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The line work is very choppy.
The coloring isn't fluid at all, it feels more rushed.
It feels more like a Work.In.Progress to me.
I like how some of the cuts and gashes have been worked in, but the way the blood falls really takes away from that.
Now this is probably just your style but I can't say I'm a fan of the whole sketchy movement(style).
 
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╬ProperArtist╬;3366909 said:
Honestly I can't say I'm a fan of this piece.
The line work is very choppy.
The coloring isn't fluid at all, it feels more rushed to me.

It still feels like a Work.In.Progress to me.

I like how some of the cuts and gashes have been worked in, but the way the blood falls really takes away from that.

Now this is probably just your style but I can't say I'm a fan of said style.​

Critics, they lurk everywhere.

This drawing is schmexy-o! lol, the first one look likes it's melting, pretty cool.
 

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Critics, they lurk everywhere.

This drawing is schmexy-o! lol, the first one look likes it's melting, pretty cool.​

So I'm only supposed to give good feedback and can't give constructive criticism?
I'm sorry but it doesn't work that way. When you post here you run the risk of getting negative feed back.

It's ok, just not my cup of tea because of the process in which it was done. Silent Hill is awesome though.​
 

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So I'm only supposed to give good feedback and can't critic?
That's not how it works.​

lol, I never said that, I am just saying lurks everywhere. Just because I think it's great, doesn't mean I think there are no flaws. Like the coloring, it could've been less messy but overall, very schmexy!
 

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lol, I never said that, I am just saying lurks everywhere. Just because I think it's great, doesn't mean I think there are no flaws. Like the coloring, it could've been less messy but overall, very schmexy!​

For Silent Hill it works, I just wish it could've been smoother.
But then again I go to art school so I tend to be a bit harsher than others :<
 
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