Ah, welcome, young n00blets, to Zetsumi's course for literate roleplaying. By the end of this, you two should be at Jet's level.
Now, Akuma, you need to put a LOT more work into your intro. You need to use it to set the time, place, and period of the RP.
Yihazu, you need to re-write your bio in Third Person, not First Person. See mine for an example.
Name: Zetsumi Nova
Race: Pure-Blood Higher Class Saiyan
Age: Unknown, depends on if his age is how old his body is...or the time that has passed since his birth, for he has spent over a thousand years in hybernation, but his cells are, by all standards, those of an eighteen year old.
Gender: Male
Appearance (NOTE: All transformation appearances coming as soon as I draw them up)
Normal Appearance
Zetsumi's normal form, as this he has brown hair and eyes.
Super Saiyan
Zetsumi as a Super Saiyan, in which his hair becomes glowing golden, and his eyes take on a darker sheen. He also expierences a boost in speed and strength, accompinaied by an equivilant increase in bodily muscle.
Super Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan Super Zetsumi, a mode that goes by several other names, including Ascended Saiyan. This transformation increses the muscle and strength to a great degree, but also slows the body by a large amount, and reduces flexibality.
Super Saiyan Two
The second Super Saiyan transformation, not much changes from the first externally, apart from an amount of sparks encircling the body. The user's speed and strength both increse by a great amount.
Super Saiyan Three
A more primordial-appearing form, someone using Super Saiyan level Three looks as if they are sliding down the evolutionary chain, their brow sliding foward, their muscles bulging, and their hair lengthening. This form allows over twenty times the user's original power, and is much more brutal then the other Super Saiyan levels.
Super Saiyan Four
In Super Saiyan Four, the user's chest is exposed, their body sprouting thick fur over their chest, and a tail, one of which is essential to actually make the transformation in the first place. This form is highly dangerous and volatile, and the user retains little of their own personality in it.
Super Saiyan Five
A transformation that takes the descent into an ape-like form further, this time the user's fur becomes golden, and their entire body is covered in it apart from their chest and face. They are highly agile and powerful.
Super Saiyan Six
The final transformation achieved by Zetsumi, in this form the user's baser instincts take control, and they become a violent killing machine. It is different depending on the user, and their original build. Zetsumi's normal form is quite thin and tall, so his Super Saiyan Six resembles his Super Saiyan Five, with longer arms and legs. His arms seem to gain a second elbow in this form, allowing more flexibility.
Oozaru
The Ape form of the Saiyans, it is triggered by Brutz waves. The user transforms into a Great Ape, losing themselves in their own instincts.
Golden Oozaru
A form of the Oozaru in which the user has achieved control, this form is both powerful and brutal, but slow and cumbersome.
Fusions:
Yisumis (Yihazu)
A fusion with the Half-Saiyan Yihazu, this form allows more cutting-based forms of Yihazu's own Kirrilian techniques.
Super Yisumis
Super Saiyan Two Yisumis
Super Saiyan Three Yisumis
Super Saiyan Four Yisumis
Moves:
Ki Blast
A standard Ki technique, Zetsumi's tend to be more needle-shaped then the standard energy ball.
Kyoushu Cannon
A laser beam that emenates from Zetsumi's index and middle finger, it resembes the Special Beam Cannon, but Zetsumi can sweep it across areas, cutting his targets in half, rather then simply drilling through them.
Death Beam
A more also used by Freiza, Zetsumi's are crimson. It is a beam technique that cuts into the opponent.
Sauzer Blade
A blade of pure energy, crimson like all of Zetsumi's Ki. It can easily cut through almost any material.
Sauzer Glaives
Minature Sauzer Blades that form, one on each of Zetsumi's fingers, turning his hand into a claw.
Destructo Disc
A move used by Krillian and Freiza, it forms a blade of energy that explodes at the user's command or on contact. If the user chooses not to force it to explode, it can be used to sever an opponent's limbs. A slight variation of the technique allows direct control of the Disc.
Beam Sword
A devestating finisher also used by Vegitto, the amount of Ki put into the attack detirmines the length of the blade.
Razor Wind
One of Zetsumi's signatures, he fires a cluster of many Destructo Discs at once. This move was eventually redevelopped into Piccollo's Hellzone Grenade, using Blasts rather then Discs.
Death Nova
Zetsumi's Signature finisher, it at first is a simple ball of Ki, charged and shot at the enemy, but upon contact, it expands and create an explosion equivilant to that of a supernova.
Personality: Cold, malicious, and utterly uncaring, Zetsumi seems to do only what he feels will benefit him. His sole desire is to grow powerful, though he knows the virtue of waiting. He is surprisingly cruel, often torturing his opponents before killing them.
Biography: One thousand years before the destruction of Planet Vegeta by Frieza, an event occoured known as 'The Culling'. This predated even the first appearance of Majin Buu, and had it been in this time Buu had emerged, he probably wouldn't have survived to fight the Z fighters.
In this period, a man travelled from planet to planet, systematically wiping out every fighter with a power level over 1000, in search of a challenge. He found none. His name, the name of the great harvester, was Zetsumi.
Realising that he had destroyed all worthy fighters in the galaxy, he devised a plan to find a challence, a plan that would set things in motion. First, he pitted several races against each other, forcing war on the denezins, forcing fighters to emerge, and then, he slowly began to manipulate the various species in the galaxy, attempting to ensure that his race, which had bred some of the greatest fighters, would emerge dominant.
At last, his work complete, he entered a hybernation tank, and set himself to sleep for a thousand years. A thousand years, the rise and fall of Freiza, of Majin Buu, of Cell, all passed for him in the blink of an eye.
Now, he has awoken, and has again begun his quest for a worthy opponent.
Not only is Zetsumi strong, he's also highly intelligent, which is what makes him such a dangerous enemy. Many of his moves are based on cutting or slicing the opponent's body, a technique that seems to give him pleasure.
I plan to have him decide to preserve Earth, as it has become the galaxy's 'proving grounds', so to speak, a magnet for all the strongest fighters.
