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me too, unless it's tuesday or thursday, then I get on at 4:30DarkSora23 said:
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me and heartless nobody get home from school 2:30 but school actually lets out at 2:15, but sometimes hn takes longer to get online....by the way has anyone viewed my stories I posted on page 4 of the thread-since I didn't feel like rewriting the ones from the closed site i just place a link to them.
Now we have to find out when Xodyc gets on.
Okies, here's a little something-somethin I came up with:
We are what you fear. We are the reason the sun sets, the reason there is night. We are the reason you tremble in cowardness. We are the monsters in your closet, the monsters under your bed, the monsters you fear most. We are fear, because fear had nothing to be afraid of, but itself...
The rain falls on three hooded teenagers walking in the dead of night. But they don't seem to mind.The street they walk in appears to be deserted, and yet they walk. A gentle breeze fills the street, but is followed by a violent gust of wind. This wind pulls back the hoods on the teenagers, revealing thier faces. The boy in the kiddle bears chesnut brown eyes, and short, pitch black hair. His personality would be guessed that he is an antisocial person. On his right is another boy, but he has a variety of shades of blonde, and has forest green eyes. This one seems quiet, and looks older than the other boy. On the left of the boy in the middle is a girl. She has crimson red hair, with ememrald green eyes. Her eyes speak of a kind-hearted person, and she seems the youngest of the three. The wind blows in the opposite direction, putting the hoods back on the teenager's heads, concealing thier faces once again. And they walk to no destination.
What do ya think?
We are what you fear. We are the reason the sun sets, the reason there is night. We are the reason you tremble in cowardness. We are the monsters in your closet, the monsters under your bed, the monsters you fear most. We are fear, because fear had nothing to be afraid of, but itself...
The rain falls on three hooded teenagers walking in the dead of night. But they don't seem to mind.The street they walk in appears to be deserted, and yet they walk. A gentle breeze fills the street, but is followed by a violent gust of wind. This wind pulls back the hoods on the teenagers, revealing thier faces. The boy in the kiddle bears chesnut brown eyes, and short, pitch black hair. His personality would be guessed that he is an antisocial person. On his right is another boy, but he has a variety of shades of blonde, and has forest green eyes. This one seems quiet, and looks older than the other boy. On the left of the boy in the middle is a girl. She has crimson red hair, with ememrald green eyes. Her eyes speak of a kind-hearted person, and she seems the youngest of the three. The wind blows in the opposite direction, putting the hoods back on the teenager's heads, concealing thier faces once again. And they walk to no destination.
What do ya think?
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!
PS. I read your story, the 13th member. It was good.
PS. I read your story, the 13th member. It was good.
thnx. ^.^DarkSora23 said:
I can't belive I got inspiration in school...freaky...it was from this play we were reading.
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Thats pretty good start, but what do u say to coming up with a back story that concludes with them walking on this lonely road, and perhaps ur guys and me(JINX) and heartless nobody+ could met up later and join to be one huge powerful group.
Genius!!!!!the_13th_member said:
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Oh and later I will put a detailed picture of Jinx, on the site so u can see just how cool he looks-If u want an idea of what he looks like just look at the begining of the thread its all there.
I got the intro...but no inspiration yet for the plot...
That was one of the best intros I've ever read.
Hi I'm here! I see 13th member got here before me. Well, I supose Daxic could join forces with Xana, but he still thinks of her as his rival. If she learns how to properly use her time powers she could be very dangerous. If you need plot ideas, I'm full of em.
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Maybe u could make each of them an outcast from their own village and they have nothing else to live for they were the only unnatural ones in their clan/village and for this their family and loved ones were killed and they are brought together on seperate quest Much like Zabuza and Haku or Diz and Riku and they eventually meet at the end of their training to master and pretty understand their powers and purposes
gesutiet...I have no idea what you just said. just kidding! ^.^ I still think the two groups untie...that'd be cool!the_13th_member said:
What if instead of the two groups joining, they compete in a way. Since Daxic and Xana are rivals anyways. The groups always try to get more missions to go on and stuff. just a thought.
brilliant!...but we have 3 pplz, they have 2...DarkSora23 said:
Only problem here is, because the hoods are soaked by the rain, the wind could not blow them back on. It would blow them against the back of their heads.rpgangel said:
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They can get one more org member if they want to.
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