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I did read that, but I might need some refreshing, can you post it again or at least quote it?


as you wish...


PART/STORY/CHAPTER ONE Beginnings.

-Organization XIII is resurrected by an unknown being (Trinity), except for the traitors from Chain of Memories.

-The empty spaces are replaced with Rextanse(in Marluxia's place), Xana(in Larxene's place), Daxic(in Vexen's place), Zaxeldion(in Axel's place), and Xowlin(in Roxas' place).

-Over a severe difference in opinion, Rextanse and Zaxeldion decide to defect from Org. XIII. Xowlin and Xana follow with them. Daxic is sent, as a mole, to join them.

-The recruiting of the rest of the Exiled takes place. This part should be a time lapse, that gives an overview of the other members.

-Daxic informs to Xemnas that the Exiled have grown too large, and need to be cut down (though he's telling them FAR too late, on purpose. He hopes the Exiled will end Org. 13 without him having to lift a finger). Organization XIII attacks the Exiled Order.

-At the cost of many of the weaker members of The Exiled, they eventually end Organization XIII, and we reveal to the reader Daxic's plan to break down the Exiled in a similar fashion(none of the other members know he was a mole, but some just don't trust him anyway). Also, the keybladers make their brief entrance.

-Assuming that the Exiled are attempting to use Kingdom Hearts, like Org. 13 did, the keybladers attack members of the Exiled Order separately (learning from Org. 13's mistake). While the members are off on a specific assignment (don't know what that is, yet), the keybladers attack while they're scattered about.

-Each keyblader looses, save Liri. Though she won her match, she spares her adversaries because of her crush on Rextanse. Ricti, Jixah's brother, is killed by Daxic without Jixah knowing.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER TWO Weakness.

-The Mystic Order is introduced. A brief description of their past as a group is given. (The option of individual human pasts will be there, but it may not happen because I don't know where we could put it. If we put it in the prologue, not only would it be a bit of an unnecessary spoiler, but it'd be out of context with the other chapters.)
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-With this knowledge given to the reader, the Mystic Order honorably challenge the Exiled. Each group of Exiled members is teleported to a separate place in time and space to fight their respective Mystic Order member. This is all just to show their strength. If they wanted, the Mystic Order could crush the Exiled Order without breaking a sweat, if they attacked as a group.

-In a bit of a Dragon Ball Z style (jump from fight to fight in order to make the battles seem longer than they are), each battle takes place. And, again with many casualties on the Exiled's side, the Exiled win and are taken back to the dimension they're used to.

-Do to the massive number of casualties, and the near victories ONLY gained by exploiting small weakness of the Mystic Order, some of Exiled get their wake up call of how weak they really are. Many of the members go off into solitude to train, while others do so as a group. This is when Jynx and Rextanse enter "The Void".

-At this time, the Reverse Order's Exel shows his face and warns all the members of the upcoming "test", before leaving with a cocky laugh. He gives this warning in the form of a group of questions. This is also the time where DrBanxon stumbles upon Daxic and the other traitors planning their betrayal, and he is forced to join them or die (he joins them).

PART/STORY/CHAPTER THREE Conspiracies.

-(The battle with Xemo is carried over, and finished in this chapter)Most of the members are still training, some are done, The Order of Sin give their assault on each individual member. This takes place within their minds.

-While the attack is taking place, the Reverse Order hold a meeting, to discuss their goals and plans (this serves as their introduction).

-The results of the battles with the Order of Sin vary. Some win, some loose. Those who win become better for it, while those who loose become even more consumed by the sin they lost to. This event causes each of the members to realize that it's time to regroup back at The Castle That Once Was. This does not include Jynx and Rextanse. Because, shortly after battling their Sin, they are confronted by Xemo.

-They each arrive only to meet the Reverse Order standing at the gates. This battle causes the most tragedies of all, leaving about 8 members alive. During this battle, Jynx and Rextanse return from the void just in time to aid the wounded(after beating Xemo). After everything was said and done, everyone beaten, battered, or dead, the traitors ambush everyone else, and kidnap Xana.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER FOUR Betrayal.(or) Endings.

-Daxic reveals the full extent of his plans. That he plans to combine his and Xana's powers to create a beast of ultimate power. A planet eater that could travel or control time. And it would be under HIS control.

-While Daxic begins the creation of his eater of worlds, the last of the knocked out Exiled come to. They realize what happened, and begin searching for Daxic and the other traitors. As they get closer and closer, they begin to loose faith in the idea that Xana's still alive.

-The finally locate Daxic when the creature is completed, and Xana is nearly drained of all of her energy. The final battle takes place, atop the roof of The Castle That Never Was (that's where Daxic's hide out is).

-At the end of the battle most everyone is dead. Jynx is able to destroy the world eater, and Daxic soon after. He joins the other survivors (Jixah, who turned against Daxic after finding out she was just his tool, Xana, and Rextanse) in a sigh of relief. That is, just to find out that Daxic wasn't dead. He couldn't be killed. He simply reformed from the acid.

-At this moment, Trinity finally reveals herself. With the simple phrase, "Sleep, ye restless soul." Daxic fades into nothingness. She tells the four survivors her role in the story. That she brought Org. 13 back to life, that it was her fault the Mystic Order attacked, and that the Order of Sin were her former disciples (and a gift given to the Reverse Order to do what they will with). She told them that this was all to give Jynx, the one of two nobodies ever to gain an heart and without the aid Kingdom Hearts, enough strength to seal Kingdom Hearts for good.

-Sacrificing his life, Jynx seals Trinity within Kingdom Hearts, and removes the lock. This prevents anyone, even a keyblade master, from opening Kingdom Hearts again. It's simply too powerful, and too pure to be tampered with. And Trinity's natural urge to send the world into nothingness is one that cannot be allowed to roam free.

-The remaining three members go their separate ways. Xana goes off to raise her new child (Jynx's) and adjust to her new heart. Jixah sets off to search for her brother, not knowing that he's dead. And Rextanse simply wanders the rest of the universe living out his non-existent life.


Axel is still alive, his being is just trapped within Exel. Exel is the complete being of Axel, which is why his abilities are so much more powerful.

And after Exel is defeated Axel is released from him...

just thought i'd put that out there.

(Axel narrates the story)

And on a side note Kaarix is still alive, because her and Rextanse have a relationship and eventually have a baby girl

and least I forget, Jynx comes back there are signs that he's still alive, through a flash trailer kinda like how they show the Kingdom Hearts teaser trailer...it shows that he's still alive.....

edit: Note there have been add ons to the story. Like Vexen being an addition member for the Exiled to fight in the big war. Plus or minus anything else we've discussed
 
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Yeah, we might want to update that....

Also, Daxic is badass. He can't be killed. <-----Screams Badass. Yeah, being able to reform out of acid is up there on my list of badassery.
 

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the basic outline is correct, but some details we need to rework. And seeing as we don't know if the Exiled 2 is even gonna happen, the ending is still open for interpretation. Not to mention we haven't included where each member comes in, except for some of the originals. But the basic is there.

If anyone has anymore additions or edits just feel free to include them :3
 

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Yeah, we might want to update that....

Also, Daxic is badass. He can't be killed. <-----Screams Badass. Yeah, being able to reform out of acid is up there on my list of badassery.

I may update it tomorrow. And don't compliment Daxic. It'll inflait his head. And then it'll explode! AND ACID WILL GET OVER EVERYTHING! D8
 

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This thread along with a few other very large threads are causing multiple errors in the forum database. Therefore, it needs to be closed.

Feel free in creating a Version 3.0 thread and continue discussion there... Thanks.
 
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