Not sure what position, but I'm going to reserve a spot of the Organization. I'll probably reserve spot 10 or 8. I might bring in a Keyblader depending on if I'm in the mood 
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Oh yea!!! I want spot four in the org!
8 and 10 will be held till you know which one you want.
4 will be held, Sora.
4 will be held, Sora.
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Eh Random, I'm almost finished with the template. I just need to finish the Bio and fill in the descriptions of all the Jutsu... possibly a minor detail here and there, but other than that, I should have it to you on Friday.
Should.
Should.
Awesome! Can't wait
Nice!!! Uh... be prepared for a long ass bio...
Name: Zax
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Element: Air
Personality: Has gone insane with power and his lust for more killing. He goes into a trance state when he faces death. He shows no emotion accept for the constant face of hate that is on his face. He hates bright colors. He despises people who have power, but don’t use it. He despise almost all humans.
Appearance: SDL - Jung by *minjii on deviantART
Weapon(s): ???-Never been seen. Usually uses martial arts when he fights.
Lesser Nobodies: Dusk, Dancer, Sorcerer, Assassain.
Rank: Second in Command-IV
Abilities/Magic:
Aero: A weak wind barrier is put around Zax .
Aeroa: A middle level wind barrier is put around Zax. All projectile attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed.
Aeroga: A high level wind barrier is put around Zax. All attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed multiplied and shot back.
Aeroja: An impenetrable (aka really really strong) wind barrier is put around Zax. All projectile attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed multiplied and shot back. All physical attaks that are weaker than it are repelled.
Dark Aero/a/ga/ja: A wind barrier sent from the darkness of his soul. It adds a dark elemental feature to his attacks causing people with light elements to be hurt more than those with dark or neither. It adds a purple color to his barrier.
Hell Aero/a/ga/ja: A wind barrier sent from the devil himself (aka really really dark). It causes the wind around him to have a black coloration. Just being exposed to his opponent’s skin, sends spurts of darkness into their bodies, causing corruption of their hearts. This has long term effects, such as a change of heart from good to bad, or even bad to good.
Tornado: Creates a whirl of wind that lifts objects off the ground sucks them inside, and tosses them out.
Twister: A fierce version of tornado that traps them inside and has a barrage of air blades sent towards them
Whirlwind: A huge version of a Twister.
Air Blade: A slice of air.
Air Boost: An ability that allows him to jump multiple times.
Thunder Cloud: Zax condenses the air causing to clouds to develop right next to each other. They then begin to rub together causing lightning to be made and strike down on his opponents.
Storm: Several thunder clouds fill the air and rain lighting down upon the area whether it be friend, for, or Zax himself. All will be in danger.
Fly: He controls the air and can fly.
Bio:
He lived in an orphanage and always grew up watching other kids be picked to go to families. He had never been sent to a family, not once. This corrupted the little boys heart. By the age of 5 he was stealing from other kids. Their toys or whatever valuables they had. By the age of 7 he had started fighting other kids. The Orphanage realized that and thought that maybe this will spark his interest and allow him to lose some of this evil in his heart. They put him in several different martial arts classes. Each teacher treated him as if he was a son, but one teacher treated him better than all the rest. His name was Mr. Wang. His teacher treated him to lunch, ice cream, and he even gave Zax free lessons. He went to his martial arts classes every day, and soon he became the head of his classes. He was quickly moving up the line year after year. Attending every Martial arts class from 8-9:00 11-11:30 1-2:00 3-5:00 and 7-12:00.
At the age of 12 his first class was canceled. The orphanage didn’t have enough money to fund for the classes. Soon all his classes became that way. When he asked the other masters to train him for free, most of them said no, maybe, or only for a couple of weeks. So he continued throughout the years watching as the only ones that he ever though cared for him dropped him out of their lives like they were throwing away their trash. Mr.Wang continued teaching Zax for free. He eventually taught him the style of many different weapons, such as the Katana, Nunchaku, Spear, Bo Staff, and many more. Even though these were the best times in Zax life Mr.Wang was getting old, and soon his dojo wasn’t making enough money to support the bills. He tried to keep Zax around, and hoped that he would die before he had to do something he would regret. To his advantage he did die.
Some one had attacked him while he was coming home from lunch and his feeble heart couldn’t take it. Zax had not been able to come because the orphanage couldn’t bring him that day. Zax was on his way to the dojo when he saw his master on the ground. Tears began to fall from his eyes like there was a hurricane on his face. He carried his dead master to the dojo, not knowing what to do. Still crying he saw a note in his masters pocket. It said that there was a present for him in the room happy 14 birthday. It was a sword, a katana with a message inscribed into the sheath. Zax Wang, my greatest student, my best friend, my only son. Zax removed the blade and saw that it was a masterpiece. He closed it not wanting to get tears on it.
