Critique Drawings Please

[animefreak!]

Sora and Vanitas

My OC Celisse, she has a robotic arm with blades for fingers.

MY OC
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Can I get some critique on my drawings :3
Can critique all or some, whatever you prefer :3
I wanna get better at drawing so I'd like for some critique. I can't get critiques yet on my Dev. Account cause I don't have enough points. Much appreciated if you can help :3

 

[june]

sora looks really cute.
The only critic I'll make is that you draw the arms and legs too thin. That's with the drawing itself
another thing, try to keep the paper clean or else everything will look messy

 

[animefreak!]

Thanks :3.
I'll be sure to work on arms and legs then.
Thanks for critique

 

[TheArtisanHero]

The mirror although flat in real life should reflect that of a 3d perspective. The second is shaded a bit too much but is cute. The third of these drawings is well done other than the arms shading which should be more rounded. The right side of the cheek is also thicker than the left. (I am speaking about the characters right and left not ours) I would suggest on buying a good eraser remove some of the smears in your work, it seems sloppy if the background is smeared..

 

[animefreak!]

How exactly is it shaded too much? Like what makes it seem to dark?
yeah I need to work on the sides of people's faces T_T
Thanks for the critique

 

[TheArtisanHero]

Hip region for the most part, It is hard to distinguish the details around this character's belt area. Too much shading is often a sign of a mistake and an attempt to hid it. I am not saying you made one, but it is too dark to tell if the proportions are correct around the hip, signifying a possible problem.

 

[animefreak!]

alrighty then it does seem kinda awkward