Bhk sat on the giant minute hand of the clocktower in Twilight Town, looking up at the stars.
“Why?” He kept asking himself. “Why did she have to go?” He closed his eyes, tears rolling down his cheeks. He opened his eyes again and gazed at the beautiful sunrise. Lights of houses and buildings started to come on, as the adults got ready for work. He closed his eyes again, flashbacks of the moment coming back to him.
A short blonde haired girl was lifted onto the shoulder of a tall hooded man, while he was being held back by another hooded figure. Seeing her face in his mind as she was being carried away made him want to jump off the tallest building in Twilight Town. He couldn’t stand the pain of knowing she was out there somewhere, unprotected.
At the time he was only 11, so there wasn’t anything he could do. Now, being 14, he swore to do what ever he could to get her back. But when he tried, he failed miserably and returned to Twilight Town. It was useless. He would never see her again….
The minute hand shook and went down. 7: 15. Bhk opened his eyes. Kids were rushing off to school and friends that were home schooled were playing outside.
Bhk stood up on the hand and turned around. He walked through the door on the face of the clock, where dozens of gears were turning and shifting. He walked along the gears, jumping back and forth until he got to the roof. He walked through the door and stepped outside. The cool breeze met him as his foot met the shingles.
“Hello,” a mysterious voice called.
Bhk turned to see a red-bandaged figure balanced on the point of the pole in the center of the pyramid roof.
“Wh- who are you?” Bhk asked.
“If I told you, it wouldn’t be a secret now, would it?” It said with a reluctant smile. “Now come with me, I have something to show you.”
Shimmering golden lines encircled Bhk. Confused and panicking, Bhk tried to move, but couldn’t. They began to rise, fragmentizing whatever was still below them. Soon, Bhk’s whole body disappeared, and he was teleported to a dark, dank room.
“Where are we?” Bhk asked.
The man who spoke before stated, “Why, we’re in a cell of course! Welcome to Castle Oblivion!”
A light came on, and Bhk could see that two rooms were connected with a glass wall in between. He was in one, and eight hooded figures standing around a chair were in the other.
The unknown figure on the end took off his hood to reveal that he was the red enigma from before.
“Who are you people?! What do you want?!” Bhk shouted.
“Call me Diz.” The red one said, turning around the chair. A girl with blonde hair and a bandana tying her mouth shut was revealed.
“Namine’! No!” Bhk cried.
“Give us dominion over you, and you can have her back. One false move, and she will never see you again. What do you say?” Diz said smiling.
Bhk looked at the ground and closed his eyes. “What do you want…”
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Khg: Hope you liked it. Don’t worry; they won’t all be this long.
Dkhg: Hmph. What a boring first chapter of no violence.
“Why?” He kept asking himself. “Why did she have to go?” He closed his eyes, tears rolling down his cheeks. He opened his eyes again and gazed at the beautiful sunrise. Lights of houses and buildings started to come on, as the adults got ready for work. He closed his eyes again, flashbacks of the moment coming back to him.
A short blonde haired girl was lifted onto the shoulder of a tall hooded man, while he was being held back by another hooded figure. Seeing her face in his mind as she was being carried away made him want to jump off the tallest building in Twilight Town. He couldn’t stand the pain of knowing she was out there somewhere, unprotected.
At the time he was only 11, so there wasn’t anything he could do. Now, being 14, he swore to do what ever he could to get her back. But when he tried, he failed miserably and returned to Twilight Town. It was useless. He would never see her again….
The minute hand shook and went down. 7: 15. Bhk opened his eyes. Kids were rushing off to school and friends that were home schooled were playing outside.
Bhk stood up on the hand and turned around. He walked through the door on the face of the clock, where dozens of gears were turning and shifting. He walked along the gears, jumping back and forth until he got to the roof. He walked through the door and stepped outside. The cool breeze met him as his foot met the shingles.
“Hello,” a mysterious voice called.
Bhk turned to see a red-bandaged figure balanced on the point of the pole in the center of the pyramid roof.
“Wh- who are you?” Bhk asked.
“If I told you, it wouldn’t be a secret now, would it?” It said with a reluctant smile. “Now come with me, I have something to show you.”
Shimmering golden lines encircled Bhk. Confused and panicking, Bhk tried to move, but couldn’t. They began to rise, fragmentizing whatever was still below them. Soon, Bhk’s whole body disappeared, and he was teleported to a dark, dank room.
“Where are we?” Bhk asked.
The man who spoke before stated, “Why, we’re in a cell of course! Welcome to Castle Oblivion!”
A light came on, and Bhk could see that two rooms were connected with a glass wall in between. He was in one, and eight hooded figures standing around a chair were in the other.
The unknown figure on the end took off his hood to reveal that he was the red enigma from before.
“Who are you people?! What do you want?!” Bhk shouted.
“Call me Diz.” The red one said, turning around the chair. A girl with blonde hair and a bandana tying her mouth shut was revealed.
“Namine’! No!” Bhk cried.
“Give us dominion over you, and you can have her back. One false move, and she will never see you again. What do you say?” Diz said smiling.
Bhk looked at the ground and closed his eyes. “What do you want…”
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Khg: Hope you liked it. Don’t worry; they won’t all be this long.
Dkhg: Hmph. What a boring first chapter of no violence.
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