Great chapter FK, it was well worth the wait and I can tell that you put alot of effort into it.
Oh thank you =D
I agree....it was worth the wait and you did put a lot of effort in to this
looks good so far for the kids lets just see how long that lasts
Um well let's see what happens I want something BIG to happen but let's see how can I add it.
Great chapter....mistakes were common throught the chapter but, nothing too big.
Yeah I see them now..thanks =D
There were some typo's, but other than that was it very good.
I wrote too fast >< I was orried to leave the forums without finishing the chapter.
Ok guys well there's going to be a prologue to chapter 7, it will be up..I hope tonight, but I'm not gonna be able to enter until..Saturday..an important exam
So sorry