally don't just planning, but most of the time I have some sort of idea at least of what I want. This time I just wrote down what was on my mind, and formed it into a poem.
4. Motivating? In what way exactly. xD
Yeah. Coming from you of all people.
Well...such vivid descriptions can only come from experience.
You wrote what was on your mind? Are you lovesick or perhaps hormone-driven?
Suddenly I feel like going back to school.
What do you mean by that? Sarcasm I pressume?
Its just sweet lovin', baby. xD I never go without passion.
I was acutally thinking a lot about my ex that day, so maybe. :3
I still don't get what you find motivating? =P
Never mind.
How nice.
The question is: is she thinking about you?
Let's just say I don't attend an all boys school.
No, she is not thinking about me.
And I get why you want to go to school again. xD
And I get why you want to go to school again. xD
Well, anyway, a new one! =D Hope you all like it. I think it'll be more of a short, poetry based story, in stead of a normal poem. We'll see.
Hehe, it turned out as a middle-way. Its a bit story-like, but still a poem. ^^
And btw, I'd love to see some poems of you then, SD. PM pwease? :3
In search of happiness
Walking through this world of dreams,
I stare at all these wonderful things.
A bird flies by, with colors blue, green, yellow, red, or so it seems.
A bird floats gently on these winds
A bright, yellow sun is rising,
with strings of red touching the earth I'm walking.
The fluffy clouds are lying,
trying to be green instead of white, while I'm talking
to myself and even singing
a song of nature.
Its like a life of easy biding,
this place with temperature.
A gentle sun.
A bright blue sky.
Makes all undone,
And lets me fly.
A single breeze,
or a drop of water...
Is more to me,
than all that matters.
I my dreams.
In a wish.
Hehe, it turned out as a middle-way. Its a bit story-like, but still a poem. ^^
And btw, I'd love to see some poems of you then, SD. PM pwease? :3
In search of happiness
Walking through this world of dreams,
I stare at all these wonderful things.
A bird flies by, with colors blue, green, yellow, red, or so it seems.
A bird floats gently on these winds
A bright, yellow sun is rising,
with strings of red touching the earth I'm walking.
The fluffy clouds are lying,
trying to be green instead of white, while I'm talking
to myself and even singing
a song of nature.
Its like a life of easy biding,
this place with temperature.
A gentle sun.
A bright blue sky.
Makes all undone,
And lets me fly.
A single breeze,
or a drop of water...
Is more to me,
than all that matters.
I my dreams.
In a wish.
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That poem was awesome. Please keep writing them. 
:3 Thanks once again. It makes me blush when I look through the thread and see how much it is appreciated. :3
*tackles*
Pretty poem is pretty!
=D
Pretty poem is pretty!
=D
The poem is really nice!!!
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