Fanfiction ► Between the Rift

[Lycanthrope]

I read to chapter 6 before I realized I already read most of the fanfics...

I thought it is extremely good. Honestly, I don't see where you have a problem with coming up with ideas. I'd say the fic in general is 8/10.

 

[Stavvy]

I just don't know where to go next, I've been writing whatever the hell came to my mind at the time, and at first this was just an experiment. . .It wasn't intended to become what it has, but since it has I continued. . .but I don't even know what a deeper plot would be or really whoever/whatever is coming, I just try to sound like I did know. . .lol . . .so yeah, I kinda dug my own grave. . .

 

[Lycanthrope]

Hmm... try thinking of ways to build up the story and add the climax. Did you try brainstorming before every chapter? Or writing out what your plot was supposed to be?

 

[Stavvy]

Neither lol, I have NO clue where the plot is going. . .(A bad start. . .)

 

[Lycanthrope]

No offense, but, you did kind of dig your grave...

Is tehre possibly some way that you can make a change of events and distort this fanfic to go where you want it to go? At first, Hearts of twilight wasn't going where it should have, explaining how Xonic found out his past and ventured to new worlds, but, I managed to realize early enough that I needed to distort my fic to go in the right direction. It was possible for my fanfic, but, is it too late to attempt that with you fan fiction?

 

[Stavvy]

Not really, I could alway edit some crap. . .lol. . .but if I really tried I'm sure I could get it back on track, wherever the hell that track leads is yet to be determined. . .

 

[Lycanthrope]

Just, don't give up. Don't think of giving up. this is a fantastic fanfiction. The only problem is the lack of your ideas, and your thoughts of quitting. Thinking of quitting this actually clouds up your ideas of what to do with it. Just keep brainstorming, and if you are desperate, I will be happy to help.

 

[Stavvy]

I guess I'll try to think of some sort of plot or something. . .Right now, I have to read this damn book so I can pass my Driving test tomorrow. . .

 

[Lycanthrope]

Alright than. Well, good luck on the Driver's Test.

 

[keybaldeslinger1]

Yes good luck with that and i do hope you continue with this fan fic it is fantastic don't quit on me.

 

[Stavvy]

I know I won't get an update this week, I'm leaving. . .

 

[keybaldeslinger1]

Your leaving eh? I will suffer. =(

 

[Lord_Sora]

Ok, add me to the score. I just dont visit alot.
WHY THE FUNK WOULD U KILL "YOURSELF"?!??!!
To get "back on track", use the time-honored magic of, "B**ch what teh hell u doin' here? Get back in yo body, son! You ain't done yet!" Obviously, not in such phrasing.

And what the hell was with the eggnog crap? I understand where zoophilia came in, but I'm not sure it was intentional... You guys are so wierd. I think that's why I've stayed...xD.

TTYL
P.S.- Transformers was AWESOME. I saw it twice in theaters. I've never done that on my own. Saw them like 4 days apart. lol

 

[keybaldeslinger1]

Transformers was Sweet!!!! And i was also confused about the eggnog deal.

 

[Lord_Sora]

It seemed to me they were implying that humans made "eggnog" (hint, hint, nudge, nudge). Which is where the zoophilia pops into the conversation.

Are you guys that deprived of pleasurable company, that you must resort to such base things?

 

[Stavvy]

Well. . .*Remembers back to the mission trip* . . .umm. . .

 

[keybaldeslinger1]

Lol, I get it now, well......

 

[Thor.]

No you don't I was wondering what the "Eggnog" was about myself when I brought up the dog. . . .

 

[Lord_Sora]

*Cough*

Innuendo.

Enough said.

 

[Stavvy]

Lol, damn Band Camp. . .taking up TWO WEEKS of my life. . .and draining me. . .damn you. . .