So yeah, I was bored, so I thought, "I'm going to write something..." So here ya go. Remeber to post on this about what you think. Also give a score _/10. Try to keep this alive. Thanks. Also give me help about the story, like spelling or even where you think it should go...I'll be editing the chapters occasionally so look for that.
~Between the Rift~
~Prolog~
I stared, motionless, at the empty space, the vortex that connected this world to the next, a portal to another place, another time, another world. This was my exile, exiled into a strange limbo, only able to peer out into my meaningless nothingness. I stared up into the black, swirling sky. Lights, stars, seemed to come alive, only to fade into darkness. I wish that I could repent for my sins, but now it is hopeless, now I am nothing but a shell. Destined to drift into ever darkness. It all started a long time ago…
~Chapter 1: New beginnings~
Blood dripped from my hand; my sword clashed against the floor then fell with a thud.
“You’ll never learn, will you?” the voice came from in front of me. “I’m better, I’ll always be better.” The voice said again.
I looked up at his face, the face of my brother, Kalion. His sharp blue eyes seemed filled with fire and they pierced through my soul like a million blades. He raised his rapier and readied for the final blow, the killing blow. Just before he did, however, a blade hit his. He looked into the direction of which it came. A woman, know to me by the name of Amelia, readied her blades.
“So, the minion finally showed up.” Kalion said with a smirk.
Amelia stood her ground and replied, “You know, Kalion, you shouldn’t pick fights which you have no chance of winning.” She said as she glanced at me.
Kalion glanced over at me and then spat in my direction, “If you hadn’t interfered, I would have.” He said as he turned towards her. “Now, be a good girl and leave.” He said as he turned back towards me. A flash of darkness shoved Kalion to my left. I looked in the direction where Amelia was, she was gone. I looked to my left; Kalion and Amelia were in a deadlock, neither budging.
“Damn you.” Kalion said as he tried to get the upper hand. Amelia said nothing; she just stared at Kalion with intensity greater than any I’ve seen from her. A trail of darkness emerged from Amelia’s aura. It rose above her and struck Kalion, paralyzing him. Amelia drove her fist into his stomach, leaving him gasping for air. She then turned to me and said, “You look horrible, let’s get you out of here.” She took a step towards me then stopped. A silhouette appeared behind her, I took a step forward and almost fell, “Amelia-“ I yelled, too late. The blade had already pierced her heart, blood streamed down from her wound. She fell limply to the floor.
Amelia’s body faded into darkness as Kalion’s blade fell to the floor. Kalion looked around with a startled expression, then he looked at me, “What happened?” He yelled across to me, “Where’d she go?” I stared at him with the same expression he to me. “Hell if I know.” I said as I saw her behind him. He noticed my gaze and leapt into the air, a blade flashed next to his head. He turned, fire dancing on his fingers, Kalion shot the flames towards her. She disappeared and reappeared behind Kalion,” Like I said, stop picking fights you can’t win.” She said as she hammered her fists into his back, slamming him into the ground. Kalion laid still, his chest slowly rising and falling.
Amelia looked towards me, her stance changed to a friendly one. She holstered her blades and stood normally. She looked back at Kalion for a brief second and then glanced at me,
“Now that that’s taken care of, let’s get you some help.” She took a step towards me, yet again, and I looked at her. “You look like hell.” She said with a smile, as she neared me.
I nodded a bit, “Thanks.” I said, as the world faded from my view. I remember falling.
~Between the Rift~
~Prolog~
I stared, motionless, at the empty space, the vortex that connected this world to the next, a portal to another place, another time, another world. This was my exile, exiled into a strange limbo, only able to peer out into my meaningless nothingness. I stared up into the black, swirling sky. Lights, stars, seemed to come alive, only to fade into darkness. I wish that I could repent for my sins, but now it is hopeless, now I am nothing but a shell. Destined to drift into ever darkness. It all started a long time ago…
~Chapter 1: New beginnings~
Blood dripped from my hand; my sword clashed against the floor then fell with a thud.
“You’ll never learn, will you?” the voice came from in front of me. “I’m better, I’ll always be better.” The voice said again.
I looked up at his face, the face of my brother, Kalion. His sharp blue eyes seemed filled with fire and they pierced through my soul like a million blades. He raised his rapier and readied for the final blow, the killing blow. Just before he did, however, a blade hit his. He looked into the direction of which it came. A woman, know to me by the name of Amelia, readied her blades.
“So, the minion finally showed up.” Kalion said with a smirk.
Amelia stood her ground and replied, “You know, Kalion, you shouldn’t pick fights which you have no chance of winning.” She said as she glanced at me.
Kalion glanced over at me and then spat in my direction, “If you hadn’t interfered, I would have.” He said as he turned towards her. “Now, be a good girl and leave.” He said as he turned back towards me. A flash of darkness shoved Kalion to my left. I looked in the direction where Amelia was, she was gone. I looked to my left; Kalion and Amelia were in a deadlock, neither budging.
“Damn you.” Kalion said as he tried to get the upper hand. Amelia said nothing; she just stared at Kalion with intensity greater than any I’ve seen from her. A trail of darkness emerged from Amelia’s aura. It rose above her and struck Kalion, paralyzing him. Amelia drove her fist into his stomach, leaving him gasping for air. She then turned to me and said, “You look horrible, let’s get you out of here.” She took a step towards me then stopped. A silhouette appeared behind her, I took a step forward and almost fell, “Amelia-“ I yelled, too late. The blade had already pierced her heart, blood streamed down from her wound. She fell limply to the floor.
Amelia’s body faded into darkness as Kalion’s blade fell to the floor. Kalion looked around with a startled expression, then he looked at me, “What happened?” He yelled across to me, “Where’d she go?” I stared at him with the same expression he to me. “Hell if I know.” I said as I saw her behind him. He noticed my gaze and leapt into the air, a blade flashed next to his head. He turned, fire dancing on his fingers, Kalion shot the flames towards her. She disappeared and reappeared behind Kalion,” Like I said, stop picking fights you can’t win.” She said as she hammered her fists into his back, slamming him into the ground. Kalion laid still, his chest slowly rising and falling.
Amelia looked towards me, her stance changed to a friendly one. She holstered her blades and stood normally. She looked back at Kalion for a brief second and then glanced at me,
“Now that that’s taken care of, let’s get you some help.” She took a step towards me, yet again, and I looked at her. “You look like hell.” She said with a smile, as she neared me.
I nodded a bit, “Thanks.” I said, as the world faded from my view. I remember falling.
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