He heard someone enter the dojo. There were two men. They were searching for something and found a safe behind a painting. They searched it and found a folder labled that said, “Vacation money for me and my son” The man said it out loud and Zax snapped he charged out of the room, towards the men, and killed both of them. Soon the lady from the orphanage came looking for him and ran to tell the authorities. Zax charged after her and killed her to. He then went to the orphanage and killed all the kids there along with the adults that treated him like shit along the way. He left the building and set it on fire. He then waited for someone to notice. Soon the authorities came and Zax charged them without warning. His fighting skills were superior. They were unmatched by all. Soon a squad of ranged fighters came and attacked. Zax skills were to good to die here. He ran deflecting arrows an shurikens and other metal objects until he had come into a range that could kill them. When he finished a fireball came from behind him and consumed him. This was the beginning of a monster.
Name: Zax
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Element: Air
Personality: Has gone insane with power and his lust for more killing. He goes into a trance state when he faces death. He shows no emotion accept for the constant face of hate that is on his face. He hates bright colors. He despises people who have power, but don’t use it. He despise almost all humans.
Appearance: SDL - Jung by *minjii on deviantART
Weapon(s): ???-Never been seen. Usually uses martial arts when he fights.
Lesser Nobodies: Dusk, Dancer, Sorcerer, Assassain.
Rank: Second in Command-IV
Abilities/Magic:
Aero: A weak wind barrier is put around Zax .
Aeroa: A middle level wind barrier is put around Zax. All projectile attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed.
Aeroga: A high level wind barrier is put around Zax. All attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed multiplied and shot back.
Aeroja: An impenetrable (aka really really strong) wind barrier is put around Zax. All projectile attacks that are weaker than it are absorbed multiplied and shot back. All physical attaks that are weaker than it are repelled.
Dark Aero/a/ga/ja: A wind barrier sent from the darkness of his soul. It adds a dark elemental feature to his attacks causing people with light elements to be hurt more than those with dark or neither. It adds a purple color to his barrier.
Hell Aero/a/ga/ja: A wind barrier sent from the devil himself (aka really really dark). It causes the wind around him to have a black coloration. Just being exposed to his opponent’s skin, sends spurts of darkness into their bodies, causing corruption of their hearts. This has long term effects, such as a change of heart from good to bad, or even bad to good.
Tornado: Creates a whirl of wind that lifts objects off the ground sucks them inside, and tosses them out.
Twister: A fierce version of tornado that traps them inside and has a barrage of air blades sent towards them
Whirlwind: A huge version of a Twister.
Air Blade: A slice of air.
Air Boost: An ability that allows him to jump multiple times.
Thunder Cloud: Zax condenses the air causing to clouds to develop right next to each other. They then begin to rub together causing lightning to be made and strike down on his opponents.
Storm: Several thunder clouds fill the air and rain lighting down upon the area whether it be friend, for, or Zax himself. All will be in danger.
Fly: He controls the air and can fly.
Bio:
He lived in an orphanage and always grew up watching other kids be picked to go to families. He had never been sent to a family, not once. This corrupted the little boys heart. By the age of 5 he was stealing from other kids. Their toys or whatever valuables they had. By the age of 7 he had started fighting other kids. The Orphanage realized that and thought that maybe this will spark his interest and allow him to lose some of this evil in his heart. They put him in several different martial arts classes. Each teacher treated him as if he was a son, but one teacher treated him better than all the rest. His name was Mr. Wang. His teacher treated him to lunch, ice cream, and he even gave Zax free lessons. He went to his martial arts classes every day, and soon he became the head of his classes. He was quickly moving up the line year after year. Attending every Martial arts class from 8-9:00 11-11:30 1-2:00 3-5:00 and 7-12:00.
At the age of 12 his first class was canceled. The orphanage didn’t have enough money to fund for the classes. Soon all his classes became that way. When he asked the other masters to train him for free, most of them said no, maybe, or only for a couple of weeks. So he continued throughout the years watching as the only ones that he ever though cared for him dropped him out of their lives like they were throwing away their trash. Mr.Wang continued teaching Zax for free. He eventually taught him the style of many different weapons, such as the Katana, Nunchaku, Spear, Bo Staff, and many more. Even though these were the best times in Zax life Mr.Wang was getting old, and soon his dojo wasn’t making enough money to support the bills. He tried to keep Zax around, and hoped that he would die before he had to do something he would regret. To his advantage he did die.
Some one had attacked him while he was coming home from lunch and his feeble heart couldn’t take it. Zax had not been able to come because the orphanage couldn’t bring him that day. Zax was on his way to the dojo when he saw his master on the ground. Tears began to fall from his eyes like there was a hurricane on his face. He carried his dead master to the dojo, not knowing what to do. Still crying he saw a note in his masters pocket. It said that there was a present for him in the room happy 14 birthday. It was a sword, a katana with a message inscribed into the sheath. Zax Wang, my greatest student, my best friend, my only son. Zax removed the blade and saw that it was a masterpiece. He closed it not wanting to get tears on it.
