It's getting interresting now!
Chapter four was a little short....
Chapter four was a little short....
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Well yeah =D thanks Silent Avera if it hadn't been for you I would have double posted XD
On post above you ^^;
=D I'm so happy you like it =D yeah I will continue it, now I have more readers too so yeah ^^
It wasn't Chapter 4...it was the prologue to Chapter 4 hehe ^^;
Chapter 4 will be up by the end of the night if I manage to write it ^^;
Pretty good...................
YAY!!!! *applauds* i'm loving this so much can't wait for more you constantly keep me hanging!!!!
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I'm so happy you're enjoying it =D I'm just writing Chapter 4 now =D
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I'm sorry FK. Whas crazy when I posted that. Well nice prologue! I want more!
...XD well perhaps you were sleepy lol XD
and chapter 4 will be up today =D
and chapter 4 will be up today =D
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Cool! I'll check out when it's posted then!
O_O no I'm not obsessed...I had it on my mind months ago and I know how it's going to end..it just takes time to write it..that's all O.O
Ok well here's chapter 4..I should have joined both things together >< it's a little short but...it needed to be like that so..><
Morning arrive and both kids awoke with the light of the shining sun that covoured them. The begginnig of a new day…the beginning of their new life.
Now what to do? That was the first thing they thought “So now…where to?” Crystal asked as she was walking into the forest. “There must be a way out of here…I feel it” she added.
“Let’s just continue on” Zafiro said and then he took her hand, both of them just continue walking deeper into the forest, like if there was no end to it.
The girl was feeling a little afraid of how deep and dark the forest looked but seeing at her ‘friend’ made her feel a whole lot better “Will there be an end to this?” she asked.
The boy looked at her and touched her hair “I promise we will find a way out” he answered and smiling at her, he just continued walking until they both arrived at what looked like a lake.
That lake was like the end of the road, there was no land across it so even thinking about crossing it was pointless for them “End of the road Crystal” the dissapointed boy said “…there’s nothing more to this” he added.
The girl couldn’t just get resigned about it so she entered the lake “We can’t lose our hopes” and after she said that she looked forwards and saw something that looked like a pillar “What could that be?” she asked herself “Hey Zafiro! Come with me there’s something over there!” she yelled feeling like if they were saved now.
“Ok now you come here I’ll go!” he told the girl and he entered the lake too and saw how Crystal didn’t listen to him and went deeper into the lake until she arrived at the pillar.
Zafiro only kept following her “hey wait!” he shouted then he got on the pillar too “What’s this?” he asked.
The girl touched what looked like a sphere “I guess our way out..look!” she said “It has a similar shape like our Crystals…give me mine” she inquired.
Zafiro gave the girl her crystal and he took out his “Ok…we are not losing anything anyway…let’s give it a try” he said.
Both kids put their crystal on that shiny sphere and a light went out of it then they heard a voice “This is the only way to go to the humans world so if you’re ready…just close your eyes but be aware that if you do close your eyes, you’re never going to be able to return home” the voice said.
The kids only looked at each other and then nodded “Just get us out of here!” Crystal shouted.
The voice said “If that’s your wish, so be it”
Then a lot of lights surrounded them and the petals of the flowers near the lake surrounded them too, it felt magical you could say but for them that event was full of sadness, living everything behind but decided anyway.
Then everything went silent…Crystal and Zafiro were unconcious not knowing what was happening around them.
“Hey look!” a female voice said “These kids..they might be orphans…let’s take them to the orphanage quick!”
Then a male voice could also be heard “Yeah let’s hurry we can’t leave them here!”
Ok well here's chapter 4..I should have joined both things together >< it's a little short but...it needed to be like that so..><
CHAPTER 4
A NEW BEGINNING
A NEW BEGINNING
Morning arrive and both kids awoke with the light of the shining sun that covoured them. The begginnig of a new day…the beginning of their new life.
Now what to do? That was the first thing they thought “So now…where to?” Crystal asked as she was walking into the forest. “There must be a way out of here…I feel it” she added.
“Let’s just continue on” Zafiro said and then he took her hand, both of them just continue walking deeper into the forest, like if there was no end to it.
The girl was feeling a little afraid of how deep and dark the forest looked but seeing at her ‘friend’ made her feel a whole lot better “Will there be an end to this?” she asked.
The boy looked at her and touched her hair “I promise we will find a way out” he answered and smiling at her, he just continued walking until they both arrived at what looked like a lake.
That lake was like the end of the road, there was no land across it so even thinking about crossing it was pointless for them “End of the road Crystal” the dissapointed boy said “…there’s nothing more to this” he added.
The girl couldn’t just get resigned about it so she entered the lake “We can’t lose our hopes” and after she said that she looked forwards and saw something that looked like a pillar “What could that be?” she asked herself “Hey Zafiro! Come with me there’s something over there!” she yelled feeling like if they were saved now.
“Ok now you come here I’ll go!” he told the girl and he entered the lake too and saw how Crystal didn’t listen to him and went deeper into the lake until she arrived at the pillar.
Zafiro only kept following her “hey wait!” he shouted then he got on the pillar too “What’s this?” he asked.
The girl touched what looked like a sphere “I guess our way out..look!” she said “It has a similar shape like our Crystals…give me mine” she inquired.
Zafiro gave the girl her crystal and he took out his “Ok…we are not losing anything anyway…let’s give it a try” he said.
Both kids put their crystal on that shiny sphere and a light went out of it then they heard a voice “This is the only way to go to the humans world so if you’re ready…just close your eyes but be aware that if you do close your eyes, you’re never going to be able to return home” the voice said.
The kids only looked at each other and then nodded “Just get us out of here!” Crystal shouted.
The voice said “If that’s your wish, so be it”
Then a lot of lights surrounded them and the petals of the flowers near the lake surrounded them too, it felt magical you could say but for them that event was full of sadness, living everything behind but decided anyway.
Then everything went silent…Crystal and Zafiro were unconcious not knowing what was happening around them.
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“Hey look!” a female voice said “These kids..they might be orphans…let’s take them to the orphanage quick!”
Then a male voice could also be heard “Yeah let’s hurry we can’t leave them here!”
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ok so that ties up how they got to the orpanage now what
You really have my interest with this FK and that is really hard to do
You really have my interest with this FK and that is really hard to do
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Yeah...it is too short j/k....good chap...
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Hey! Nice chap! I'll be waiting for the next one!
*(sigh)* So they leave thier home forever now...Good chappie, now we'll see life in the orphanage.
actually, just work on length and it'll be good...
you normally read mine, thought I'd read yours
you normally read mine, thought I'd read yours
=D well it's just because I had this story in my mind a long time ago so I kinda know what to do on how to continue it =D
Bingo! this is what explains lots of things too =D cos if they're in 'the humans world' then they're not a 'legend' anymore =D
XD yeah I know it ws short ><
=D thanks Sora I'll tell you when I post the next one ^^
Are you feelin..sad S.A? but..this wasn't mean to be sad :blink:
Got it! =D yes thank you SK47 *nod*
Thanks for the thanks FK (hey that should be my catchprase.....NAH)
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