Chapter 1 : Unknown Confession
Sora couldn't hear anything over the rucus of the court room, filled with many a people he knew but alot that he had never met, or even seen for that matter. He could see Donald sitting in the from row to the left of the court alone, hed cept to him self ever since the were arrested by the Universile Police when they started helping with the Hollow Bastion Restoration Commity. And on te right of the room, Goofy sitting next to kairi and Riku. "Here ye, Here ye order in the court!" The judge yelled furiesly punding his mallet on the table over the talking in the background. Suddenly every thing went quiet. "Sora!" said the judge "you are here for illegaly deleting Universel Data on the Tron disk, attacking the Queen of Hearts while going by that worlds law, and medeling in the buisness of many other worlds."
Sora nodded slowly as sweat dripped from his forhead panning the room wth his eyes "I was only helping, they were gonna kill Alice and Tron and all th...." Sora said in defence "You were still medeling, and by the evidence found on page 42 Section 13 you were warned by King Triton, and yet you still went on with it"
Sora whiped the sweat from his forhead, looking down the isle wandering were King Mickey was, he should be here by now "What do you plead?" He asked
"I plead...."Sora began to say when he saw the doors at the end of the isle burst open "He pleads not guilty, and I have information to prove his inocence" King Mickey yelled.
Mickey slowly walked up the isle glancing at Sora than at goofy, fianaly at Donald shaking his head side to side "I have the information right here" Micky said when he reached the judges pedestal placing the folder right in front of him "What do they say?" asked the judge silently to mickey curiouse for the answer "even I dont know" Mickey replied
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This is basicly a test Fan-Fic I made it to see if my Grammer improved at all
tell me if I did any better than my other one
This idea is totely original it may not be my own people but it is still original
Post your thoughts of my grammer if it improved and tell me if this Fan-Fic is any good so far, if so I will keep working on it
Sora couldn't hear anything over the rucus of the court room, filled with many a people he knew but alot that he had never met, or even seen for that matter. He could see Donald sitting in the from row to the left of the court alone, hed cept to him self ever since the were arrested by the Universile Police when they started helping with the Hollow Bastion Restoration Commity. And on te right of the room, Goofy sitting next to kairi and Riku. "Here ye, Here ye order in the court!" The judge yelled furiesly punding his mallet on the table over the talking in the background. Suddenly every thing went quiet. "Sora!" said the judge "you are here for illegaly deleting Universel Data on the Tron disk, attacking the Queen of Hearts while going by that worlds law, and medeling in the buisness of many other worlds."
Sora nodded slowly as sweat dripped from his forhead panning the room wth his eyes "I was only helping, they were gonna kill Alice and Tron and all th...." Sora said in defence "You were still medeling, and by the evidence found on page 42 Section 13 you were warned by King Triton, and yet you still went on with it"
Sora whiped the sweat from his forhead, looking down the isle wandering were King Mickey was, he should be here by now "What do you plead?" He asked
"I plead...."Sora began to say when he saw the doors at the end of the isle burst open "He pleads not guilty, and I have information to prove his inocence" King Mickey yelled.
Mickey slowly walked up the isle glancing at Sora than at goofy, fianaly at Donald shaking his head side to side "I have the information right here" Micky said when he reached the judges pedestal placing the folder right in front of him "What do they say?" asked the judge silently to mickey curiouse for the answer "even I dont know" Mickey replied
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This is basicly a test Fan-Fic I made it to see if my Grammer improved at all
tell me if I did any better than my other one
This idea is totely original it may not be my own people but it is still original
Post your thoughts of my grammer if it improved and tell me if this Fan-Fic is any good so far, if so I will keep working on it
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