He heard someone enter the dojo. There were two men. They were searching for something and found a safe behind a painting. They searched it and found a folder labled that said, “Vacation money for me and my son” The man said it out loud and Zax snapped he charged out of the room, towards the men, and killed both of them. Soon the lady from the orphanage came looking for him and ran to tell the authorities. Zax charged after her and killed her to. He then went to the orphanage and killed all the kids there along with the adults that treated him like shit along the way. He left the building and set it on fire. He then waited for someone to notice. Soon the authorities came and Zax charged them without warning. His fighting skills were superior. They were unmatched by all. Soon a squad of ranged fighters came and attacked. Zax skills were to good to die here. He ran deflecting arrows an shurikens and other metal objects until he had come into a range that could kill them. When he finished a fireball came from behind him and consumed him. This was the beginning of a monster.
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Wow that's a horrible past... poor kid >_>
So um clarification: Is he an Organization/Akatsuki/Ninja/something else? Its not very clear lol. He uses Organization magic, yet he he's not specified as a Nobody or a ninja....
I'm kinda confused lol.
So um clarification: Is he an Organization/Akatsuki/Ninja/something else? Its not very clear lol. He uses Organization magic, yet he he's not specified as a Nobody or a ninja....
I'm kinda confused lol.
Most definitely organization...
Wow, Sora! Very nice.
Although his past is kind of depressing...Oh well.
He's in
Although his past is kind of depressing...Oh well.
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Name: Kei Ereamnao
Age: 18
Gender: A rather attractive man if you take the time to look.
Personality: Lots of people have their demons, but Kei can really admit to none, he isn't haunted by his past or future and amends to a very strict notion of a simple trait that people normally refer to as mean. If you do something wrong, Kei will call you out on it. If you look stupid, Kei si gonna tell you about it. Kei is really just an asshole, and he is smart as hell too. Go ahead and try to come at hit and get messed up.
Appearance: Appearance: Kei Ereamnao is living by a principle of a built up ninja that's been through many a trial. He's nice looking and has that crisp look that might as well symbolize what a lot of people want to be like as they get older, or stronger. His face is defined in with high cheekbones, and his complexion is pale, but isn't too tanned either. It seems that his hair has been white for a long time styled in a lovely spike do, the KG he has long ago corrupted the fibers and pretty much started brandishing white hair from the age of 4, but its his eyes that are a bit interesting if you ever get to see what they really look like. both of his eyes are a bright red color, fierce but somehow subdued in nature. Even though the iris is red, the outlying eye as such is a dusty frost of purple, but regularly, you'll see his eyes in their Burakkuai form.
His body is nice and lithe, covered in muscle that isn't overly defined, but nice to look at. So there are a few scars on his arms and back from horrible experiences even within his 18 years, but one thing that is fairly apparent if you see him wearing a shirt-less is the space centered on his chest that glows with unnatural levels of chakra, but his attire normally covers it. A blue body suit with a nice hue to it and then a vested cloak that has a nice high color, colored white and trimmed in areas with black. His lower body has another covering with the same scheme. A spiked headband showing no village sign is on his forehead, and on his feet instead of shinobi shoes, a nice pair of boots colored pale grey.
Rank: ????
Chakra Elements: Light, Pure
Homeland: N/A
Weapons/Items
Genwakukikou (Blinding Armor)- Not that he needs it, but the same format of devlopment was used to build an armor construct that Kei adorns from his chest chakra port. At a molecular level, chakra and materials space out across Kei's body when in use and make a defense that takes heavy damage before breaking, or precise manipulation of chakra to penetrate. Of course, this is not invincible and can be broken, or avoided altogether.
