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[Unabomber]

reflect reflect reflect text

i'm happy with it.

 

[Taylor]

i don't like the text or the squiggly things off to the far right and left

 

[Ðari]

Too much going on, multiple focal points give it no sense of balance. You don't know where to look, unless its at the text.

 

[Eric]

needs a vignette, that should handle the focal problem.

 

[Malibu]

Oversharpened a bit makes it look LQ.