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Amphetamine

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just a lil somethin something
 

Just Dari

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in my dream, I named my baby distance, so I could drop it.

for the overall composition, your stocks are insanely flat against the bg.
 

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for the overall composition, your stocks are insanely flat against the bg.

exactly what i thought when i saw it.

i like the soft colors separating them, i just wish that the stocks themselves were brought a little bit more. honestly, it's hard for me to focus on them atm. my eyes keep drifting to the text.
 

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The green line/brush/stroke/whatever it is just strikes me odd. Like the sea bg tho
 

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oh my god triangle man -cums-
i like it except i think that shade of green should be shade of blue or red.
 

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This is a great LP! The only thing I can pick out, though, is that the green gradient line seems to be coloring out Riku's face a bit. It looks strange next to Sora, who doesn't have any of that green line on him. Like, I love the green line, but I think that there's too much of it on Riku. Maybe dim it a little bit before it gets to his face?
 
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