Jutsu:
Senhappa (Beam Blast)- A jutsu that isn't very well know by others, but since Kei began using it, it is also a mark of horror for many people who are unlucky enough to have it used against them. A gathering of chakra from the hands, they are cupped and a mass of chakra is stored there. It gains density and then it is fired from the opened hands with a push of the arms and a beam of concentrated pure chakra races toward the opponent and slams into them causing quite a bit of damage. This jutsu can pierce flesh and combat other chakra's and the charge time is fairly low. This jutsu can be used one-handed or be easily variated. ~Pure~
Hisenhappa (Light Beam Blast)- A large mass of chakra is drawn into the hands and then emitted into the sky where Kei charges another mass of chakra into his hands for the jutsu. As he fires it off, a rain of light falls into the jutsu and widens the beam and gives it a faster speed and increases impact damage. The jutsu now harbors forces that blind those looking at it and also has a pulsing effect as well. ~Light, Pure~
Akarui Tekidan no Jutsu (Bright Grenade Technique)- After three basic hand signs, Kei draws his hands to his chest and a small orb of chakra infused with light is formed. He pushes it forward and then releases a pulse of blinding light that also instantly adds mass to the jutsu and fires it off as a lump of force that has a nice amount of forces in it. the flash can render eye dojutsu nearby useless and upon impact there is a nice sized blast. After this like a grenade there is a small wait and then the entire jutsu blows up again. ~Light~
Tekateka Tekidan no Jutsu(Gleaming Grenade Technique)- A larger amount of chakra is used to make an even larger orb and it glows with fierce light, the chakra inside the orb generates a massive flash that moves outward from Kei and also throws with it a wave of damaging chakra with the previous effects. As the chakra is fired from the chest a lump of light chakra crashes into the enemy or near them and blows up, but as this happens, Kei throws an even larger lump of chakra from his hand that can cause a chain reaction of exploding light chakra. ~Light, Pure~
Bunkou Senhappa(White Light Beam Blast)- Kei leaps into the air, and makes a rapid motioned hand sign collection, before stopping and using what the seals unlocked; Chakra rite ink. He moves his arms rapidly, and draws a six-pointed star in the air in front of him. Light forms in each area that is a point of the star, and in the middle, the colors of course being; red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet. All seven of these blasts fire one by one from the star, gliding down and twisting around the enemy to trap them in a blinding energy blast that can blind, burn, and buffet them. The star crumbles and while the opponent deals with the attack, an large Senhappa of shining white light follows to send an enemy into a state of crippled confusion.~Light~
Forbidden Jutsu
Kurohaji Kire (Dark hold Slice)- One of the most dangerous techniques in Kei's arsenal that involves his Blinding Blade to cause massive damage to a single enemy, or a group of foes that are slightly apart. By ebbing the chakrtic flow through his blade, Kei extends it into a huge sword with a shaper edge on it; the chakra and metal fragments being linked together so that chakra and flesh are damaged at once, causing high physical pain. Kei throws up his hand and traps an enemy, or a single enemy in a hollowed sphere of chakra that on the outside binds enemies to chakra making gravity freeze inside the zone they are caught in, also hampering their notion of time. Before they know it, Kei jumps and rips right through the space they inhabit, slicing his Blinding Blade through it causing massive damage with an extra chakratic explosion as the blade passes through it.
Kozumikku Dageki (Cosmic Strike)- Probably the most horrible thing you will ever see, and more than likely not see again. Kei draws his blade and it goes from a normal looking blade to a ridiculously long gleam in the area that more often than not everybody goes blind as there is no way to calculate the chakratic and meta-physical manifestation of light inside chakra itself. With a single swing of the blade, the entire area erupts with the brightest light that can be ever seen and a change in the particles make it visible to those whom are there for that instant. The light chakra is so completely raw that where it is coming from and what it is doing is meant only for destruction and the entire area including the sky is filled with filtering light that slams across everything, incinerating objects and then stopping. all returns to normal and there is a small spec of light in the sky. It drops instantly and causes an ensuing rippling blast of light chakra that ignites the area in a blast shockwave more epic than life as you knew it.
Kekkai Genkai: Burakkuai (Black Eye)- Probably the simplest name for an eye trait and more ever, the Burakkuai is rather complicated and completely dangerous. Supposedly, the kekkei genkai isn't just for those in a single clan because experimentation with the eye traits and chakra-DNA makes it so that if done correctly the eye trait can be completely transplanted into other people at birth. As of now the activation of this blood trait involves a stemming notion of corroding and then regenerating chakra which mutates the eyes to turn black and also ebb light to reflect back unto darkness which allows for a pitch of black that is not easy to accomplish. Extra chakra develops thin green rings at the very edge of the eyes and black dense hair sprouts from the wrists, shoulder and head, because the corrosion forces growth. Kei represses this with another trait however even though his Burakkuai is active 99.9% of the time.
With the KG active Kei as user can see and ebb chakra through their sight to detect and monitor both movement and chakra flux, able to read and store the notions of these happenings as well and use them later on. Not just the eyes, but the senses can concentrate on movement and chakra from right next to them to a radius of 500 meters, but with chakra and a stemming balance of training and poise, Kei has no problem focusing to do this within 2 kilometers, using daunting concentration to flux his sight through matter in any form and pick up on things with no effort behind it. The ring inside the eye gives a powerful ability in the kekkei genkai; The clarity of objects still, or moving is enhanced by more than 350%, making the eyes keen on pretty much anything that is going on. The ring slowly rotates, feeding information about chakra and automatically looks directly into the body, not at just the chakra stream, but at pinpoint locations where an area is weaker than it should be in a dangerous way. It is possible to see exactly where chakra flows faster through an area, and rapidly attack that location, and cause chakra to surge through the area, bursting apart muscle, blood vessels, and possibly organs that are targeted. In reverse, every notion of the muscle control and reaction time is advanced allowing high flexibility, This is also why Kei is able to move at such daunting and extreme speeds which stem from his underlying chakratic forces.
