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Fanfiction ► GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.



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Blue

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I like your new poem a lot.Probably one of your best. <3
 

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Thanks Blue.

I'll be writing a new one soon, a thought is building in my mind, and I think it'll explode not too much later from now. xD
 

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New one. =)

I was listening to some old songs I used to love. Classical music, good to fall asleep with, you got to love it. But as I was listening I suddenly remembered...a girl whom I used to love, but since recently left my life for what I think is for ever. And...while thinking of her, combined with the music, thoughts of...melancholy floated into my mind. I needed to write this down, so...this one I dedicate to her.

Btw, the music I was listening to was, among others, Memory of Fanelia: The soundtrack of the anime Escaflowne. You really should listen to it sometime.


Flown away Memories

My heart,
My heart is wavering.
Remembering or so it seems.
Those times long forgotten,
Times long gone.

My heart,
My heart is longing.
Eagering or so it seems.
For your touch long forgotten,
Your touch that I miss.

This song,
This song is whispering.
A melody or so it seems.
A melody of love...
A melody for you.

This feeling.
Yes, this feeling.
Melancholy or so it seems.
Is wanting to tell me,
These memories of us.

Us?
Yes, us.
Happinness or so it seemed.
But, this is just a mere glimp...
Of times long forgotten,
Times long gone.

...

Tonight I remembered you...
Tommorrow you are gone.

 
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Grimmjow Jaggerjack,
your poems are f.cking beautiful.

may I say, you must have a great deal of inspiration where you get it from.

awesome.
I hope you keep on writing even more.

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This is by far my favourite poem from all of those you've written.
*Gives cookies*
Its awesome. O_O
I love it. <3
I can actually picture a pretty melody for it and turning it into a song. XD
 

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Thanks for all the love. <3

Hehe, well now that I re-read it it seems to have a bit of disturbed flow, but its ok. I was half asleep when I wrote it...I couldn't sleep before I got it off my mind.

And yeah, love inspired poems ftw. <3
 

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Thanks. <3

I remembered her again when I re-read the poem, and got a faint feeling in my stomach. :3 Seems the crush is still going. :3

I love the way she used to say my name when I did something silly. <3
 

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Aww adorable. <3

Love is always a good, if not the best, type of inspiration one can get so its pretty cool that you like a person enough for them to inspire you to write something like this. ^_^
 

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Your new poem is awesome Grimm!

I like it a lot,one of my favourites so far. 8D
 

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Thank you, thank you all. =D

Here's a new one, and I'm busy with another. This one I'm not sure about though...The beginning is alright, I think, but I lost track near the end. But yeah, you now how that goes. =P Once you make a poem, it is hard to re-write it without breaking the flow or vibe.

Anyway, here it is, tell me if you like it:


Sweet like Cherries/Cherrysweet

It is not about need
It is not about war
It is not about greed
And for you...
It is not so you can be a star.

You need not bleed
You need not cry
You need not scream
You need only...to die

Die
For the ones you love
The ones you cherish
You will leave for above
With a smile you will perish

To be sweet
To be loving
To be gracious
To be walking

Down the path of death...
For planting the seed
Of being loved

 
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