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Before anyone reads this, I'd like to say that I'm not very confident in posting this story, but I'm doing it anyway. I'm not very good in action/adventure genre of stories, but this is my first, so I'll just give it a go. Even though I don't really want to hear any criticism, I'll take any criticism that anyone says. So please...um...enjoy...?
Chapter 1
Five digital screens could be seen in the room and the lights were bright. In the centre of the room, there was a long table fit for 8 people, most probably used for discussing certain…situations.
A lady enters the room. Her face is elegant, but her brown eyes showed nonchalance, and she wore spectacles. Her long black hair was tied up in a high ponytail, but a fringe complimented her face. She quietly took a seat on the right side of the table and sat with her leg over her other. She closed her eyes for a while.
Two more people entered this time, one a man and the other still a boy. The man took his seat on the front of the table. He had short brown hair but his eyes were covered by shades, and he sat in the front of the table. The boy, with short black hair and crimson eyes, looked 18 years of age. He took a seat next to the lady and nodded at her as a greeting.
The lady had nodded back to him. The room was silent and cold. Another woman walked into the room, and she took a seat at the end of the table. She flipped her long blonde hair back, and looked at the early three people with her blue eyes. She muttered a greeting as the other three nodded at her.
Three men entered soon after, two of the three having a dark shade of brown hair of medium length, but one had blue eyes, while the other had black eyes. The third man had short black hair with olive eyes. The three men took their seats on the left side of the table. Only one seat was left empty which was supposed to be occupied by a girl of the same age as the boy.
Without waiting, the meeting commenced. The blonde haired woman at the end of the table stood up. She spoke in a soft voice. “We, Atrox Lumen, have been called here to discuss an important problem…but it seems one of us have yet to come.” She said, looking at the empty chair.
“It will be fine, Domina. We can start without her.” The man who sat at the front of the table said, taking of his shades. He is called Libertas. He had violet eyes and he smirked. The man with black eyes and brown hair smirked as well. This man was called Sentio.
The missing girl had never been late. If anyone, she would be the earliest person to arrive here. The young boy, named Munio, was concerned aboyt her and was restless but suppressed it. He clenched his right fist on the table. Libertas placed his hand on top of Munio’s fist. “She is fine, Munio. What makes you think anything has happened to her?” He asked, amused.
Munio looked away. “No, it's nothing sir.” He replied. “It is just unusual for her to be late.” He said, embarrassed. The olive eyed man, named Vir, grinned and chuckled. A tint of red appeared on Munio’s face. He tried to hide his face. This made Libertas chuckle.
“Pardon me, everyone.” A voice was heard from the entrance of the room. Munio looked up to see Fidelis, the missing girl who was of the same age as him. Fidelis had neck length black hair and her eyes were green. She sat next to the long black haired woman, named Vita. Vita cleared her throat as she closer to the table. Fidelis and Munio could see each other as they leaned into the chair.
In the next moment, a gunshot was heard and Munio sat in his chair, surprised. Red fluid spilled out of his head and his mouth. It dripped onto his clothes and his eyes slowly faded away, showing no sign of life. Everyone around him was unfazed by what has happened. A clap was heard from the entrance of the room, by a boy with crimson eyes and short black hair.
“Well done, Fidelis, as expected.” The boy said, walking over to the dead body in the chair. “It’s a shame he was so different.” He said, pushing the chair to the corner of the room, and taking a new chair. He sat on the chair, leaning back into it, and stretched lazily. “They’re idiots to think that a spy can actually imitate me.” He said.
“Imagine the real Munio blushing.” Libertas said sarcastically. “Wouldn’t it be pleasant to see him falling for Fidelis?” He added. Fidelis kept her gun back into its holster on the right side of her leg.
“Must you all leave everything to me?” Fidelis asked, irritated. Vir laughed. “I’m sure Munio must have liked it that way.” Vir said sarcastically. Munio chuckled. “I liked it very much and so, I thank you, Fidelis.” He said.