Kirinonai no Chakra Yurai (Boundless Chakra Source)- An amazing force of chakra that sustains and manipulates, a force can break chakras and form them, wielding underlying cause from naught and an infinity prospect, from the naruverse and fabled elsewhere; Kei uses an indefinitely deep well in his own being and thus has every aspect of his chakra form enhanced beyond the bounds of a singular existence, bridging a gap to the edge of the Naruverse’s embodiment and enabling the use of contact chakra cohesive with an epic awareness from there bound into a pure source of chakra that is quite literally a manifest of pure power.
Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Genwaku Kakuzen (Blinding Clear-cut)- A near infallible kenjutsu style that is rightly developed from the forces that stem from both the Burrakuai and also the Kirinonai no Chakra Yurai. By using the skills from his KG, Kei is able to move extremely fast and embody chakra along all the particles of his blade or any other weapon that he uses. With each blow, he can emit chakra and target points viewed on the body as weaker, or that are even slightly damaged. The practicality of this style allows for insane strikes that can cut lightly or deeply into the flesh and awash the body with chakra that severs ties to everything below the skin at the same time.
Genwaku Taijin'i (Blinding Body Art)- Using the sight of the Buraakuai and the bodies natural forces, Kei battles in intense hand-to-hand combat that involves the invoke of chakra and the pinpoint of nerve locations and chakra points by forcing chakra through them and drawing back on it causing an effect that slows down the reactions and throws off nerve control. Each strike can be light, but at the same time feel as if on ehas been hit with a blow with a lot more force than first noticed.
Fuuin no Chakra Jutsu: Biinasu(Sealed Chakra Technique: Venus)- Though completely possible to accomplish on an opponent in a stable and unharmed condition, one that is tired out, and less likely to fight back as much makes things easier to perform such a high level purge technique. Kei uses a sequential formula of hand signs that ebbs from the well and constitutes chakra that seeks out a naught complex inside chakra.. A hexagonal rune will appear underneath the enemy regardless if they run or move away, and start to work the chakra inside the enemy backwards, severing ties inside their body, ands shutting down the use of chakra for long periods of time, and depending on the level of ninja; the higher the more dangerous the amount of time could be forever. This works just as well to seal away demons, and other forces inside a ninja's body from use as well....
Hokasekenhappa (Other World Blast)- Using a draw stemming from within the well of chakra that Kei can draw upon, and reaching into a plane where the number of those whom can reach it are slim, a mass of chakra appears and then vanishes before Kei draws back his arm and charges chakra there as well. This chakra is all highly destructive and as the completion of this technique is finalized the Senhappa jutsu erupts from the chest space and rushes outward with a mixture of chakra that is immune to damage from all chakra types but pure. Its a seeker and you don't wanna be hit by it.
Hokaseken Tekidan (Other World Grenade)- The well opens and a visible flux of blue chakra spirals around and around Kei until it all is sent to his arm as a heavy construct that is focused on a link into another place. The chakra keeps getting more compact until a lump of chakra is fired off and causes a small blast that rewrites chakra shapes and formats, and then explodes its shell in a grenade effect that at once breaks out into a dome that traps those inside it and mauls them with forces that can kill.
Rasensuisei Rensa (Helix Comet Connection)- Awhile back, Kei learned of the helix notion to build a powerful jutsu and thus far has pretty much mastered its use. He can near instantly make a Rasenseusi and format it to his desires, and change is size, shape and even elemental property and attack with it. Unlike the version that he heard a Sand ninja by the name of Langeki Mithosui is using, Kei's seems to transport itself through another plane and it just appears and attacks those he aims it at.
Youzai Gutaiken (Flux Embodiment) - A simple thought really, Kei uses a perfect flux of chakra to embody his being, meaning he can make replications that are in every way shape and form, Kei Ereamnao. Other than that they can function and act on their own as such, but they come with a limited warranty so to speak. If attacked too many times, they fade away and also release part of Kei that sets off an odd genjutsu like effect. It is also possible to fuse these replications back into Kei as he chooses.
Clan: N/A
History: W.I.P.
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Age: 18
Gender: A rather attractive man if you take the time to look.
Personality: Lots of people have their demons, but Kei can really admit to none, he isn't haunted by his past or future and amends to a very strict notion of a simple trait that people normally refer to as mean. If you do something wrong, Kei will call you out on it. If you look stupid, Kei si gonna tell you about it. Kei is really just an asshole, and he is smart as hell too. Go ahead and try to come at hit and get messed up.
Appearance: Appearance: Kei Ereamnao is living by a principle of a built up ninja that's been through many a trial. He's nice looking and has that crisp look that might as well symbolize what a lot of people want to be like as they get older, or stronger. His face is defined in with high cheekbones, and his complexion is pale, but isn't too tanned either. It seems that his hair has been white for a long time styled in a lovely spike do, the KG he has long ago corrupted the fibers and pretty much started brandishing white hair from the age of 4, but its his eyes that are a bit interesting if you ever get to see what they really look like. both of his eyes are a bright red color, fierce but somehow subdued in nature. Even though the iris is red, the outlying eye as such is a dusty frost of purple, but regularly, you'll see his eyes in their Burakkuai form.
