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zillagod

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Hey everyone this is my first time posting a piece of my artwork here and this is going to be fully completed sometime tomorrow I just want some critiques so I can change anything that needs to be before it is finallized and to see what everyone thinks of it. So let me know what you think! :D

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Yuuki

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no to sound mean but aqua is too fat...
she needs to be more skinny
 

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The proportions are off; overall, they are too wide. Thin them about a bit, and lengthen and/or reduce the width of their necks. I do like the poses, although Terra's seems slightly awkward.
 

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OH MY FUCKING GOD WHAT DID YOU DO TO AQUA'S POON!!!!! D:

and...she's...she's....FATTER THAN TERRA!!!! D:

nonononono, this can't be! NO!
go fix it!

and..the..huge ass... eyebrows..they're like.. HUGE!


okokokokok soozzzz..
ok here's advice!! omg so awesome! advice!:
ok:
umm. if you drew the circle guides thingy, why don't ya use em? like.. the purpose for that..is for the head. the hair you add additionally...[well i think..iv never used drawing guides or w/e they're called]. like aqua's chin! and terra's head!
the circle is for the head/face itself! then the hair is added... errrr yeaaaah?

ok. i actually like the shape of the faces you do sorta. wel i don't like it but out of it yeah. it's just proportions are just like WOAH. and terr'as has a neck ya know.
 

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OH MY FUCKING GOD WHAT DID YOU DO TO AQUA'S POON!!!!! D:

and...she's...she's....FATTER THAN TERRA!!!! D:

nonononono, this can't be! NO!
go fix it!

and..the..huge ass... eyebrows..they're like.. HUGE!


okokokokok soozzzz..
ok here's advice!! omg so awesome! advice!:
ok:
umm. if you drew the circle guides thingy, why don't ya use em? like.. the purpose for that..is for the head. the hair you add additionally...[well i think..iv never used drawing guides or w/e they're called]. like aqua's chin! and terra's head!
the circle is for the head/face itself! then the hair is added... errrr yeaaaah?

ok. i actually like the shape of the faces you do sorta. wel i don't like it but out of it yeah. it's just proportions are just like WOAH. and terr'as has a neck ya know.

Aww c'mon guys.. use some constructive criticism. I mean, It looks pretty nice, but it can be worked on. good work :)
 

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I think Vens face looks really cute. :3

Also, I can see where you erased Terra's right arm and re-drew it. Draw more lightly before you outline with a hard pencil or pen so when you need to erase you can do so without leaving any marks, and use a clean rubber to avoid marks aswell. Also, as others have said, Aqua is a bit too fat. Terra's arms also look to short in my eyes.

Good luck with your drawing. I personaly like Aqua and Ven's face's.
 

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oh yeah and make terra more cool looking

and godfucking damn she's wearing a goddamn corset looking thing for one!
 

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Thank you all for the constructive criticism, and for your viewing pleasure I present the inked version of this pic. To answer the question about Terra he is supposed to be standing at attention. Either way I will still be making adjustments as I go with my tablet in the computer before I move on to color.

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Terra's pose is akward, and his facial expression is totally out of it. And Aqua looks a bit masculant.
But I really like the detail you put into the clothes
 

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id dont thinks it cuz their too fat, it looks like you didnt have enough room to draw, vert wise...

either way, aqua's boobies should be in comportion to her a--her hips.(censorcensor):lol:

terra looks like someone got him good with amy's mallet from sonic series....:23:

...10+ points on veen's expersion- total moe :36:

greart armor and B-U-T-ful keyblade XD
 
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