“You are not welcome.” Fidelis said, glaring at Munio. “I wish it was really you over there in that chair.” She said somewhat sarcastically.
“That is sad, Fidelis, very sad. Be careful what you wish for though, or it may come true.” Munio said, laughing.
Atrox Lumen was an organization of people who kill others for their own good intentions. There are eight members in this group. The two founders, one a man with short brown hair and violet eyes is called Libertas. The other, a woman, with long blonde hair and blue eyes is called Domina.
The man with short dark brown hair and blue eyes is called Amicus. The other man with the same hair but with black eyes was called Sentio. They are both brothers who joined the organization just after it was created. Another man with olive eyes and short black hair is called Vir. He joined a year after the organization was formed. Vita, the woman with long black hair which was tied back and had brown eyes joined just after Vir joined. She had a special power, which was the power of healing.
The last two who joined the organization were of the same age and the were the youngest people to have joined. The boy with crimson eyes and short black hair is called Munio, while the girl, with neck length black hair and green eyes, and is called Fidelis. They are both 18 years of age.
Munio had joined the organization when his parents were killed by Inferus Terra, another organization with the same intention of Atrox Lumen, only they had strong contempt for Atrox Lumen. Even though Munio knew Atrox Lumen may just be the same as Inferus Terra, he wanted revenge and didn’t care about anything else.
Fidelis was picked up by Libertas when she was 17, but she had no memory of her past. She had the power as a fighter, she was smart, and everyone was suspicious of her, but she had really proved that she had no memory of her past.
“Continuing with our mission…” Domina started, looking at everyone. “…We’re infiltrating Inferus Terra on how they sent a spy into our base, and what they want from us.” Domina said, looking at Fidelis.
“Fidelis, you will be on this mission with Amicus.” Domina said clearly, knowing someone would not agree with it.
“Boring…” Munio said, disappointed. “What’s wrong, Munio? Jealous?” Amicus asked, teasing him.
Fidelis glared at them. “Shut up or I’ll shoot the both of you.” She said venomously.
Chapter 1
Five digital screens could be seen in the room and the lights were bright. In the centre of the room, there was a long table fit for 8 people, most probably used for discussing certain…situations.
A lady enters the room. Her face is elegant, but her brown eyes showed nonchalance, and she wore spectacles. Her long black hair was tied up in a high ponytail, but a fringe complimented her face. She quietly took a seat on the right side of the table and sat with her leg over her other. She closed her eyes for a while.
Two more people entered this time, one a man and the other still a boy. The man took his seat on the front of the table. He had short brown hair but his eyes were covered by shades, and he sat in the front of the table. The boy, with short black hair and crimson eyes, looked 18 years of age. He took a seat next to the lady and nodded at her as a greeting.
The lady had nodded back to him. The room was silent and cold. Another woman walked into the room, and she took a seat at the end of the table. She flipped her long blonde hair back, and looked at the early three people with her blue eyes. She muttered a greeting as the other three nodded at her.
Three men entered soon after, two of the three having a dark shade of brown hair of medium length, but one had blue eyes, while the other had black eyes. The third man had short black hair with olive eyes. The three men took their seats on the left side of the table. Only one seat was left empty which was supposed to be occupied by a girl of the same age as the boy.
Without waiting, the meeting commenced. The blonde haired woman at the end of the table stood up. She spoke in a soft voice. “We, Atrox Lumen, have been called here to discuss an important problem…but it seems one of us have yet to come.” She said, looking at the empty chair.
“It will be fine, Domina. We can start without her.” The man who sat at the front of the table said, taking of his shades. He is called Libertas. He had violet eyes and he smirked. The man with black eyes and brown hair smirked as well. This man was called Sentio.
