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Fanfiction ► Bleach: Final Soul (Sign Ups)



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neonleon1616@yah

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Should tell us what the scenario of your story is then
All this time I thought it was gonna be before every thing started.
but yeah i'll change that.
 

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Please don't write part of the story for me in your character profiles.
Its up to me in the end after all.
Please people. Fill out a profile.
Heck, even make a Vizard or Arrancar if you want.
Vizard: Include if you can a pic or description of their mask.
Arrancar: Sword name is in Spanish as well as certain powers.
 

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*points at sig*

yes though I only watch the anime


Name: Uindo Teisei
Age: Looks about 14
Gender: Male

Hair: Green covers his ears.
Eyes: Blue
Height: 5’ 4”
Weight: 110 lbs
Likes: food, being lazy, grassy fields and forests.
Dislikes: Being confined, lots of work, Sake.

Sword Name: Arashi (storm, tempest)

Shikai Activation: Spiral Arashi
Shikai Appearance: His katana is pretty mush the same except the guard disappears the hilt grows longer and another blade appears at the other end of the hilt. (It’s still a single weapon
Shikai Abilities: Besides appearance change, Uindo’s speed increases, his weapon can control the wind, the most amount of wind he can control is a small whirlwind.

Bankai Name: Seishuku Mokushi (Silent Apocalypse)
Bankai Appearance: The appearance is similar to the Shikai form. It has a third balde that appears when needed, usually for long-ranged attacks, Giving Arashi a triangular whenever it does appear.
Bankai Abilities: It increases his speed three times more than Shikai. The most useful ability is when it has the third blade it can turn into a shield. Uindo has even more wind manipulation while using Bankai. He can use an ultimate attack whenever he is near death, something he cares about is in danger, or he lose control of himself he can make a huge tempest. The after effects of using the attack is, at best falling into a coma for a few days at worst death.

Preferred Squad: 10
 

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Well the manga is really good.
I like your character a lot.
This will be very helpful.
It actually makes me think of mine.
It might be in the story at some point.
 

Zero Sora

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By "Ichigo's" I mean characters which are incredibly fast. The latest character posted seems to be another Ichigo.
 

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You're right.
People just aren't too original sometimes.
Its alright though.
I'm writing it so I can do some stuff with it.
You know, tweak it.
 

neonleon1616@yah

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It's not that there ichigos but that the strength in the soul society is always about speed, against every one it's always about speed. What if there was someone slow as hell he would get his ass killed within the first three seconds of a battle against a Soul Reaper, and no chance against an Arancar.
 

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In Ichigo's battle with Renji Something about "You had perfect timing and everything however there is one diffrence, I'm faster than you" Something like that anyway.
Renji relies on power yet..... proof.
YouTube - Ichigo VS Renji part 2/2
 
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neonleon1616@yah

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Correction Renji relies on both power and speed because if he didn't use speed then he would of not lived against Byakuya
 

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I Meant that Renji has a power type Zanpakuto. Ichigo gains speed because he has his giant meatclever turned into a black katana.... bah i give up.
 

neonleon1616@yah

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Well I'm not saying that Renji doesn't have a power based san pak to i'm just saying that speed is a main part to bleach
and thats why a lot of the characters kinda sound like Ichigo
 
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... why were we arguing if we were agreeing that just because some of the characters we created use speed, doesn't mean that they are copying of Ichigo..
 

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Just stop.
It won't be unbalanced in the story.
So everyone can't complain just yet.
Wait till I write some more and then you can hate on the characters.
I gaurantee that there will someone that everyone hates in the story.
 

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I akready have the first chapter u[ but my life has been insane ately so I haven't been able to update any of my stories.
I can gaurantee another chapter up this weekend.

Here is a link to the seperate thread for the story.
Story Thread
 
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