that's good i want to know what happens next, and who was the man in black?
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So awesome, Eliza. But I wish you would let me beta for you, the chapters aren't that long and wouldn't be much of a hassle. After all, if you check, who made the least amount of mistakes after editing on one of your chapters? So awesome right now...
Now this story has alot of doors opening.
Thank you so much kersha!!!^-^
Well that is the first part of the 4th chapter so just wait a lil,and yeah,you sure can fix the next one^-^:thumbsup:
Eh...I just helped her cos she asked for it anyway, I just corrected the grammar errors and change some things didn't add or quit anything to the story.
Eh Eliza, erm, your welcome but as I didn't know what you exactly wanted for this fic..and as this is not mine I just can't go and change everything you know
Eh..I confused quotes >< anyways let her do the next part I'm just so unable to correct something isn't mine >< but I'm really loking forward to the next chapter