His body is nice and lithe, covered in muscle that isn't overly defined, but nice to look at. So there are a few scars on his arms and back from horrible experiences even within his 18 years, but one thing that is fairly apparent if you see him wearing a shirt-less is the space centered on his chest that glows with unnatural levels of chakra, but his attire normally covers it. A blue body suit with a nice hue to it and then a vested cloak that has a nice high color, colored white and trimmed in areas with black. His lower body has another covering with the same scheme. A spiked headband showing no village sign is on his forehead, and on his feet instead of shinobi shoes, a nice pair of boots colored pale grey.
Rank: ????
Chakra Elements: Light, Pure
Homeland: N/A
Weapons/Items
Genwaku Katana (Blinding Blade)- A blade that with three others, Kei developed and has made using high forgery skills and his own chakra. With such an intense compression of chakra and the finest metals and materials, this is a blade with a simple purple handle that can be just about any size. It is actually a ring on Kei's thumb, but upon usage it builds from chakra flux into a gleaming blade that can be long, thick, wide, sharp, dull, and so on by Kei's will alone. The sword itself is wielded by Kei with extreme precision and when he uses it, those around him are bound to be hurt by it. Just try and break his blade and see what happens.
Genwakukikou (Blinding Armor)- Not that he needs it, but the same format of devlopment was used to build an armor construct that Kei adorns from his chest chakra port. At a molecular level, chakra and materials space out across Kei's body when in use and make a defense that takes heavy damage before breaking, or precise manipulation of chakra to penetrate. Of course, this is not invincible and can be broken, or avoided altogether.
Jutsu:
Senhappa (Beam Blast)- A jutsu that isn't very well know by others, but since Kei began using it, it is also a mark of horror for many people who are unlucky enough to have it used against them. A gathering of chakra from the hands, they are cupped and a mass of chakra is stored there. It gains density and then it is fired from the opened hands with a push of the arms and a beam of concentrated pure chakra races toward the opponent and slams into them causing quite a bit of damage. This jutsu can pierce flesh and combat other chakra's and the charge time is fairly low. This jutsu can be used one-handed or be easily variated. ~Pure~
Hisenhappa (Light Beam Blast)- A large mass of chakra is drawn into the hands and then emitted into the sky where Kei charges another mass of chakra into his hands for the jutsu. As he fires it off, a rain of light falls into the jutsu and widens the beam and gives it a faster speed and increases impact damage. The jutsu now harbors forces that blind those looking at it and also has a pulsing effect as well. ~Light, Pure~
Akarui Tekidan no Jutsu (Bright Grenade Technique)- After three basic hand signs, Kei draws his hands to his chest and a small orb of chakra infused with light is formed. He pushes it forward and then releases a pulse of blinding light that also instantly adds mass to the jutsu and fires it off as a lump of force that has a nice amount of forces in it. the flash can render eye dojutsu nearby useless and upon impact there is a nice sized blast. After this like a grenade there is a small wait and then the entire jutsu blows up again. ~Light~
Tekateka Tekidan no Jutsu(Gleaming Grenade Technique)- A larger amount of chakra is used to make an even larger orb and it glows with fierce light, the chakra inside the orb generates a massive flash that moves outward from Kei and also throws with it a wave of damaging chakra with the previous effects. As the chakra is fired from the chest a lump of light chakra crashes into the enemy or near them and blows up, but as this happens, Kei throws an even larger lump of chakra from his hand that can cause a chain reaction of exploding light chakra. ~Light, Pure~
Bunkou Senhappa(White Light Beam Blast)- Kei leaps into the air, and makes a rapid motioned hand sign collection, before stopping and using what the seals unlocked; Chakra rite ink. He moves his arms rapidly, and draws a six-pointed star in the air in front of him. Light forms in each area that is a point of the star, and in the middle, the colors of course being; red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet. All seven of these blasts fire one by one from the star, gliding down and twisting around the enemy to trap them in a blinding energy blast that can blind, burn, and buffet them. The star crumbles and while the opponent deals with the attack, an large Senhappa of shining white light follows to send an enemy into a state of crippled confusion.~Light~
Forbidden Jutsu
Kurohaji Kire (Dark hold Slice)- One of the most dangerous techniques in Kei's arsenal that involves his Blinding Blade to cause massive damage to a single enemy, or a group of foes that are slightly apart. By ebbing the chakrtic flow through his blade, Kei extends it into a huge sword with a shaper edge on it; the chakra and metal fragments being linked together so that chakra and flesh are damaged at once, causing high physical pain. Kei throws up his hand and traps an enemy, or a single enemy in a hollowed sphere of chakra that on the outside binds enemies to chakra making gravity freeze inside the zone they are caught in, also hampering their notion of time. Before they know it, Kei jumps and rips right through the space they inhabit, slicing his Blinding Blade through it causing massive damage with an extra chakratic explosion as the blade passes through it.