The missing girl had never been late. If anyone, she would be the earliest person to arrive here. The young boy, named Munio, was concerned aboyt her and was restless but suppressed it. He clenched his right fist on the table. Libertas placed his hand on top of Munio’s fist. “She is fine, Munio. What makes you think anything has happened to her?” He asked, amused.
Munio looked away. “No, it's nothing sir.” He replied. “It is just unusual for her to be late.” He said, embarrassed. The olive eyed man, named Vir, grinned and chuckled. A tint of red appeared on Munio’s face. He tried to hide his face. This made Libertas chuckle.
“Pardon me, everyone.” A voice was heard from the entrance of the room. Munio looked up to see Fidelis, the missing girl who was of the same age as him. Fidelis had neck length black hair and her eyes were green. She sat next to the long black haired woman, named Vita. Vita cleared her throat as she closer to the table. Fidelis and Munio could see each other as they leaned into the chair.
In the next moment, a gunshot was heard and Munio sat in his chair, surprised. Red fluid spilled out of his head and his mouth. It dripped onto his clothes and his eyes slowly faded away, showing no sign of life. Everyone around him was unfazed by what has happened. A clap was heard from the entrance of the room, by a boy with crimson eyes and short black hair.
“Well done, Fidelis, as expected.” The boy said, walking over to the dead body in the chair. “It’s a shame he was so different.” He said, pushing the chair to the corner of the room, and taking a new chair. He sat on the chair, leaning back into it, and stretched lazily. “They’re idiots to think that a spy can actually imitate me.” He said.
“Imagine the real Munio blushing.” Libertas said sarcastically. “Wouldn’t it be pleasant to see him falling for Fidelis?” He added. Fidelis kept her gun back into its holster on the right side of her leg.
“Must you all leave everything to me?” Fidelis asked, irritated. Vir laughed. “I’m sure Munio must have liked it that way.” Vir said sarcastically. Munio chuckled. “I liked it very much and so, I thank you, Fidelis.” He said.
“You are not welcome.” Fidelis said, glaring at Munio. “I wish it was really you over there in that chair.” She said somewhat sarcastically.
“That is sad, Fidelis, very sad. Be careful what you wish for though, or it may come true.” Munio said, laughing.
Atrox Lumen was an organization of people who kill others for their own good intentions. There are eight members in this group. The two founders, one a man with short brown hair and violet eyes is called Libertas. The other, a woman, with long blonde hair and blue eyes is called Domina.
The man with short dark brown hair and blue eyes is called Amicus. The other man with the same hair but with black eyes was called Sentio. They are both brothers who joined the organization just after it was created. Another man with olive eyes and short black hair is called Vir. He joined a year after the organization was formed. Vita, the woman with long black hair which was tied back and had brown eyes joined just after Vir joined. She had a special power, which was the power of healing.
The last two who joined the organization were of the same age and the were the youngest people to have joined. The boy with crimson eyes and short black hair is called Munio, while the girl, with neck length black hair and green eyes, and is called Fidelis. They are both 18 years of age.
Munio had joined the organization when his parents were killed by Inferus Terra, another organization with the same intention of Atrox Lumen, only they had strong contempt for Atrox Lumen. Even though Munio knew Atrox Lumen may just be the same as Inferus Terra, he wanted revenge and didn’t care about anything else.
Fidelis was picked up by Libertas when she was 17, but she had no memory of her past. She had the power as a fighter, she was smart, and everyone was suspicious of her, but she had really proved that she had no memory of her past.
“Continuing with our mission…” Domina started, looking at everyone. “…We’re infiltrating Inferus Terra on how they sent a spy into our base, and what they want from us.” Domina said, looking at Fidelis.
“Fidelis, you will be on this mission with Amicus.” Domina said clearly, knowing someone would not agree with it.
“Boring…” Munio said, disappointed. “What’s wrong, Munio? Jealous?” Amicus asked, teasing him.
Fidelis glared at them. “Shut up or I’ll shoot the both of you.” She said venomously.
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