Kozumikku Dageki (Cosmic Strike)- Probably the most horrible thing you will ever see, and more than likely not see again. Kei draws his blade and it goes from a normal looking blade to a ridiculously long gleam in the area that more often than not everybody goes blind as there is no way to calculate the chakratic and meta-physical manifestation of light inside chakra itself. With a single swing of the blade, the entire area erupts with the brightest light that can be ever seen and a change in the particles make it visible to those whom are there for that instant. The light chakra is so completely raw that where it is coming from and what it is doing is meant only for destruction and the entire area including the sky is filled with filtering light that slams across everything, incinerating objects and then stopping. all returns to normal and there is a small spec of light in the sky. It drops instantly and causes an ensuing rippling blast of light chakra that ignites the area in a blast shockwave more epic than life as you knew it.
Kekkai Genkai: Burakkuai (Black Eye)- Probably the simplest name for an eye trait and more ever, the Burakkuai is rather complicated and completely dangerous. Supposedly, the kekkei genkai isn't just for those in a single clan because experimentation with the eye traits and chakra-DNA makes it so that if done correctly the eye trait can be completely transplanted into other people at birth. As of now the activation of this blood trait involves a stemming notion of corroding and then regenerating chakra which mutates the eyes to turn black and also ebb light to reflect back unto darkness which allows for a pitch of black that is not easy to accomplish. Extra chakra develops thin green rings at the very edge of the eyes and black dense hair sprouts from the wrists, shoulder and head, because the corrosion forces growth. Kei represses this with another trait however even though his Burakkuai is active 99.9% of the time.
With the KG active Kei as user can see and ebb chakra through their sight to detect and monitor both movement and chakra flux, able to read and store the notions of these happenings as well and use them later on. Not just the eyes, but the senses can concentrate on movement and chakra from right next to them to a radius of 500 meters, but with chakra and a stemming balance of training and poise, Kei has no problem focusing to do this within 2 kilometers, using daunting concentration to flux his sight through matter in any form and pick up on things with no effort behind it. The ring inside the eye gives a powerful ability in the kekkei genkai; The clarity of objects still, or moving is enhanced by more than 350%, making the eyes keen on pretty much anything that is going on. The ring slowly rotates, feeding information about chakra and automatically looks directly into the body, not at just the chakra stream, but at pinpoint locations where an area is weaker than it should be in a dangerous way. It is possible to see exactly where chakra flows faster through an area, and rapidly attack that location, and cause chakra to surge through the area, bursting apart muscle, blood vessels, and possibly organs that are targeted. In reverse, every notion of the muscle control and reaction time is advanced allowing high flexibility, This is also why Kei is able to move at such daunting and extreme speeds which stem from his underlying chakratic forces.
Kirinonai no Chakra Yurai (Boundless Chakra Source)- An amazing force of chakra that sustains and manipulates, a force can break chakras and form them, wielding underlying cause from naught and an infinity prospect, from the naruverse and fabled elsewhere; Kei uses an indefinitely deep well in his own being and thus has every aspect of his chakra form enhanced beyond the bounds of a singular existence, bridging a gap to the edge of the Naruverse’s embodiment and enabling the use of contact chakra cohesive with an epic awareness from there bound into a pure source of chakra that is quite literally a manifest of pure power.
Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Genwaku Kakuzen (Blinding Clear-cut)- A near infallible kenjutsu style that is rightly developed from the forces that stem from both the Burrakuai and also the Kirinonai no Chakra Yurai. By using the skills from his KG, Kei is able to move extremely fast and embody chakra along all the particles of his blade or any other weapon that he uses. With each blow, he can emit chakra and target points viewed on the body as weaker, or that are even slightly damaged. The practicality of this style allows for insane strikes that can cut lightly or deeply into the flesh and awash the body with chakra that severs ties to everything below the skin at the same time.
Genwaku Taijin'i (Blinding Body Art)- Using the sight of the Buraakuai and the bodies natural forces, Kei battles in intense hand-to-hand combat that involves the invoke of chakra and the pinpoint of nerve locations and chakra points by forcing chakra through them and drawing back on it causing an effect that slows down the reactions and throws off nerve control. Each strike can be light, but at the same time feel as if on ehas been hit with a blow with a lot more force than first noticed.
Fuuin no Chakra Jutsu: Biinasu(Sealed Chakra Technique: Venus)- Though completely possible to accomplish on an opponent in a stable and unharmed condition, one that is tired out, and less likely to fight back as much makes things easier to perform such a high level purge technique. Kei uses a sequential formula of hand signs that ebbs from the well and constitutes chakra that seeks out a naught complex inside chakra.. A hexagonal rune will appear underneath the enemy regardless if they run or move away, and start to work the chakra inside the enemy backwards, severing ties inside their body, ands shutting down the use of chakra for long periods of time, and depending on the level of ninja; the higher the more dangerous the amount of time could be forever. This works just as well to seal away demons, and other forces inside a ninja's body from use as well....
Hokasekenhappa (Other World Blast)- Using a draw stemming from within the well of chakra that Kei can draw upon, and reaching into a plane where the number of those whom can reach it are slim, a mass of chakra appears and then vanishes before Kei draws back his arm and charges chakra there as well. This chakra is all highly destructive and as the completion of this technique is finalized the Senhappa jutsu erupts from the chest space and rushes outward with a mixture of chakra that is immune to damage from all chakra types but pure. Its a seeker and you don't wanna be hit by it.
Hokaseken Tekidan (Other World Grenade)- The well opens and a visible flux of blue chakra spirals around and around Kei until it all is sent to his arm as a heavy construct that is focused on a link into another place. The chakra keeps getting more compact until a lump of chakra is fired off and causes a small blast that rewrites chakra shapes and formats, and then explodes its shell in a grenade effect that at once breaks out into a dome that traps those inside it and mauls them with forces that can kill.
Rasensuisei Rensa (Helix Comet Connection)- Awhile back, Kei learned of the helix notion to build a powerful jutsu and thus far has pretty much mastered its use. He can near instantly make a Rasenseusi and format it to his desires, and change is size, shape and even elemental property and attack with it. Unlike the version that he heard a Sand ninja by the name of Langeki Mithosui is using, Kei's seems to transport itself through another plane and it just appears and attacks those he aims it at.
Youzai Gutaiken (Flux Embodiment) - A simple thought really, Kei uses a perfect flux of chakra to embody his being, meaning he can make replications that are in every way shape and form, Kei Ereamnao. Other than that they can function and act on their own as such, but they come with a limited warranty so to speak. If attacked too many times, they fade away and also release part of Kei that sets off an odd genjutsu like effect. It is also possible to fuse these replications back into Kei as he chooses.
Clan: N/A
History: W.I.P.
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Awesome!
I'll put you just under shinobi till you have a rank. Can't wait for the Bio also
I'll put you just under shinobi till you have a rank. Can't wait for the Bio also
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Frig sakes, what the hell is this? Now, I'm okay with powerful character's, but that's ridiculous. Your character makes even the most complex of actions seem far too simple, and the KG is basically comprised of the most powerful and efficient parts of other Kekkai Genkais. Even Jiraiya and Naruto had to access Sage Mode to accomplish such feats, and even they had their limits. Pain had the most powerful Kekkai Genkai known, and he too, had his limits.
Sure, you've got some great writing and a high eye to detail, but really it just seems like a 'Gary-Stu' to me. 'Badass guy who thinks highly of himself and very little of others.' Luckily, it's not up to me.
Sure, you've got some great writing and a high eye to detail, but really it just seems like a 'Gary-Stu' to me. 'Badass guy who thinks highly of himself and very little of others.' Luckily, it's not up to me.
See, this is now why I'm just kinda not reading anymore than personality and appearance on these guys anymore.
Plz, no conflict. Ubi is one to make pretty powerful characters. He's been roleplaying on this forum longer then both of us. I'm pretty sure he knows what he's doing.
Edit: See, Ten is being a good sport about it
Edit: See, Ten is being a good sport about it
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If there were more explanation for the character, or if it wasn't such a damn gary-stu, or even if the guy had some MAJOR FLAW past all that power--then I'd be okay with it.
But he's got none of that. He's basically a demi-god on steroids (excuse the minor exaggeration).
EDIT: Someone can do something for a very long time and still not notice the flaws in their work. It's about what you can do... not how long you've done it. Trust me, I've been doing this for a long time myself.
Also, this is coming from a writer's point of view, not just an RPer's.
But he's got none of that. He's basically a demi-god on steroids (excuse the minor exaggeration).
EDIT: Someone can do something for a very long time and still not notice the flaws in their work. It's about what you can do... not how long you've done it. Trust me, I've been doing this for a long time myself.
Also, this is coming from a writer's point of view, not just an RPer's.
Not really... I'm just saying that I sort of give up since people don't want to show any weakness. I like flawed characters a lot [see; most of my previous cast has weaknesses, if not all] but, not if they're flawed by not having any flaws.
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Alright, you can take it up with him then. I'm getting fed up with all this conflict! I will not deal with it any longer. Complain all you guys want, I no longer care. I'm not in that great of a mood, haven't been since summer began, to deal with this shit.
And I write too dude. Post all my fanfictions on facebook, and I don't see a problem with Ubi's template. To me, it doesn't matter as long as the character can die if the person quits or says you can kill the character.
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